Not the way I thought it would end. Kind of a shame since it got so much potential. I was expecting Rin to at least tell Hanayo about her and Maki since they're really good friends, and Hanayo to feel maybe a little something for Nico in the end but oh well. It's still a good read nonetheless.

Totally agree.
Even though doesn't those kind of endings usually mean that something good will happen after a while. I feel that eventually Nico will make it clear to Hanayo and hopefully she sees what Nico is trying to do, unless Nico gets tired of Hanayo's cluelessness and confesses to her. In my opinion the story is left to reader's imagination.

Also please fellow readers stop being negative towards this.

The dicks are not part of the story, they are just extras at the end with different characters, not that i cared in the first place.
But anyways if you came here to read for the 'porn without plot' then you're in the right place.
Other than that if that's not why you're here then click the back button and find something else to read or close the browser, turn off the system and back away slowly until the coast is clear. feeling trololol

"I like this so don't criticize" always works so well...

Hey Nezchan can I bluntly ask that if 'your comment isn't directed at me right?' Cause I'm getting mixed feeling from it (and I kinda didn't get it tbh..) ^~^' I don't want to be in bad terms with anyone >~<

I'm still wondering why my 'incest' tag was rejected for Chapter 2...
Does a moment of sisterly love not count?

I want more! More please!! This is cute and relatable to my life when it comes to size xD I'm 5' 10" and my girl is 5' 2"
And doesn't Nina kinda looked like Yang from RWBY at first appearance? o.o

The dicks are not part of the story, they are just extras at the end with different characters, not that i cared in the first place.
But anyways if you came here to read for the 'porn without plot' then you're in the right place.
Other than that if that's not why you're here then click the back button and find something else to read or close the browser, turn off the system and back away slowly until the coast is clear. feeling trololol

With little the first chapter is I kinda get what's going on. The only problem is that since its an incomplete story we don't get what's going to happen. Will be waiting for more.

"This stuff is gold."
I agree.

Shoot! I seriously want to see what happens next. And Isumi kinda reminds me of my girl.

I almost feel like the size-shifting was deliberate. Not in the sense that she was supposed to be literally growing and shrinking, just because the artist felt like there was something sexy about this tiny aggressive sex-hungry loli crawling over the oversized senpai and her boobs, so realism took a back seat to sexy theme. And I might argue that the artist had a point about this.

Wow. Great point there. I actually had a thought like that after I re-read the doujin, like how only in sex scenes is when their body proportions seemed to obviously take change. Maybe the author wanted to make a point about how we tend to judge people by their appearance like in page 26 the scene where Kaya-chan went to see senpai and other classmates thought Kaya was a cute kouhai. The thing is that they don't know how sex-crazed she is with her senpai even though she looks innocent to them. In that scene it's obvious that it's judging by size, "she's petite and cute, she must be innocent." So the author would exaggerate the size in the sex scenes to prove that just because she's small and cute doesn't mean she wouldn't take the initiative in sex. Or that even this small lesbian can tackle down the biggest of chicks. lol

Looks like Kyoushinsha forgot to draw Tooru's horns in several panels.

Isn't that just something Tooru can show/hide at will? Sort of like her tail

Like when there's no horns in the waterfall training, but then appeared in the next panel after a log hits Tooru's head. So either the artist forgot to draw them, or made it seem that getting hit in the head made her horns appear.. (?) Also boobs are in full display

Lol the title translates: Bread of Peace. I seriously don't doubt that I'll see a lot of spanish people reading this xD
Also 'pan' translates as bread in both spanish and japanese.

As I recall, Japan adopted the word "pan" from the Dutch.

It wasn't from the Portuguese?

Afaik from my japanese teacher portuguese christians came to japan and brought bread with them and they called it pan ( パン) thats why its written in katakana cause the origin came frim abroad and they didnt knew what bread was before the portuguese came.

That may be right ans my memory is slightly off. It's definitely not from the French "pain", even though it's a homophone. I do know that European traders, mostly Portugese and Dutch, were very much present in Japan long before Admiral Perry's day, acting as vital trading intermediaries with China, who Japan was officially at odds with but were happy to trade with indirectly. The Jesuits were a big part of that, as I recall, and one of the big universities where I come from is named after Francis Xavier, who was one of the major players. At least until the Franciscans came along and fucked things up.

Oh god I seriously did not expect a debate about this o.o But anyways I just meant that 'pan' means the same in spanish too, but since you guys brought up an interesting topic I did my research to the point that I know that the word originally came from the Latin word 'patina' (meaning 'dish') and throughout there the word itself evolved in other languages. Yes the Dutch had an influence, and so did others. It just happens that the Portuguese travelers first introduced the bread into Japanese culture and since they didn't have a word for it they basically borrowed the word and that's why they write pan in katakana because it's a foreign word. Oh and 'pan' is pronounced almost the exact same way in all europe, or it's atlease similar in some way.

Lol the title translates: Bread of Peace. I seriously don't doubt that I'll see a lot of spanish people reading this xD
Also 'pan' translates as bread in both spanish and japanese.

Wow so I read everyone's comments and only 2 readers were very negative after reading the doujin... But everyone else was awesome and had a great time reading and i laughed so much at your awesome comments guys :) The doujin and your comments made my day :3

Kiss!

That look of suspicion on the last page, it's like her friend is thinking "girl you sound like you're turning gay for her".

Even Aya's wings were stripped.

Looks like a flower pot on her head.

Jeez... just when it was getting pretty steamy.

Finally I'm seeing more of Kathryn's work here! :D

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heavy breathing
Too much cuteness and sexiness in one read hits the favorite button

That credit page tho xD

Too fucking cute!!! My OTP deserves so much happiness and attention like in these kinds of doujins :) I'll probably later on will do a short doujin about them :3

kyuubey wanted to make a contract and make sayaka into a futa XD pfffft

..doujins when?

Omg I had the same thought! xD Sooner or later Kyouko has to know how to make babies.

This looks like a straightforward and fast paced Akuma no Riddle.

Well she's licking that fun button ;D