AWESOME

Oh... I also agree the fact it's really bittersweet, but also simple, short and intense.
Ps. And how much wind...

Uno's frumpy style looked like mine LOL
Nice story :)

Finally another work from these two =w=

Mh, not bad!! It was funny, especially when Ritsu arrived in the dream xD

Omg I can't stand all this exaggerate stuff... they're a "bit" too turned on. Well, I had already understood it just by reading the title but... damn you, curiosity!

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°________°
I'm done. <3

Ps. I really like the way she/he draws hands.

I think it's Maki the poor one xD

Very original way to do lewd things without taking off any clothes. WOW.
Then, I've noticed it also in her precedent doujinshis, Maki's facial expressions are great.
My Sunday is smiling to me. Thank you NicoMaki! Thank you God- emh- Ooshima Tomo!

Baby (no)NicoMaki has won.

I lol'd all the pages.

Too sweet... This story suits them very well ^O^

OH, Nozomi .

And hot atmosphere °°

Oww, I should have read it yesterday, for a happier Christmas >_< but it doesn't matter, it made my Saint Stephen's day.

OH OH OH, I really like this threesome and, honestly, I didn't expect any doujinshi about them. I'm happy to have read it ^^

That's kinda strange, maybe I'm not used to read such similar doujinshi. Or maybe because I can't imagine Eli with a penis... if it was Nozomi, I think I would have appreciated, perhaps... ._.

The other side of OPPAI.

So sweet :3

Not bad.. The fact that Maki has almost forced Nico to have their smutty moments is a little strange, because she's not the type of person who would do such things just to claim her importance to Nico.

"I want to become a robot who draws nothing but NicoMaki!"
Hey, wait, isn't it a bit to far? xD

I think there's no reason to fight about a pairing. As I liked it a lot, you may also don't like it, stop. It's useless to continue such an argument.
By the way, YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEES! Sunday, Monday, happy day! /sings like a possessed mad/ Too much lovey dovey porn, but that's freaking ok. Luv it.

/rolls the head/ MAGNIFICENT, my sad afternoon has become sunny, even if it's already dark.

I think these two new character shouldn't take a relevant place in the story, or it will become an endless and forced drama as well (as you've already written)! Then, they can be nice or anything else, but what's their future use?! I hope there won't be another interference in Mei and Yuzu's relationship anymore...

First I read your comments and I thought "That would be the usual stupid lewd doujinshi..." but then "Ah, It's from Ooshima Tomo..."
Intense the last phrase "Nnngh..Mmm...", it resumes all.
Nothing too special but nice °u°

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"stay calm" WHAT? I die. I need more of these in my life.
Lez wait till next chapter.

Wha Wha Wha Wha What's that end!? I'm too hopeful, I've started to love this series ~ it never gets boring!