And Momo deserves all of this, go for it.

What did she do? Momo is a sweet girl. It seems to me she's a better option than the OP yandere.

Yup I fully agree with this. Momo dotes on the only person that ever showed her kindness, and Momo would do anything for her including die for her. The fact that the author went "Hey I'm gonna have an OP psycho Yandere fuck her over just because" really pisses me off as I've previously said in other comments. Momo grew up with her and this Yandere is just some asshole that showed up in this world one day, the Yandere can take 500 hikes over the moon.

It basically says to me "you better not care about Momo or any other character in this series now, they're just this annoying Yandere's playthings".

Edit: Also Momo doesn't have to be the chosen love interest necessarily, but the fact that she gets screwed over for no good reason by an asshole Yandere just doesn't sit well with me. Having Momo end up happy is what she deserves, even if it's with someone else.

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Okay, so it looks like MC-chan wasn't actually just playing everyone all along--she has a time-traveling, reality-hopping yandere version of herself that is going around and seemingly puppeting her body at key moments and making her forget, leaving behind only a sense of deja vu and her feelings of love for Menou-chan. Who also seems to be a total asshole to other people. Those ribbons were really important to Momo.

So she has a time ghost yandere doppleganger whose influence is making her fall in love with Menou-chan. I'm re-sold, I take it all back again. I love this now.

Haha well that was fast, you pretty much love it for all the reasons I don't, and it seems like other people are also loving it for similar reasons. More power to everyone who is enjoying it I say, for me the whole thing feels like a weird creepy power trip and I despise shitty characters that act like total assholes and nothing bad happens to them. They just win and that's it.

Easily one of my top 5 least favorite writing tropes, and I have a strong feeling that she'll never get a reality check or some karmic justice. It's just going to continue with her being increasingly shitty, while she fucks over characters trying their best like Momo, all because of petty asshole reasons. Which I guess some people love and I just don't get it, but hey as I said more power to people that are enjoying it.

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That's amateur fanfic-level writing, at best, and lazy delaying tactic, at worst.

Yeah I'm really starting to get that feeling here. The first few chapters of this were really good, setting up an interesting twist with the male isekai protag-kun getting merc'd and then the kind of heartbreaking dynamic between the two main heroines. It had all it needed to be a powerful, emotional story with just those few details--the innocent girl who perfectly trusts her savior, and the tortured girl with conflicted morals who has to look at her smile and know what she's doing. It's a really strong setup, and was a really interesting take on isekai genre stuff.

But as things have gone on... the pacing has gone completely out of whack, and like Koveras said it's being handled in a very amateurish way. It feels like the author is throwing in new details, powers, or characters for every fight and just putting in the stuff they came up with that they thought was cool, rather than slowly giving us more insight into the mysterious and intriguing power system they'd already set up, with the result that we don't know the stakes or power levels and it feels a little like the author is just telling us about these cool ideas they thought up rather than designing the story for readers. And I see the same thing happening here with plot details, too.

It really feels very undisciplined or insecure, like the author didn't believe in the power of the story they were telling and decided to add Plot and Things Happening. I'll keep reading, and I'd love to see myself proven wrong, but this is shaping up to not be the quality of story I had thought it to be.

Yeah...I said in my previous comments I was wanting to just turn my brain off and enjoy the series for a fun action Isekai romp with Yuri, but at this point I honestly am struggling to do even that. So I find myself agreeing with you and other critiques people have made with this series at this point.

Everything right now feels so messy and I thought this Church fight might be at least fun...but this chapter was so awkward and having a time control character that can just basically instantly win everything (IF the author randomly wishes it), along with manipulating everything to her favor...including the super fucking petty action of stealing another girl's gift...at this point it's all extremely unpleasant to me. The series for me at least quickly declined from it's fun start unfortunately.

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^People are probably still going to meme about it if we're being honest lol

And Momo deserves all of this, go for it.

Wait what did she do?

I'm not honestly not a fan of the this girl being pretty Yandere, it was weirdly jarring...and it makes me lose interest in the possibility of them becoming a couple.

^I've always viewed Nero as a switch myself. She's confident and can take change, but she's also willing to let the right person take charge as well.

Geez, how did them parents react to all that yelling?

Parents don't exist unless specifically required for a scene or two.

In fairness it's better for the parents to not interfere. Their daughter was feeling like shit for awhile and now she's sorting something out with a friend.

I think Liane found her comfort and healing zone in between Ruri's breasts. Completely understandable.

