I like it when there's such a combination of decently thought out plot (read: reason for this to be happening) and SEXY. I also love QB's antics in the end.

I definitely could have gone my life without reading that one, but the thing with Vivio at the end was great.

"Time to clean up after the party. Oh, you're still here?" BAM, sex.

Don't like "story within a story" stories, its really putting a dampener on this for me

I actually think this particular story in a story really parallels the main one and enhances (my) understanding of the main plot.

I love how it starts with a totally cliche yuri setup then turns around and throws some weird unexpected punchline at you.

well that escalated quickly. then again it always seems like that when it comes to porn.. .-.

That's exactly what I was thinking before I even got halfway through.

That was so intense! There's already so much potential built up in this first chapter, I'm super excited now...

I can't get enough of the reaction faces on page 19. I just keep giggling!

I must agree myself. The comedy and curiosity have me hooked bad.