That was really funny. The set up and lead up to the punchline was great. I should suggest a “Comedy” Tag but there were not enough gags the rest of the manga. This manga is well done!

Third place.

I often wonder where the most difficult part of the drawing is for the artist... and I think it would be the bone and neck lines to help get some depth in the artwork. This is a good effort.

The gloves were a cheat for hands and the ears were alright— can’t be too detailed to draw attention away from the kiss. Second and third place were a toss-up this time around.

Second place!

Muscles were a bit a challenge to draw in, the bulbous boobs are a slight turn off (their suits shrank or they drank too much “Drink Me”—ok, I just finished “Alice in Wonderland”).

First Place!

^ Rootin’a’round!

First Place!

Second place!

Third place.

Making sure tail behaves...

First Place!

Huh, with something this messed up, I would expect every chapter to have some outlier tag besides the vanilla kind on this website. I noticed chapter 9 didn’t have such an outlier tag so I put in a suggestion for a tag that it deserves: “Stalking”

If this doesn’t get the tag, I don’t know what mangas should get it.

As for chapter 10, there should be a new tag created for being revealed to public without consent: “Outed” or “...Everybody Knows Your Name—Cheers!”

Good first publication. Hasn’t hit it out of the park, but it will do.

Needs time skipped epilogue.

Glad to see someone took initiative to get it translated and published in english. It will perhaps generate a few thousand copies in sales.

Something this short ought to be put in images.

A cute, minimalist manga.

First Place!

^ Ditto! The thumbnail shot of this looked like it was like two models bring photographed. Lighting, shading, and darker tones further left really made it seem as if it was a photograph. Impressive!

Second place!

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This one is very good, humorous!

Third place. The hidden activity in the artwork made it rise above the rest.

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Hands well drawn, keep up the good work!

Is top an enchanted doll or a robot?

Ok, despite my attempts to have 6 quips, I count the first two as #1 in quality.

^^^^ 1. Frustrated, retired, set carpenters for Laverne & Shirley tv show.

1. The yuri version of SAW.

2. Scientists trying to create “Science Babies”!

3. Mangakas making it impossible for the MC’s to break the fourth wall!

4. Mangakas with a deadline without a clue for a plot!

5. Readers making fan fiction with absolutely no intention whatsoever of posting their work on Dynasty Scans!

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Fill the page with more kisses please!

A classic drawing recalling “Happy Days” tv show.

^ Yeah, it’s like we need a compass or GPS to get our bearings... not finishing Boy Scouts is holding us back!

Nice perspective artwork!

Cute