I found an official summary of this series (specifically, the first volume) on this page. Would a translation of that suffice for use as our own description on the series page?

Incidentally, I believe I figured out what the original Japanese term that is being translated into "Beastkin" is: The aforementioned summary repeatedly uses the term "獣人", which literally translates to "animal/beast person/people".

That summary is very similar to what's written on the back of the first volume. Here's a translation if anyone wants to put it up on the chapter page (I don't know how to change it):

Beastkin, a race similar to humans but with an adorable appearance, are becoming common as companions and partners. A beastkin girl Mel, awaiting a "master" who would one day come to her, is taken in by the beautiful but lonely mistress of a manor. Together they nurture a modest but undeniable happiness. A deep affection is born between protector and protected. In this a gentle and innocent world, a tale transcending the borders between master and servant begins.

獣人, like many terms from myth or fantasy or fairy tale, has no "true" translation. It means different things in different scenarios. For example, the "beastmen" in Gurren Lagann are 獣人, but it can also refer to werewolves, or bigfoot, or other supernatural hybrids like that. Personally, I don't think I ever would have thought of "beastkin" as a translation on my own, but it's what the original translator of the series used, and it's as good as any other, so I just stuck with it.

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I'm kind of getting the impression that this is the final stage of maturity for beastkin. Have we ever encountered or even heard of an adult beastkin? Or male beastkin for that matter? Presumably they must exist, unless they reproduce through parthenogensis or are the offspring of some unholy union between human and animal.

Maybe they just naturally stop developing when they're at the level of a 12-year-old child (both physically and mentally) in which case it would make a lot of sense for there to be a law against human-beastkin romance, since any sexual relations with a beastkin would consequentially be child abuse.

I originally kind of thought that the setting either wasn't really thought out or was just a vague excuse for the animal-ear-loli X onee-san plot to happen. But as human-beastkin relations become a major plot point and more details are revealed, I wonder if there isn't more to it than that.

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Oh, I actually just watched that. It's a good scene, it makes a nice contrast with him murdering two guys in cold blood shortly after.

I'm just saying that I've seen enough people bitching about how "me too" is actually incorrect (as opposed to just awkward or insincere) that I'll give them the benefit of the doubt, and say that in some variety of English I've never encountered, if you answered "I love you" with "me too" people would be genuinely confused as to what you meant.

Edit: sorry, I can genuinely discuss grammar and what "correctness" means in language all day.

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Well, I could be wrong. By "diligent research", I meant "5 minutes of googling", so there's bound to be some inaccuracies in my method.

The response "me too" may seem awkward to "I love you", but it isn't really and no, not because only fairly socially awkward people say it. It works as an informal response such that the person is saying "me as well" to the statement "I love you" which has been generalized. So, even though they're saying "me too" they're actually meaning "I love you as well".

From my diligent research on the topic I have determined that substantial number of English-speakers find "me too" a perfectly appropriate response to "I love you", while others think it's ungrammatical. So to some extent, I believe the question of whether it's a good translation depends on what variety of English you speak. In some dialects or sociolects, it might be a fine answer in any circumstance, while in others it would sound awkward in most circumstances, and in others yet would be wrong in any circumstance. So there might be some cases where the translation isn't wrong or bad, it's just that the translator's English is a little different from the English you know (though of course there are also cases where the translator don't know English good or makes a careless mistake).

Personally, if I said "I love you" to someone and they said "me too" I'd know exactly what they meant: "I too love you." I doubt that anyone would actually misunderstand and confuse the meaning for "I love me too". Someone might say that as a joke, but it's not a serious interpretation of the statement. However, in some circumstances, saying "me too" would come across as insincere.

Advice on usage: when your significant other is feeling vulnerable or uncertain and says, "I love you," in a desperate or plaintive tone do not answer with "me too."

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"I love you!"
"Me too!"

Is there some quirk of Japanese that makes that sound less weird in Japanese or something? Cause it seems to be an extremely common translation but it's also a really strange thing to say.

好き！
私も！

I guess it might be a little too literal, maybe "I love you too" would be better. But the "me too" answer isn't uncommon in English. I've heard people speak like that, and I'm sure I've said that myself, though it can definitely seem awkward when you think about it.

