The development has been good so far. This has a lot of potential but a number of very uninteresting follow ups to this chapter do spring to mind and while they aren't horrible directions, they would probably rate as "just ok" in my book.

Man. I could stare at this all day! remains here as several days pass
oh. And reading the yuri detective work in comments here is always fun. Happens with the characters in my current profile pic a lot too.

Insightful and awesome as always. Sis is such a sweetie.

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Pinky more responsible than at least half our lead characters? Tsk tsk!
And that poor guy confessing at a bad time. well. Crazy the effects a LEGIT misunderstanding can probably have on us. Not to be confused wit those forced misunderstandings that result from lazy writing. Not something we find in this story much at all.

that was kinda neat. So was the Detroit and IOS jokes in these comments.

Good read. What Nezchan and elevown said about the cheating thing. Ah. My work here is done! No but that was really good!

While that ending came up kinda fast that was still a really enjoyable read. Watching the defensive reaction of denying the attraction to her gal pal dissolve into a very rational "maybe" was very awesome.

heh. Don't know how you could make a love triangle I'd be down with but the small role played by the ex was refreshing.

Wow. These characters are terrific! And I love delinquents. This one in particular is especially awesome. So many little sides to her all rolled up in a ball of very believable. She's rough and can take a bump but needs others to apply disinfectant leading the that scene? Gold!

I do wonder how much school she's missing and why though.

The early interactions were so great too. Very matter of fact. The other gal is plenty complex too. oh. So fun!

And the designs! the jacket freaking rawks!

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This story really didn't work for me. can't put it into the words. the whole, guess I'll start drinking was kinda off putting too. Not that I'm against drinking or anything. Just the way it was used in this story made it seem like a flimsy plot device.

Can't quite word how much I enjoy this story. So many little touches. Lots of little bits of originality. Can't say the secret relationship from friends does anything for me though.

Nice art. Kinda like them even though my brain is starting to wonder if these lesbians can truly be this useless.

Can't get behind this art style but everything else was really good. 100 points just for putting in yuri-supa-heroes!

I kinda like the idea of the lead falling for someone and not getting with that person for (insert whatever reason) and taking this experience into the next relationship. just me though.

Damn! That was one of the coolest things I've ever read on here!

Nice! Really want more of these two!

Nice. Really wish there was a continuation. Both characters seem like an interesting pair.

o.0 really? Where'd all those smooth lines come from all of a sudden? yuri hammerspace? This was a nice read at any rate.

This was a little wild but fun. If there is more, I'm hoping there isn't a serious love triangle or any other shape. It seems to be have been resolved with one being a teacher. And married now. But who knows.

This seems promising. Really liking the the tomboy trying to make sure she isn't just hearing what she wants to hear in regards to the girl she's crushing on.

Ah! Still going eh? I think about this from time to time. Very interested in how it ends. The art seems very fitting.

This is pretty chill. Got nothing really to complain about. gonna keep my one nitpick to myself and . . . incoming tsundere! For all my pickiness, I'm a sucker for this character type.

https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/selfish_girlfriends#8

What the fuck! I think they re joking but that's not something you say to your girlfriend, that would hurt... You could try helping her get better at it, like, its half your fault if you don't cooperate, wtf that's not encouraging at all.

I don't disagree but some people are probably like that. (blunt about what is likely considered sensitive things) so it was kinda interesting that it was included. sigh. Poor gal.

These stories were very interesting. A little funny. A little sad. Wish there was more of them!

This was a terrific read!

huh. Well. It had my attention! Wonder how much longer this could possibly be.

Didn't like where that went. At all. Intro seemed promising too.
but s#!+ happens and people probably fall into romantic relationships almost every kind if way. I'ma try to be respectful but I definitely have no interest in a sequel and . . . I bookmarked this to read later without noticing the molestation tag so the fault for that is with me.

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