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Aww, it's too short :(

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Image Comments 09 Feb 05:54
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Satsuki sure has an active imagination

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Image Comments 08 Feb 23:42
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Kotori may not approve of EliUmi, but I do :D

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Image Comments 08 Feb 23:40
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I'm surprised Homura didn't get a massive nosebleed and instead clenched her fist so tight it's bleeding.

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joined Sep 11, 2014

I didn't even know the name of Saejima's partner. Kudos to Mira for this.

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"Give me an extension on my tuition or I'll sex your mother"
Ha!

At least she didn't asked for free tuition until she graduates.

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If you're good enough in English, I'll gladly ask you for help. :þ I'm gonna do Chapter 20 today.

The one that closes on our track team girls? I do sincerely hope it ended on a good note since they are the only pairing that I find tolerable.

Btw from the cover page that you sent me via link I've just notices that the whole manga was akin to a huge play (at least that's the way I see it), thus the jumping around from couples from couples is like changing scenes in the play, which might explains why the cast are linked to each other, one way or another (also, ch. 18's front page shows another "actress" stepping into the stage). Still doesn't explain why the "play" focuses more on the "supporting cast" rather than the "lead", but I now suspect that everything eventually leads up to a grand finale focusing on the "lead". Perhaps like a time skip that shows the couples in their future lives. In the end, it's all just my theory, though if it proves to be true then I guess this manga might not be as bad I as expected.

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OMG it's finally here! Seems it's another player showdown, should be fun.

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It's sad how the first few chapters of this were so brilliant, and the rest of them keep spiraling off on uninteresting new character tangents.

If all the new characters were as interesting or compelling as the supposed main characters, then it might be a fun thing, like a big box of mystery chocolates. But these side characters really don't have anything interesting to do or to say.

Funny thing is, I think MizuMoe should be the main couple since their relationship & character was the most developed amongst all the couples so far. KuroShira is the dullest, just spewing laughs instead of drama/ development.

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If the manga said that it's about the love story of the girls of Seiran Gakuen

Actually, the first cover − as well as the brief descriptions on the author's Twitter and other official material − says exactly that. >.> http://bato.to/reader#fbcc84bd8b14ed3e_3

Either I didn't notice, or I completely forgot about it. Still, if manga focuses on the love story of the characters that appeared on that page, then I wouldn't really mind. But then it introduces more characters. Linked to the main couple, yes, but they aren't really necessary in my opinion.

The problem is more that they seem to switch the focus randomly. Like, in volume 4 we have 2 chapters about Mizuki and Moe (16 and 17), 2 chaps to introduce Kaoru (18 and 19), and chap 20 wraps up... It's a bit all over the place.

This is the main problem with me. The reason it's jumping, I think, is so that the readers didn't forget the couples amidst the large cast. Though I prefer it to be concluded in a row of chapters. Less confusion that way.

Edit: I suggest changing the series description as to not mislead new readers into thinking this is a love story between Yurine & Ayaka.

last edited at Feb 6, 2016 1:22AM

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I like how Umi changes expressions so quickly. On a side note, EliUmi! (Though not really yuri)

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If the manga said that it's about the love story of the girls of Shiroyuri Gakuen (not promoting just the main pairing like Virgin's Empire), then I would've enjoyed this much, much more. Sadly, it's not.

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Image Comments 02 Feb 09:31
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This pleases me

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The pacing's a bit fast & there's not much character, but otherwise it's an enjoyable read

last edited at Feb 1, 2016 7:55AM

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Yay, another EliUmi! Also, Umi has a ring on her finger. Does this mean they are married?

last edited at Jan 28, 2016 12:18AM

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On the first word box, is it really "genteel" or is it supposed to be "gentle"?

Genteel is a real word. It means to be polite and refined, although maybe a bit flashy about it.

Wow, I did not know that. It's sure is a unique word. Thank you for the information.

last edited at Jan 26, 2016 11:14PM

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On the first word box, is it really "genteel" or is it supposed to be "gentle"?

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Image Comments 25 Jan 09:04
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It's like the little girl and her childhood onee-san, only this one's a bit more subtle

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Image Comments 25 Jan 09:02
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I do love me some age gap yuri

Salamandrake
Enough discussion 22 Jan 00:05
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For those of you who read the comments section before you read the manga AND a yuri purist, skip this one.

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Kinda reminds me of another story with college girls, where one of them smokes and her love is one-sided as well.

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I've finally rediscovered my first NSFW yuri. Nostalgia~

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I didn't know Yuri Hime was a tsundere until now.

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Today's chapter is quite tamed compared to others IMO, just an unusual costume.

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I like how A-chan comforted and pulled Chie's skirt at the same time.