This manga was pretty cool, i really enjoyed it ^^ (Not in sexual way(?) xD)
But i have one question. Why are some mangas pink? (Like this one for example) is it some error or marking it as adult content or something?

I want Tsumugi and Chinatsu together >-<

These 3 chapters were added here 3 years ago.. Is it still ongoing or dropped?

So uh.... Is this still ongoin'? :)
I'd like to see moar ^^

Basically, the general rule of First Love, given the title. We talk about canonical literature, music, texts, etc. These are all a sort of "general rule" of things that should be read for criticism and history.

Oooh. Now i get it.. Thanks :)

Anybody else thinks that Kiyo x Nanao wouldn't be so bad?

I sure love Kazuma Kowo's art. Even if it's not always perfectly refined, there's something about it...I think it's partly how she does eyelashes/eyes, and the way she does expressions in general. Really good stuff.

Rereading Pure Water Adolescence also reminded me of how good it was. In general, I think I like the art in her later oneshots better...and I didn't like Sayonara Folklore much, but in terms of writing Pure Water Adolescence is pretty impressive due to the defined and thoughtful way Kazuma explore's its themes. In that regard, some of her later work can't really compare...

There are other differences like the way Kazuma has kinda stopped using chibified versions of her characters in her later oneshots...sort of reflects her development as an artist, I guess. In any case, her stuff is quite good in general, I like it.

Yah, Kazuma's art is really good, and you're right about eyes and eyelashes, i wasn't sure myself why i was so immersed by the drawing :) Thanks for pointing that out ^^
I'm re-reading PWA too xD Well.. It's pretty hard to draw some mangas and i'm sure everyone knows it's hard to draw the same when you have more experiences, different feelings/moods and stuff :)
Are you sayin' that you want to see more chibified versions or that you're glad that there's less of them? o.O
Uh.. I also like it :)

I have one stupid question: At chapter "Firts Love Canon", it's practically about canons, what the fu*k is canon? I know just that weapon (cannon) but it kinda doesn't make sense?

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Aw maan..

I want continuing for this story (too xD). Does anyone know if there's somethin' like it? It doesn't need to be drawn by Kazuma Kowo :)

Somehow i want continuing to this! :D .. It's just sooo cute! ^^

Booring - -'

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I love the story about the Mermaid girl and Myuu is sooo cute! :D

There's mistake on page 18, or i think so... There's "You were the one who up and disappeared" Who up? :D

I wonder.. Why Izumi is calling her mom "Shimako-san" instead of mom?

Mangas from Hiyori are trully great.
I don't like when main characters have familiar names. I keep forgeting who's who..

Sr for just jumping in. I just want to say this manga has a pretty good story to begin with and till the end. But somehow, I kind of hoping for the adult level or just a little bit more kissing and gasping ( :D ) even though the characters are still pretty innocence.

Yah, i know what you mean ^^

Screw that.. Dunno how to upload it - -' :D
And someone is already editin' that so nm :)

Ah, thanks :)

I really like Chinatsu x Akari. It's pity that China doesn't think of Akari as her loved one but i hope she does xD

That sounds like sarcasm :D

I have a bad feelin'.. Even though it's 1st April, i'm still scared. I have no money to pay, i'm poor student - -'

Dunno but i'm doin' the last page and i still would be glad if you would look if it's acceptable or not :D .. After all that work. If it's not acceptable then you would have to find someone else until i learn how to Edite properly :)

Done Editing 9 chapter o_O .. What now? :D
How can i uploade to Yuri Project to se if they'll approve my editing or not?

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If you're not afraid of learning new packages I would suggest trying either GIMP or Paint.NET.
They are both quality open source (free) alternatives to Photochop.

Damn.. I would love to edit the manga and have pleasure of the new chapters but.. Aaargh. Okay, i'm gonna learn it sometime. I hope you won't be mad at me for havin' a bad editing skills :D
Btw. Since i'm almost done with the 9 chapter, can i just try to send it to them and later (with the next chapter i'm gonna edit) learn photoshop/GIMP or Paint.NET.?

Fuck it then :D
I'm almost done with the chapter 9 but i didn't exactly fullfill the conditions for SFXs (Like puttin' the text right beside the SFX and have similiar text of it and stuff) and i don't know how to do the credit page. I looked up the program which i'm usin' it's just a simple "Paint" and i don't have Photoshop or anythin' as good as that.

It's kinda weird to start havin' conversation about future in middle of the sex and then continue like the mood didn't change - -'
And am i the only one to think that rolling out of bed like Yumeno-san did is cute? :D

Dammit :D I keep repeating the scene with "Just a little bit, okay?" how she undressed herself xDD

Can i download the chapter 9 and 10 and then put english words in the right bubbles? o_O .. I've started doin' that yesterday. It doesn't look so bad, even thought it's my totally first try. I don't know which program or which style of writing to use, so i'm just doin' it in "Draw" and i choose random style - -'

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