I think I could actually see myself being interested in a larger storyline with these two. I'd probably appreciate the porn a bit more if I was actually horny at the moment... But whatever, it's short but not all that bad.

This is delightfully laid back for all the horrific stuff that appears to be happening. I've discovered a new author to look out for.

The randomness kinda reminds me of Franken Fran.

I think that last page may have a clue as to how she relapsed.

I saw a sample or something of this a while back and have been wanting to read all of it for a while now. Woohoo! That was kinda complicated wasn't it? Rin always getting what Len wants.

I think the fact that it's so obvious makes the statement "Ran does not speak cat." that much funnier.

That was deep. I had to read it a couple times before it really made sense. And that smile seriously changes that character from the simple friend with a crush to the psycho manipulative mastermind. With that, the only innocent one left is the wavy haired one.

I get the feeling that the translation quality was a bit low in some of these, especially chapter two...

Haha, she kissed her anyway. This made me giggle.

Kinda weird, but I think it's pretty funny.

I'm not sure how to feel about that ending, sad or angry...

That ending always gets me. I feel all fluttery inside now.

For those interested in the soft translated Danbooru versions: http://danbooru.donmai.us/pools/5082
It has links to all of them up through 8.

I really never know what to expect with the "what the fuck am I reading" tag...

A weak plot device indeed. Not that I actually care about that.

That boomerang was a nice touch.

"Don't nibble my nipple" lololol

Glad I'm not the only one who thought that. lol

Oh my god that was adorable!! Excuse me while my head pops from the cute overload. I'll be in the corner regenerating if anybody wants me.

I like it when there's such a combination of decently thought out plot (read: reason for this to be happening) and SEXY. I also love QB's antics in the end.

I definitely could have gone my life without reading that one, but the thing with Vivio at the end was great.

"Time to clean up after the party. Oh, you're still here?" BAM, sex.

Don't like "story within a story" stories, its really putting a dampener on this for me

I actually think this particular story in a story really parallels the main one and enhances (my) understanding of the main plot.

I love how it starts with a totally cliche yuri setup then turns around and throws some weird unexpected punchline at you.

well that escalated quickly. then again it always seems like that when it comes to porn.. .-.

That's exactly what I was thinking before I even got halfway through.

That was so intense! There's already so much potential built up in this first chapter, I'm super excited now...