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joined Jul 8, 2019

Oh, Schrödinger's doesn`t work like that

Well, it does and it doesn’t . . .

+/-1 points for you for that comment

joined Jul 8, 2019

It's a little known fact that Schrodinger's famous thought experiment was about how he hated manga without decisive confessions, believing that it only counts as yuri if there's a direct confrontation. He was in fact a lesbian, hence "Schrodinger's cat" being the naming trope.

Schrodinger's pussy

I'll show myself out

erana
Your Smile discussion 09 Dec 08:04
joined Jul 8, 2019

chapter 4 pàges 3 & 4 - why does it look like a wholesome version of two genderfliped fratboys horseplaying while saying "no homo"? and, why such thing could even have a wholesome version?

joined Jul 8, 2019

By chapter 26, tags need to be updated. ""Moderate" amounts of sex no longer cuts it.

joined Jul 8, 2019

oral

joined Jul 8, 2019

I'd love to see a guide on how to redraw those non-parallel lines that are used to give pathos! (usulaly in corners)

A long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away -err, back when I actually used to typeset stuff, I just did them manually by using Photoshop's line tool, aligning it with existing such lines. Those lines are usually actually thicker at one end - almost like a very long & thin triangle - so I made a straight, thin line from the thin vertex to each of the sides of the thick end, filling with extra lines if needed. It was actually faster, easier and more precise than any automated method.

joined Jul 8, 2019

Sorry but that was WAAAAY too slow. A comedy where you have 16 pages before the first smile-worthy joke is not so much of a comedy

last edited at Nov 25, 2021 11:56AM

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https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/sorry_but_im_not_into_yuri_ch10#18
Careful! You could poke a nipple with those eyes!

joined Jul 8, 2019

The art looks kinda bad compared to still sick. The premise is very OTT, the characters resemble Maekawa and Shimizu too much, and I feel like I've seen this kind of plot before. Not that excited for the second chapter tbh, but I might give it a shot. Let's see.

I agree with everything you say, except the part of giving the second chapter a shot.

joined Jul 8, 2019

all according to keikaku

erana
joined Jul 8, 2019

i bet she also used lots and lots of selenium shampoo
http://www.rosincerate.com/2015/07/element-breath.html

joined Jul 8, 2019

Cool Down confirmed for having also watched too many Star Trek with Klingons and/or read too many Western dime novels where the Indians are the good guys. That all of those seem to have also been yuri concerns me deeply. And she probably did that while listening to Manowar's "Today Is a Good Day to Die" - or more likely a J-rock version of it by an all-female band.
I'm a bit frightened by that, honestly.

Edit: On second thought, I'd watch the fuck out of a klingon yuri manga

last edited at Nov 12, 2021 8:08AM

joined Jul 8, 2019

dying for yuri

;_;7

last edited at Nov 10, 2021 5:52PM

joined Jul 8, 2019

Be as pissed off as you want.

If you mistake "pointing out potential loopholes in the plot" with "being pissed off", you are likely never gonna be able to offer good counterpoints like

Starting the narrative off in media res is a time-honored literary tradition.

does.
Good point. You are right on that. Yet, it's just a matter of preference, I do enjoy my exposition for stuff based upon relationships (including smut, to quote our yuri n wine). In media res is, IMHO, better used to set up a later explanation than to avoid having to do it, and based upon this chapter 1, it seems more a case of the latter than of the former.
I guess we'll have to see what Zanka does in later chapters.

last edited at Nov 1, 2021 5:08PM

joined Jul 8, 2019

All those other Zanka one-shots were the "build the tension" parts.

Now it's business time.

Which would TOTALLY work if that were "Mistress and Maid chapter 20", instead of "A Mistress Who Tempts Her Maid chapter 1".

joined Jul 8, 2019

Not liking this so much as some of Zanka's previous works. That's not "a mistress who tempts her mad", that's outright "a mistress that orders her maid to shag her". It has losty the charm of, say, "cat maid and mistress", where you DO have them both tempting and teasing each other (and admitedly rolling with it with all their worth) and they don't get to the shag part until AFTER the "let's build up some tension" part. WHich was utterly missing from this one.

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wat

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@Robblu: inb4 the witch's surname is Prince,

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dat credits page, duuuude

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Whoa master finally show more emotional on her face now. No more plain face yay

you might not have read the chapter where she seems ready to burn Hell down when someone tries to abduct Mel...

last edited at Sep 29, 2021 5:58PM

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The dialog of chapter 3, page 20 is...

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chapter 4 page 5 is CUTE AF and I got a new wallpaper with last panel!!!

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Meanwhile, in bizarro Dynasty Reader, we have a story of a cute boy who sees how his childhood love marries a girl. Oh, wait...

joined Jul 8, 2019

needs yaoi in page 2 tag

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Indeed