Anyways, thanks as always for the translation! Loving the series a lot so far <3

Geez, how did them parents react to all that yelling?

Better question is how will the parents react to the sound of all the sex next chapter?

(Joking of course, please don't kick my shins :P)

With "you're cuter now that I helped you..." I was referring to the times Fujishiro called Kurokawa cute before this chapter. Example. I was specifically making the point that this is the first time Fujishiro didn't use or imply any caveats. And that this is a good thing!

Ah okay, I see I was misreading what you were saying originally. Apologies for that, for some reason I thought you were saying Fujoshiro's words from before were still lingering in this chapter, where as I think this chapter moves on from that previous narrative. So it sounds like we're actually in agreeance then haha

Edit: Also yeah I think this chapter does a nice job of saying that Kurokawa is Fujishiro's princess regardless of how she looks. Altering your appearance can be nice, but the people who really love you won't only love you if you look a certain way.

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Not satisfying, at the end, it still never truly reckoned with the gross internalized sexism of these girls, and if anything it vindicated it.

Yeah, maybe it would have been nice if they had done that; if you mean e.g. that Kurokawa was never "ugly" just because she didn't put as much effort into her appearance as Fujishiro.

The fact that this time Fujishiro called Kurokawa beautiful without any caveats like before ("you're cuter now that I helped you and you don't look like a nerd anymore"), and called her her princess, is not quite the same as explicitly addressing the themes regarding beauty or sexism, but it at least shows that Fujishiro sees Kurokawa in a completely different light than she did at the start.

Yeah I'm not getting any of the "you're cuter now that I helped you and you don't look like a nerd anymore" aspect from this chapter at all. Fujishiro originally didn't know Kurokawa's trauma and thought helping her with her physical appearance was what she needed, but in this chapter Fujishiro realized Kurokawa just needed to be loved for who she is. It's not like Kurokawa is covered in makeup or anything in chapter, she simply looks like herself.

I'm also not really seeing the sexism here as beauty isn't gender exclusive, and people regardless of gender often flaunt their physical form to make others feel bad. I can tell you right now that one can write a nearly parallel and identical narrative as this with a Yaoi story. Hetero as well.

Not satisfying, at the end, it still never truly reckoned with the gross internalized sexism of these girls, and if anything it vindicated it.

The what now

Yeah I'm also completely lost here...just...uh what? o_o

This was an all around great chapter, just getting everything out there and saying everything that's been mentally polluting her.

WOW!!! I didn't feel anything...

Honestly, the last 2 chapters're lame, clichéd and cringe

Well I definitely fully disagree here, at the very least about this last chapter. Plus cringe is such an over used word lately, and I think it's used especially poorly in this instance where the character is fully expressing everything that's been weighing on her mind.

People communicating and expressing how they feel is genuinely important. Even in relationships that are platonic friendships, and family of course.

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Sometimes you just have to roll with the punches, she better take her to the fireworks :P

^I think there's been a decent amount of discussion on this topic here before, but my thoughts remain the same for the most part. Tall Mudrock would be great, but I don't mind that idea that Mudrock uses her arts to make mud armor that the suit goes over. Both options are great in my eyes, just for different reasons.

Holy fuck this is fantastic. I love seeing more Hakuno x Nero Yuri, though I wish it was uncensored but that's alright.

I suppose this is an equally good alternative to getting oral.

This is canon and you can't convince me otherwise.

Dragon scritchs are the best.

Selfcest threesome route unlocked? I would actually find it hilarious if she ends up dominating both senpai and her younger self.

I'd like to sign up for a reality where this happens, please and thank you.

^Aye, welcome back KyoAni. I'm so happy to see them back, the tragedy that hit them only 2 years ago was so incredibly painful and heartbreaking.

This is super hot, the eye contact and ass grab is perfection.

@Norainhere RW is talking about debut stream. That's considered their "official debut". Where you get to really know them and they go through various things they like and dislike, what kind of stream plans they have and so fourth.

Edit: Though apologies if you were just joking around, I was hoping to give some helpful information in the chance you aren't haha

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Oh yes the gayness grows. I hope they can have a proper talk and sort out any misunderstandings. I'd be very happy if they confessed and started dating next chapter, and I mean hell if we're going all in here a kiss would also be nice :D

By the way, should I be concerned that I feel such intense pride of a fictional character figuring out their sexual orientation all by themselves in such a simple way? I think I've grown way too attached to this story

I wouldn't worry about it. Deep investment in stories and characters is something I think many people relate to, and part of the power of an author is the ability to make their audience emotional.