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"Is it cool if..." would be the would be "proper" writing. "It cool if..." is acceptable informal language, at least in my region and/or dialect.

last edited at Dec 17, 2017 1:35PM

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Oh Hana you're just as naughty as Kuki!

Hana's just as naughty with twice the competence. A dangerous combination.

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I think Angst and/or Drama, and maybe even Supernatural would be appropriate, non-spoiler tags.

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Reading the comments, I'm kind of fascinated at how the story can be so polarizing in so many different ways.

last edited at Dec 14, 2017 1:52PM

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Practice discussion 14 Dec 01:51
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this looks like its from an anthology, maybe the author fixes it later.

As specified in both the foreword and index pages, the collection is four stories all featuring their own characters.

So this pair probably won't be revisited in this book.

last edited at Dec 14, 2017 1:52AM

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Toki discussion 11 Dec 12:07
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Dammit Ryuuka, getting my hopes for a reasonable outfit up on the cover page.

last edited at Dec 11, 2017 12:10PM

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Still one of my favorite things on the site.

I love how the princess actually has a personality, and that personality plays well off of Zoe's. They have chemistry (heheh) and genuinely seem like they'd make a good couple.

Also: vast tracts of land. Those are nice, too.

last edited at Dec 7, 2017 6:41PM

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It's kinda funny how her cramp doesn't stay in the same place. Mikage first grabs her calf, but Hinata begins massaging Mikage's shoe. Shock lines then appear around Mikage's ankle and foot, but she grabs her knee instead. Was she really hurt? lol

(I was really hoping for a hug from behind when they were stretching)

Pretty sure it was the muscle running down the front of the shin, which flexes the ankle, that cramped.

Yup. Hinata wasn't massaging Mikage's foot (she'd have to take off the shoe for that.) Hinata was pulling back on Mikage's foot to stretch out the calf it's connected to and neutralize the cramp.

last edited at Dec 7, 2017 3:32PM

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Magan&Danai discussion 07 Dec 09:33
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If it's information from a public blog it should be fine. A link to the source would be good to have.

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Mikage seems dead set on breaking the world record for how gay a single high school girl can be.

last edited at Dec 6, 2017 4:24PM

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Image Comments 04 Dec 22:28
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@-_Yuri_- : Ahem.

last edited at Dec 4, 2017 10:29PM

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Why would anyone hurt my sweet little Kuki ;-;

Are we reading the same manga?

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Yuurii discussion 02 Dec 20:08
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The showing-to-telling ratio got rather unfavorable towards the end.

But a cute story overall. Ghost lesbian Sleeping Beauty is a surprisingly enjoyable concoction.

last edited at Dec 2, 2017 8:09PM

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Dorikano discussion 02 Dec 19:43
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Almost futanari

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Is this satire on all the news of men molesting women recently being revealed en masse? Japan probably hears about these scandals no? Or just molester entitlement and bullshit reasoning in general? I'm just going to pretend it is, and it's beautiful and brilliant.

I'm not sure it's entitlement if she gets arrested

Molester-san's reaction to someone refusing to divulge their gender was to immediately invade their physical privacy and forcibly acquire that information. Seems pretty entitled to me, as does doing the above and expecting to not get arrested.

As for if this is commentary on extremely recent developments in American culture and politics, probably not. News travels fast, but crossing language barriers and physical borders (e.g. an ocean) adds time. This seems like more of a nod to general concepts and misconceptions regarding sexual assault: the mindset of those who commit assault and the (incorrect) idea that women are incapable of hurting other women.

last edited at Dec 2, 2017 4:46AM

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C) Manager-san is trolling

And/or she's into Watersports

last edited at Nov 29, 2017 2:25PM

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The artist obviously struggled with the anatomy here, but it's actually forgivable. I have to give them a points for picking fairly believable poses (most of the time).

last edited at Nov 28, 2017 1:57PM

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The drama' s a bit cliche, but the execution is decent so far. I'm enjoying it.

last edited at Nov 19, 2017 3:05PM

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Image Comments 16 Nov 18:47
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The most disturbing thing about this image is how non-anthropomorphic Serval is holding Kaban like that.

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It's good that the yuri lover lover's there to play the straight man to the yuri lover, plus we never the latter's antics never go beyond obsessing over lesbians from a distance Those things go a long way in making this setup more digestible than Yuri Danshi.

Something between the style and subject make this come across as some kind of parallel universe Mochi au Lait work (parallel Mochiverse?).

last edited at Nov 9, 2017 11:54PM

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20 minutes into wargames and chill and she gives you this look.

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Lots of conclusion jumping here...

There's nothing in the work so far that directly fetishizes or stigmatizes self-harm, at least not yet. All we've seen so far are two (homo)sexually active girls and one of them happens to have cutting scars.

I'll give the artist a chance to see what exactly they do with that particular part of the character.

last edited at Oct 19, 2017 12:13PM

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Image Comments 19 Oct 12:04
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Not sure if Ecchi...

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Mikage can't calm her gay and I love it.

Is it just me or does the gyaru look huge and incredibly buff?

Probably. She seems tall and has rather broad shoulders. But Mikage's stature plays off of Hinata's lack thereof, so the effect might be exaggerated somewhat.

Panel 2 seems to indicate that Hinata is about average height compared to most other students (can't say for sure because perspective), which would mean that Mikage is indeed very tall.

last edited at Oct 19, 2017 12:01PM