I find the fact that Vivio would ask the question of Nanoha and Fate being lovers, and possibly finding weird odd. And also a tough premise to swallow, since Nanoha and Fate are the only parents she's ever known.
After all in the canon it seems the closest thing she has to a father figure is Zafira, while Yuuno is just seems more like that cool old dude your parents are friends with who is fun to be with.
So honestly, while this dounshi is sweet, I find the whole concept hard to swallow.
I agree, the premise doesn't fit very well with Vivid, the culture of their world, and the fact that almost everyone is a lesbian in this series, not to mention that NanoFate should be marrying around the time this doujin takes place. Nevertheless, this doujin makes for a sweet story about a child in a family with two mamas and lots of love, the world knows we need more doujins like this in general.
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