Edit: though now that I think about it, Chidori's awkwardness in answering might make "me too" a more accurate translation in this case.... I'll just give myself the benefit of the doubt and assume that's what I was going for when I wrote this down.

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I think Yoshida-senpai was the girl who gave Chidori the chocolates and that she's similar to the poly girl from AnoKiss who gave flowers to everyone and thats why she says that her love isn't the same as her love.

Yoshida is the girl who's dating Abe. They're mentioned here, they just happened to start dating the same day Chidori and Nanoha did. Igarashi is the one who gave the chocolates to Chidori. She has no relation to Yoshida (as far as we know).

All we know at this point is that Igarashi and Chidori have some sort of history—Chidori was in love with her but felt betrayed and avoided her, and that's why she cut her hair. She didn't confront her until Igarashi gave her the Valentines chocolate, and then she went and returned the chocolate to her.

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I liked the premise but this is just fucking stupid. Nothing makes any sense. It's like a child scribbled this story and then a drunk artist tried to draw it.

You know, the reason cuts in your mouth hurt so much is because your mouth is a nasty place full of germs. If you just use mouth wash, then the infection dies and they heal no problem.

I'd give anyone who tries to forcibly decide what's the best for me a wide wide berth. Emi gets a lot of downvotes because she's doing all these things without ever talking it out with the other party who is directly affected by this: Yuu. It's not good behavior. It most certainly is not a BFF thing. It's selfish. It's all about Emi's feelings, but she didn't consider what Yuu might need. You can be selfish, but you also need to consider what your actions' effects on other people. Keep in mind, Emi's been doing this thing for years. Time is indeed a factor. People mature and learn from experience with age. What did Emi learn? Nada. I already get plenty frustrated when I read mainstream titles where the main protagonist does not mature one bit at all hundreds of chapters later. That's one of my biggest no no when it comes to a story.

I feel like the part you hate is kind of the whole point of the story. Eimi has acted selfishly for years, hasn't learned anything, hasn't matured at all, but Yuu has and now she's turned the tables on her. After years of being trapped by Eimi's selfishness, now Yuu's making the calls. And apparently she's decided that she wants Eimi, and isn't going to accept no as an answer.

It's a lovely story where the two characters cannot resist the pull of their emotions, fall into destructive behaviors, and by the end, when they end up together, they sort of deserve each other, but in different ways. It's a classic tale of a love that, rather than being doomed to fail, is doomed to succeed.

Here’s a question that I mean sincerely—is this one worth it?

Are we dealing with subtle, or just vague and underwritten?

Can’t make up my mind just yet.

I think this story contains everything necessary for a reader to reach the natural conclusion. Eimi's behavior throughout speaks for itself, and then in the last chapter her thoughts (especially regarding holding hands) betray her true feelings far better than her repeated mantra. The little bit of symbolism with the toy is just confirmation.

A work that is so open to interpretation that multiple stories could be read into it as equally valid is vague. To me, this manga conveys a singular story where certain details need to be inferred. I wouldn't even call it "open-ended". The ending has everything necessary to know what will happen next.

Pretty sure Yuu is commenting on her complex relationship with Eimi—on the one hand, she feels trapped by Eimi's meddling in her personal affairs, but on the other hand she's secretly happy about Eimi's obsession with her.

That's an interesting thought, since it's Emi who talks about love feeling painful and suffocating, while Yuu is happy to force it on Emi, if it gets her what she wants. At the same time, Emi's actions definitely put more obvious constraints on Yuu, so she is the one we'd expect to feel trapped.

For most of the story, Eimi's the one who deliberately attempts to isolate Yuu by targeting any rivals in love. Yuu clearly resents her to some degree for stealing all of her potential boyfriends. But Yuu clearly still cares about Eimi or she would have cast her aside. And in the end there is the reversal, where Yuu decides she's in love with Eimi and forces her feelings upon her for a change, and Eimi is still unable to accept her feelings.

