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Oh, how fickle is the crowd—when this series started there were screams of utter horror at the “violent,” “abusive,” horrible, terrible no-good bully who absolutely ruined the story—Kagami.

(Just kidding you latest posters—all the best people saw that Kagami was a just a crabby sweetheart from the get-go.)

Kagami has been suitably restrained since the incident, and it appears that Indou's less concerned about being kissed than she first appeared. I will admit that the story is super cute.

But still, it's just a slight tonal shift from being a horrible tale of systemic sexual abuse of children under the guise of military authority.

And yet another unanticipated attraction of the military life: cute boots.
https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/a_love_letter_for_the_marching_puppy_ch08#18

Also, proper high-topped military boots are way cuter.

last edited at Feb 14, 2019 2:36PM

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Inb4 chapter 32 comes and break is already over.

Actually there's 20 more chapters of summer.

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Hoshikawa Ginza District 4. Otome's parents are fucking awful, but Sensei's family is surprisingly accepting of... uh, a lot of things.

In Cirque Arachne I think the characters are both orphans, but basically everyone they know is supportive, even actively encouraging.

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I don't care, I want pure stories, and there is so few that I can count with my fingers
When I read a story, I investigate if the author did bad stories before, for example, Ooshima Tomo...her draws and story board are so good, but she did an het hentai before...that damage all my image from her...same with Towa...with this "Uran" I investigate him, and he did A LOT of het hentai, some very horrible...and that damage me all my image from him, since the first page of this manga...I feel dirty reading this...but I didn't left it just because I want to see what he's gonna do, but that doesn't mean that I like this...

I was gonna say "here, look at this https://dynasty-scans.com/tags/yuri?view=groupings half of the series in that list will be pure yuri stories" but apparently your definition of "pure" is psychotic. Good luck.

last edited at Feb 7, 2019 11:37AM

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Stretch discussion 07 Feb 04:03
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I rather liked the ending. Usually these long-running repetitive series finish up with some generic light-hearted bullshit—nothing changes, nothing is resolved. The author actually had the balls to write a proper conclusion.

Also, the ending is consistent with what little was presented throughout the story. They move in together during periods of instability in their lives. Their life together is a transient thing, their relationship a result of circumstance more than anything else. Their feelings are never presented as mutual love or anything like that.

This isn't a brilliant work of art. It's a manga presenting illustrated instructions on various stretches, with some underdeveloped story wrapped around it to contextualize the central gimmick. For the genre of underdeveloped stories wrapped around some gimmick, it was at least interesting.

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What the heck was that? (This manga beginning was crap but meh) Hey...I don't know, this feels more like an hentai than a Yuri
(I see, this author is an hentai pig author) well, what can I expect from someone like that?

What are you even doing here?

Anyways, this series is just getting better. That dance routine was even funnier than Usa's dream last chapter.

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Big-breasted short-haired tomboy is best.

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They vaguely mention something about needing two beds/futon for the two of them and another one for an eventual guest. Yeah, I have to say, it really seems too much. No offense intended, scanlator-san, but I wonder if there wasn't a mistranslation somewhere...

On page 5, Yuna says

それぞれの部屋 にもう一部屋? 3DKか 3LDK?

That's "a room for each of us, plus one more". And then 3DK and 3LDK mean "three bedrooms, plus dining and kitchen" and "three bedrooms, plus living, dining, and kitchen." So, for whatever reason, they're definitely looking for a three bedroom apartment.

What I think I'm missing the is difference between what Yuna says and what Rena hears. Capturing ambiguity of partial phrases is difficult (at least for me) since while one phrase may share two meanings in one language, in another it doesn't. So I am forced to choose which meaning to represent in English, and the ambiguity is lost. Also, it was just difficult to know exactly what Yuna was trying to say, since we're only given the fragments that Rena hears.

Anyways, I understand that it's nicer to have more rooms if that's an option. It just seems like they're having a rough time finding a spot and haven't even considered reducing their expectations by eliminating unnecessary requirements. Maybe that'll come up in a later chapter.

