ah ah ah, the sarcasm in this tread is over the security level,
it's only normal however, it's too late to add romanticism in the plot, after that first part (and that second too)

i liked the drawing anyway

good story, not too sad or to happy, ... but the cover is really something, it's already on my desktop

I've noticed a lot of doujin writers (and I find myself doing it as well) have Yukari in what seems to be in a downward spiral, where she falls for a brightly burning human (Yuyuko prior to death, or Reimu, or most of the time, one then the other), knowing full well she'll live on without them.

I read one where unrequited Yukari sits with elderly Reimu as she passes away, and there's so much pain in Yukari, it just breaks my heart.

You need to tell me the title of that fanfiction!

I found it on danbooru, it's a one page comic. It made me teary eyed.

http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/420164

Thank you very much for sharing this. Such a wonderful story... ; A;

i want to give my thanks too, such a good melancholy reimuXyukari...

but yukariXyuyuko remain the best and most dramatical pairing

pg 10 "propoerly"?

??? how could you have seen that error ?
i can't believe you was reading "properly" the test in the baloons in that page ...

who needs a plot with a police role-playing hot like this ?
however, the skirts were a bit too long,

well writed, i didn't expect that twist

isn't this the same author of blue friends ?

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this is the first time ever that the italian version was better than the english, because this doesn't show the rural dialect used by the girl, but i think is pretty difficult to render that in english

That Alice in that suit. :o

yeah, with that get-up she's dangerous

sorry if it's OT, but i wanted to ask if this manga, and the 2 about strike witches, are original, spin-off, djs, or something different.
i didn't see the anime and i don't know the drawing style and the plot

i have a really bad feeling about this, i wish i'm wrong but it seems to me that the long haired girl want to use the MC.
if the plot goes in that direction i'll hate this manga because i like the shy girl

now i'd really like to see a homuXmado dj from Mera,
that MC is a perfect homura (cool version timeline)

this really ended than...

i liked it very much, so i don't want to critic anything,
if the author wanted this ending, for me is good like this

LOL... Some Touhou elements there...

Yeah. Even The Melancholy of Suzumiya Haluhi.
And what's with that MB thing...

m-bey was really fun, but the evolution of homura too : clumsy -> cool -> haruhi

Well, even if alot of that makes no sense at all, if we ignore the serious scientific and logical flaws, it looks like it might be fun :)

... also a boy that needs only a skirt to seems a cute girl (but trap aren't only in manga, there was a film with marilyn and tony curtis), or girls 13 years old with boobs bigger than my woman (luckily, because realistic loli give me the chills), make a lot of sense,
but even real world aren't always logic, or italy at least, for what i know

reimu used the inverse logic with cirno, but with her any type of logic is useless

i laughed at the save/load techniche.

i'm playing persona4 with the emulator and i can't imagine to play it with the normal save system... when you fail an answer for a social link that seemed obviously right, you can only kick chie-style the ps2 out of the window,

Oh god, will I ever find a Madoka pairing that I actually don't ship?

Anyone x Kyousuke?

... but walpurgisnacht x kyousuke is nice, isn't it ?

where is the "moe up the butt" tag ?
if it isn't here, then it has to be banned...

i can understand kyoXhomu, because in the last time-line modoka and sayaka aren't there, but this when is ?

however i enjoy homura in any possible pairing

i saw this only now: homura ranked only 19 ??? too out of character, i don't like this ...

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this type of story always remember me of Lost, more are the mysteries and the question, higher is the possibility of a unsatisfying ending,
but with only 2 volumes i think this is the best that the artist could do

suddenly feel boring...
kind of convenient mutual love, lack of some thing that make my heart race like all of Morishima's works did before.
still a nice chapter.

quote.
i prefer to avoid to critic artist like morishima, but i liked the "convenient mutual love" sentence.
however, usually morishima's works aren't about the drama or angst before the realization or the confession, and there are other chapters, then i expect something more interesting to happen (surely ultrasweet and iperglycemic)

If I write some doujin text work and paste those onto blank images, will it get uploaded here?

if it's not a problem for you, i could draw somethings to go with your text ...if you don't dislike the thought of a stranger using the fruits of your fantasy,
i'm always looking for ideas to draw

For some reason, this oneshot felt a little bit sad and angsty

i always liked this artist,

this sure is sad, but is realistic too, it happens often to be in love with someone but to make sex with some other; it's sad but it's how it works,
...it happens to me that i'm "lucky" because het, than i think it's more common for who likes the same sex (like for the protagonist of Jin's fragment of love)

FIRST MALE IN YURU YURI EVER

http://puu.sh/4jYQE.jpg

MALE???? I'M DONE WITH THIS COMIC /unsubscribes

ah ah, really, this chapter needs the "male on pag. 8" tag

Is it really a one shot? pg1 clearly has more "possible" characters on it then was in this.

i was asking myself the same things, but after i thought is a metaphor of the distance in class between the two