I really don’t like criticizing other people’s works... I think I must do it here though. I feel like the artist said “ok what if you had a physically masculine MC with a traditionally ‘feminine’ personality and a physically feminine partner with an assertive/traditionally ‘masculine’ personality to help MC accept their true self” and then bam out came this story. Although the art is amazing, MC and Toribama-san feel like exaggerated versions of themselves (MC so overly girly, Toribama-san so overly assertive/guyish) that it makes MC seem super closed-minded and Toribama-san kinda bitchy. Overblown characters are okay if it’s for comedy, but here the mangaka is trying to be serious. I also find much of the inner monologue a bit overly poetic. Additionally, as others have mentioned, the “I didn't think it was okay to do X until she came along and told me it was okay to do X” is a rather cliche plot at this point and honestly, it feels really boring and unoriginal to read. I’ve only read the first five chapters, but I’m really trying hard not to drop it, which I don’t really want to do since I feel like I’m kinda running out of new yuri series to read and I feel like there is so much potential in the series if the characters were made right. Hopefully things improve a bit as the series continues. :)
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