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Abs-duction discussion 03 Feb 00:19
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Typo in the credits. schugyuy - > schuyguy.

That's what I got in the file with translation, so I just copy-pasted it. I can fix the credits page no problem, but no idea how to submit a correction ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

Oh my god I spelled my own name wrong...

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Why the hell do they need three bedrooms?

This really confused me too, I have no idea what their relationship is supposed to be now

Previous chapter was Yuna thinking she had to take "responsibility" for having sex (which didn't happen) and MC is all like waa you don't really love me but I'm gonna try and have sex with you anyway

Then this chapter is Yuna saying stuff like "it's like we're getting married" when she KNOWS MC likes her in that way, but yet needs to have a place with three bedrooms??

It's like we skipped a chapter where they got together, but then also it's like oh no we're still just friends because we have to sleep in separate rooms

Also nothing was cleared up about the sex that didn't happen either, so that's still a thing

But like Yuna now is all for MC which is great but three bedrooms???

Well, the fact that Yuna thinks they had sex even though they didn't doesn't really seem to matter that much. I don't know if it'd affect their relationship either way for her to find out. Though I guess it bothers Rena, the repeated uncompleted attempts seem to have made her super horny.

Maybe their current apartment has three bedrooms and neither of them has thought about why they might want to change? Actually, now that I look back, what might've happened is Yuna was asking Rena about it while Rena was distracted thinking about sex, and then she took Rena's random response as a request for her own bedroom, or something along those lines. Still, it just seems very strange for two women and a cat to rent an apartment with three bedrooms; that'd be excessive even if they weren't sharing a bed.

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Why the hell do they need three bedrooms?

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I think Kousaka made the right decision to move away. After what she'd done, eliminating all contact was the most responsible course of action. However, I don't think we can judge her too harshly. When Jinno was a child, her judgment was that of a child. But now she's an adult (23 probably, assuming she moved to Tokyo for university), and this is how she views what happened:

I felt happiness in loving earnestly, and pleasure in being loved earnestly. When it all came to an end, I felt sadness. I felt anger. I felt hatred. And I felt pain. But now all that remains are good memories.

I've known people who pursued relationships with adults when they were 14. Now that they're adults, I can hardly tell them they were victims of sexual assault if they don't feel that way. You cannot trust a child's judgement in these matters, that's the whole reason for age of consent laws: children are not equipped to make these decisions. But adults are capable of making their own decisions, and it's never a good idea to try and tell someone else how they're supposed to feel. Clearly Kousaka was in the wrong at the time. She seduced a child. However, just like I respect a friend's opinion of something that happened to them, a reader should respect Jinno's opinion of what happened to her.

However, that's all just diegetic analysis, when perhaps the more important question is about the author. What is the author's purpose in telling this story? I dismiss out of hand any argument that this is a subject that cannot or should not be made into stories—after all, it's something that happens in real life, and thus is a fit subject for analysis, and thus a fit subject for art. But what about this particular example? This isn't really the story of a predatory adult taking advantage of a child. It's the story of a girl's sexual awakening. I think it's obvious from the structure that the author was focusing on the latter. For one thing, the story is entirely from her perspective, and the ending frames the work as the musings of an adult looking back on a formative incident in her childhood. For another, it's meant to be sexually arousing. The sex scenes are drawn very sensually, and in great detail. Also throughout, there's a major emphasis on the differences between children and adults, both in the Jinna's yearning to be an adult, and in Kousaka's obsession with girlish innocence.

In fact, what I find most curious about this work is that the author never even addresses the fact that this is a story of an adult seducing a child. The ethics or legality of Kousaka's actions are never mentioned. I'm not really sure what to make of that. It's like the author didn't even realize that this would be an issue that readers would think about while reading this work. In the end, my only conclusion is that this is not a serious piece of art. It's a semi-pornographic work in a medium known for its endless supply of mindless pulp. I don't think the author is a criminal, or a pedophile. They're just careless.

last edited at Aug 27, 2019 11:37PM

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Ahh. That one was really cute.

