I actually thought this was generally well written, but the "last-minute loser boyfriend reveal" trope should be put to rest.

last edited at Jun 18, 2017 5:40AM

Ingenious tea and tea brewing analogies. This story should be shown in university classes.

There is something exceedingly uncomfortable about seeing the tags Comedy and Rape in the same story.

The work as a whole is a comedy, but that scene wasn't intended to be funny

Wouldn't the rape tag apply to the first chapter as well? (Not defending Lulu's actions here)

The title should be spoiler tagged

Okay.

I was gonna question how they're lying on the surface of the water like that, then I remembered they're ships

Wonderful

^Now that you mention it, it does seem a little funny. Either it's a translation error
( supposed to be "SHE'S beautiful now!"), or the younger grandma got confused and assumed the granddaughter was talking about her instead of her partner

last edited at Jun 14, 2017 5:40AM

Cute

Instant classic shoujo-style yuri. The kind of story you wish and fantasize about happening in real life, but usually never does.

Sayaka knows she looks good, she's laughing at Kyouko's nervousness

In one of the eye catches we saw Waltrud in bed with a silver haired woman, but do we know it was Edytha?

It actually does show up on the main part of the page, you just have to scroll down to the actual release day, which could be on a previous page

It's disturbing how accurate the art style is

After how disrespectful Tsubasa was to Nico, I was really hoping the writers would let Nico get one over on her, but it never quite happened. This would have been a satisfying twist

last edited at Jun 6, 2017 11:53PM

^ How about the fact that no one refers to their sister as "Lady"?

Unusual to be sure, but not impossible

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That particular point doesn't quite work as evidence as it's actually translated from onee-san

Lmao

last edited at Jun 6, 2017 7:46PM

I'm surprised they weren't sisters

Is there any evidence proving they aren't?

last edited at Jun 6, 2017 7:57PM

FAKEEEEEEE. This is so fake. Madoka would be dominating the the entire Homu Burger store from the get-go and not letting anyone else have a taste of them delicious burgers if this was the real deal. I demand a refund.

I think that's exactly what happened, and why Homu Burger had to close down.

^The perspective and coloring of the box and its ribbon are undeniably suggestive of an actual heart. I think it's a visual metaphor

Very sweet, I like this artist's Strike Witches fanfics too.

Problem solved, series over

Yayaka must be just miserable in that cramped bath!

Infatuation is a cruel thing indeed. It's interesting how open ended this series is, with a marriage that seems nice but not unimpeachable, and a forbidden love that seems improbable but not completely so. I hope Uta gets a happy ending.

This was silly