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Chikaon
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joined Oct 16, 2013

Sad no actual selfcest but I'm glad they had at least one threesome. Sad it's ending but it'll get old if they kept dragging out the story anyway so I think it is the perfect time

Chikaon
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joined Oct 16, 2013

Ok after reading ch 2 I'm even more excited for the next one since it's from Tsuzuki's pov

Loving the poly twist and I hope it's not a lie. Makes it a lot more unpredictable on where it's gonna go

Seeing chapter 2 maybe the yuri tag should be removed completely from this work for now till it actually happens?
We have a woman who is in poly relationship with two guys and a woman who is with a guy for now.
Why tag it yuri?
Can we even call it slow burn yuri if we don't really know if author will ever go that way or if he for example will make the MC cheat with her male coworker instead next?
Only cause there are two adult women as MCs and they are with guys it doesn't make it yuri.
Maybe people should wait with tagging it yuri when something actually yuri related will happen first in it in actual chapter.

I think this so far is way more yuri than some other subtext series/oneshots tagged yuri. I think it's fairly obvious the MC is interested in Tsuzuki in more than a platonic way (they had that almost kiss in ch 1). I think attraction to another woman even if they don't end up together should still be considered yuri.

Chikaon
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joined Oct 16, 2013

you know, I've read plenty of lame, braindead oneshot and series as long as they contain yuri, but this might just be the most braindead of them all.
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The only good point for this series is the "ecchi" scenes tbh. It's art ain't even great though. Honestly the only reason people still like and tolerate this incredibly stupid story is the yuri. Imagine if the MC was a boy, yikes, this would go up in flame within the first chapter.

Also why the hell does this have a 8.48 point in Mangadex???

We like it BECAUSE it's a ridiculous and stupid ecchi story. That's all there is to it. All "plot holes" about the time travel and how MC has been making a living in the past don't even matter because it's not the point of the series. From the first chapter we readers are already given a taste of how ridiculous this series is because MC literally travels back in time after she masturbates too hard lmfao. It's not supposed to be taken seriously and sometimes we just want to read something fun and "brain-dead" and not think anything else about it besides "lol boobs".

Even if MC were a boy I think it'd still find its audience. Not here because lol it's Dynasty, but the premise is just interesting and wacky fun. It's rare to find time travel where your love rival is literally your past self.

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joined Oct 16, 2013

I kind of wish they did not explain the labels so directly. I don't want it to get educational and preachy like a few other manga. Just let readers see and understand? It's obvious what the MC is if she feels romantically attracted but not sexually.

This is sorta how I feel too. Loving the representation, but it's too on the nose for my tastes since I don't like it when chapters end up becoming info dumps and takes you out of the story.

But on the other hand I know that sometimes author's need to make it as blunt as possible since there are so few stories that go into the asexual spectrum that this story might be the first exposure a lot of people have to this topic. So it's better to educate someone about it right away.

So yeah sorta mixed feelings about how it was handled, but still enjoying the representation.

Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

Holy hell this chapter was craaaazy! Was left speechless during the Magenta parts. Author just keeps surprising me with how much they flirt the hentai line lol

Chikaon
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joined Oct 16, 2013

Oooh yeah baby my body is ready for some more blessed Akiyama Haru introspective angsty drama!!

Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

Damn yucca just can't catch a break. Rip I liked that onee sama too

Chikaon
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joined Oct 16, 2013

This ended up being a lot less possessive than I thought when I saw the title

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joined Oct 16, 2013

Damn that stalker break in was legit terrifying. Scarier than some horror manga because of how realistic it was. Reminded me of the time when people broke into my house while I was at home.

Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

Is volume 3 the last one? The story could have ended at this chapter + an epilogue.
I am glad it didn't.

Same I totally thought this was the final chapter and had to double check to see that it was indeed the first chapter to this volume. Glad to still see there's more to read after this! Even if it never goes beyond subtext (tbh would've been more surprised if they made it text), I still really enjoy their relationship.

Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

Wowie they upped the yuri this chapter. Reminds me of that tall gf lifting smol gf meme haha

Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

That tree looked dead with those scans.

Lmao I also had to do a double take before I saw the blossoms. The dark black trunk and branches with clear blossoms didn't really nail the effect I think the author wanted it to lol

Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

Omg I'm fucking dying at the yuri wedding church. I love this series so much

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joined Oct 16, 2013

I also felt this chapter went by unusually fast lol. Super sweet

Chikaon
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joined Oct 16, 2013

The ending was confusing af.

I didn't get the punchline. Please, explain.

Please to be your "little sister"? I think something is lost in translation.

"Pleased to be your little sister" makes no sense and is a mistranslation.

I checked the last line on the raw. She actually says "Give my regards to your "little sister"".

Ie, she doesn't mind (or endures) her to be with the little sister as long as she has her time outside of school.

That's all.

This definitely needs to be edited in since it's a huge change and actually ends the piece in a cohesive way

Chikaon
Ikoku Nikki discussion 09 Mar 16:04
Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

Another beautiful chapter. I definitely need to reread to capture everything

Chikaon
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joined Oct 16, 2013

Sooooooooooooooooooooooo cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuute!!!!

Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

Knew it. This is my fave pair

Chikaon
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joined Oct 16, 2013

Guess i should read Lily System now....It's always been on my list but I never got around to reading it

Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

Shy chiaki is super cute

Chikaon
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joined Oct 16, 2013
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I miss this series :(

Chikaon
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joined Oct 16, 2013

So cuteee

Soralaylaff
joined Oct 16, 2013

So what I got from this is that Gemini has adhd

Chikaon
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joined Oct 16, 2013

Loved this. Would love to see a follow up. Messed up stories like this are the best

Chikaon
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joined Oct 16, 2013

Interesting. Kaimori's hairclip turned back to A. I'm guessing Nanasawa's timelines are slowly merging together?