Lot of criticisms here . . . incest, rape, weirdness . . . Taking those on board, my conclusions about the most prominent, for me, aspect of this story:
It was hawt.
I don't understand the voice lowering. Are they robot's? :3
Someone's eye got eaten in another one and this is what you're questioning? It's just that sort of "supernatural elements in otherwise 'realistic' setting" type of story.
No the whining and frothing at the mouth of people about age gap again and "OMG she's a minor, she should only have sex with someone close in age, or better yet, wait 18. Or even 21. Or until she's married".
This is tiring and just makes a blanket witch-hunt on all age gap stories, even though some of them are really well thought out and beautiful. If you want to complain about age gap, go comment on Oshikko Sensei.
This is not a story condoning to sleep with a 16yo when you're 30something. The main character here is perfectly aware that it was a mistake and thought she was older. She was never in a position of authority over her, and the girl is at the age of consent of most countries. End of debate about the age gap.
I can see a trajectory in that story where both the woman and the girl heal and mend each other, through mutual attraction first and genuine love eventually. They already slept together. What's done is done. And I think the doctor isn't going to repeat that mistake.
So cute!
I'm not mostly a doujin person, but I've become very fond of NanoFate. I've never even seen the anime, but I feel like I know them better than most characters in series I've actually read. Always good to see their happiness together!
I know what you mean!
Though for me its the many characters of the Touhou Project which I understand to be a game. But there is just so many fan works out there that I can truly see all sides of their personalities.
The admiral's selflessness reminds me of a folktale, though the name escapes me. The protagonist gives away everything they have to those that need it until they are left with nothing. If I recall correctly, it doesn't end well, though I'm glad this story has a happier ending.
I think it was "The Giver" or something along those lines. The man gave everything he had away, ended up an eyeless head, and cried when someone finally said thank you.