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Simon! Don't believe in yourself! Believe in the me that believes in you!

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Abs-duction discussion 31 Jan 21:25
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So the framing device exists to ensure that the story is meaningless?

It's just one of those funny things that happens to people. They don't need to mean anything. Not every story needs to be a life-changing event.

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I don’t think we’re supposed to imagine Usa looking up her own skirt in a routine shot of her running.

No, in that moment we stop projecting ourselves into Usa and instead become Usa, as we enter her mind so completely as to do what she as a character could not do. It's a transcendent moment of profound character integration.

Also, I thought the quote was, "Yes, I like to suck dicks."

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Abs-duction discussion 31 Jan 18:58
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I guess she really abdicated those abs huh?

If you get used to the life of a high-school athlete, it's fucking impossible to stay in shape once you graduate. Unless you're super diligent about continuing to work out, but like who does that?

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Put another way, I actually wanted to see Usa’s unabashed sexual desire as a fun and refreshing take on adolescent female sexuality, but instead of the fanservice showing how the character sees the world, the shots keep putting the reader in the position of a creepy schoolboy.

Can't it be both? I think the series as a whole is deliberately sexual, but you could say that's about cultivating a tone consistent with the way the main characters view the world. Obviously it's fanservice, but it's not just fanservice.

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This is reminding me more and more of that other dancing manga.

Edit: just checked, and I was right. In Iromeki Girls, Saki's little sister makes a video of Saki masturbating and tricks Saki into giving it to Aki.

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That was really bittersweet and kind of reminded me of a song by Tom Waits
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=s44LKiMT87Q

I didn't expect to see Tom Waits here. It's a good song.

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I think it's becoming more and more clear that Miwa wanted a friend she could confide in, and Saeko wanted a cute girl to fuck. They'll both find what they wanted, but that doesn't make the foundation for a very stable relationship.

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Still Sick discussion 16 Jan 20:52
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yeah i actually thought it was a way older phrase but apparently not? i'll do a v2 to change it bc i dont want to make a fucking got reference if thats actually the source lmao

Well it gets the point across, so what's the harm where it came from?

Ugh, don’t forget all sorts of abuse, manipulation and long-term revenge plotting.

No "ugh", I fucking love that stuff. Momono Moto is great.

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Still Sick discussion 15 Jan 23:58
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I am enjoying this, but every time I read a manga about the struggles of being a mangaka, I feel like someone took the old advice "write what you know" too much to heart.

the aaangsty atmosphere reminds me of a Momono Moto manga

Please, this is nowhere near that level. We need a few long-term relationships destroyed by infidelity and a couple suicide threats before we approach Momono Moto.

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This reminds me of a series where there's a girl who loves butts, a girls who loves people staring at her butt, and a girl who loves to hear the other two making love. It may sound stupid, but the story is pretty well executed. Now in this case of Kurogane's, I'd say the third wheel girl is quite similar (vouyerism anyone?) but the story is just pure stupidity. Out of nowhere sex scenes is what I'd describe.

Don't worry, it gets even sillier.

Funny thing is that this particular author has also made one of the better age-gap yuri mangas, Hoshikawa Ginza District 4.

HGD4 still had that weird blackmail storyline in the middle.

He ruined the beautiful story with that shiet. I would forget about it and pretend that it never happened.

I don't understand why people hated that part so much. Sure, it was unpleasant, but it made sense within the context of the story, and was important for drawing a comparison between Sensei and the bookstore clerk, making a statement about consent in a story already built on a fairly disturbing relationship.

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@schuyguy The people who got sick, but not die- did they just get an incredibly tiny amount of the poison? (forget its name- tetra something)
because I'm sure I heard it is 100% fatal with no cure. And apparently a very nasty/painful death over several days too.

No clue. I'm not a biochemist. All I know is the data from that Bureau of Social Welfare and Public Health site. Obviously it's not 100% fatal, since the mortality rate over the past decade was only 1.8%.