I hope author can prolong this story.
It's quite capture people eye.
storyline really gentle.

Btw. We can't say if these two won't be together after this "confession". Everything is possible... (Yes, just dreaming)

Oh... I also agree the fact it's really bittersweet, but also simple, short and intense.
Ps. And how much wind...

Isn't the kiss just in her mind? That makes more sense with the rest of the oneshot.
I don't think there was even a confession.

Isn't the kiss just in her mind? That makes more sense with the rest of the oneshot.
I don't think there was even a confession.

Personally, I though the kiss was a flashback while I was reading

last edited at Mar 8, 2015 4:48AM

omg... this simple 6 page story just pulled my heartstrings so hard

Oh, how bittersweet. I like that the text cuts off on the last page, reflecting the brevity and abrupt end to their time together. I imagine the kiss to be a confession that never happened, and it makes me sadder :(

Why.

I.. Ok.