Or that's one interpretation, it could also be the case that Eimi is just a really obsessive friend who can't let go, and at the same time someone who's never fallen in love. But I think it's more likely that Eimi loves Yuu and can't admit it. I think there are a number of hints that point in that direction.

???

That protagonist line reads like it belongs to Emi's though? Unless Yuu decided to start doing inner monologue in 3rd person all of a sudden. Did the original read differently?

I've looked at the original Japanese, and that line is definitely Yuu's thoughts. Just like rest chapter 2, those pages are from Yuu's perspective.

For more details, the line reads: けれど　親友に泣きつく私　そのときは主人公だった. "Cry to" is an intransitive verb taking the indirect object "best friend", and that verb phrase forms an attributive clause modifying "I", which acts as the subject (this is consistent with the previous sentences, where "I" was the implied subject). For a phrase-by-phrase translation, you'd get something like "but I, crying to my best friend, at that time was the protagonist," or more naturally, "but when I cried to my best friend, I was the protagonist". I'm not an expert by any means, but I think "I who cries to my best friend" has to be identified with "protagonist".

The line is linking back to the previous line about how Yuu's unceremonious rejection felt like a failure of a shoujo manga. So I'm pretty sure Yuu is commenting on her complex relationship with Eimi—on the one hand, she feels trapped by Eimi's meddling in her personal affairs, but on the other hand she's secretly happy about Eimi's obsession with her. It makes her feel validated to have such a cute and popular friend so fixated on her and her alone. So those lines are consistent with the rest of chapter 2 and the developments in chapter 3.

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https://safe.yuri-project.net/res/22774.html

I've translated 3 and someone says they're working on it.

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Can't stop thinking about that one scene in Re-Animator.

That was pretty good. Even though Eimi wasn't ready, Yuu went ahead and made a move for her.

Well, looks like someone's caught feelings.

I know, I know ... but just imagine how disgusting this would be as het ^^;

It'd still be funny if it was het.

I know that's the whole point. I'm just saying I empathize with crested ibis here.

I was a child who said "r" and "l" as "w". So "lion" and "Ryan" were both "wian". But just because you can't pronounce the difference between two syllables doesn't mean you can't distinguish them.

This is just beautiful.

Raws for 13 just popped up!

Sweet. Thanks for the tip. I'm not sure if Yuri-ism is continuing this project, but if they're not I'd be happy to translate if someone wants to edit.

Yay, more Ootomo Megane!

This couple looks so much like Motoko & Keiko that is feels like I'm reading a prequel.

Isn't this the same Miyu from the third chapter there? So either Miyu and Aya break up, or Miyu and Ao never get together, depending on which one of these is chronologically first. (Or Miyu's actually a secret player)

(Oh, or maybe the "Too late" is because she's already got herself another girlfriend.)

She looks similar, but acts completely different. Plus she has a different name. In Gaze the girl is Hiraga Miyu, in The Two of Us the girl is is Okazaki Miyu (in Japanese even the first names are different—in Gaze it's spelled みゆ and in The Two of Us it's spelled 美夕). Also, in The Two of Us, there's a strong impression that Aya has been sticking to Miyu for a long time, whereas there's no sign of her in Gaze. Plus the two Miyus go to different schools, as you can see from their uniforms.

I think the author just reused a given name and basic character design (Ootomo Megane's characters tend to all look alike anyways), but they definitely aren't the same person.

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This kinda needs a sequel, as it didn't resolve anything.

I think it ends on a decidedly hopeful note. Both of them have resolved to change, in their own ways, and as a result are building up some degree of trust and mutual acceptance.

I think the point here is that Miyu is a scared and withdrawn girl with strong defense mechanisms. She can't believe that Ao would like her, and she's afraid of being hurt, so she reacts defensively by impulse. The way she acts when confronted by the other girls really tells you everything you need to know about her. She's terrified but she also refuses to back down, and seems incapable of taking the easy way out. In some ways, she reminds me of me when I was in high school, when I thought any display of vulnerability would lead to betrayal and mockery.

However, Ao is clever and realizes that Miyu isn't truly rejecting her but is merely afraid. She realizes that her flippant attitude is part of the problem and resolves to gradually win Miyu over through displays of sincerity.

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