The reactions to this chapter are gold. Dat first page.. #thestruggleisreal

Short and sweet is good, but too short and it ends up giving a worse feeling than a cliff hanger which is not co0l, for me at least.

But I dont think the laid-back chapters that focus on just stretching is bad; it gives contrast to the real dark and much more dramatic plot of the story, which is refreshing.

I love the texture on their clothings. So crisp.

^+1.

Besides, Matsuri is doing indirect prostitution (if you can call it that) and most of her "customers" are male. So her internet friend could potentially be one. If it were a man, I think it would be more dramatic.
Anyway, I hope Mei's not dumb enough to really go and meet the "internet friend" as opposed to talking it out with Yuzu and explaining things rationally. "I just wanted to.. Uhm.. Take back your lips..!!"

"You're a shlickaholic aren't you?" (Pg 27)

Best line ever.

Cutest futa s*x I have ever read. I think.

Ingenious. Surprised no one has started a topic about this. Big fan of sol and this was quite a nice read.

What? WTF was this? This was a terrible ending. Literally almost nothing got settled. And WTF happened with the original girl? She just disappeared into oblivion at some point in the series and, yeah, she was there, BUT LITERALLY NOTHING MORE THAN THAT. SHE WAS LITERALLY JUST THERE. Are you serious? Wasn't she the original love interest and yet she got left behind like that? AT ONE POINT THE GOD EVEN SAID SHE LOVED HER. BUT NOW ITS ALL ABOUT THAT NEW GIRL!? WTF is this? Like I would've been a little bit more okay with this, had the God AT LEAST SAID ANYTHING ABOUT HER, but she didn't. SERIOUSLY. WTF IS THIS? Not to mention, we HAVE NO IDEA what happens to the gods in the future. Do they just stay there forever? But they were in training? Did she really keep chasing the girl? LITERALLY NOTHING WAS SETTLED. WTF IS THIS? No, this was a terrible ending. 9 thumbs down. I literally grew 7 extra limbs just so I could give more thumbs down.
It's not the worst ending I've ever seen, I've read way too many for that to even be possible, but it sure as hell is among the worst. Like WTF was even the point of giving us 10 chapters if you were just gonna end it like this?

+9999999

Dem feels, gurl.

I just finished reading all of the chapters available. I don't know what others could find charming about this. Definitely not my cup of tea. All of the charactrs are just so idiotic & crazy. Character development is slow but the overall pacing of the story is fast. I can't sympathize with any of the characters at all. Anyone?

I feel like Dowman is the Tim Burton equivalent in manga.

Always amazing how Dowman can convey such feels in just a few pages with such simple art.

I've come to the conclusion that it's impossible to do stretching with dog. #foreveralone.

I thought the non-chalantness was quite charming though. Like Dark_Tzitzimine said, just shows how they have a deep bond (which can hopefully go deeper!) and are comfy with one another.

And the worst manga of the year goes to...

Never have I read something with nice-looking art of such intricately-dumb plot and characterization. Citrus is clichéd, but it is a LITTLE more sensical than this.

Thank you for the earlier warnings and the translations though!

ED: genuinely thinks this should have a what the f*ck did I just read? tag.

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There should be like a forced yuri tag or somethin'. The story is just way too complicated and simple at the same time. Complicated because there are so many things going on, the mc saving a girl, maid finding her as collateral for her father's debt (and she just happens to look like the girl she's gonna stand-in for), and this weird family program and age; Simple because the "father in debt" is used too many times, clichéd, and mc suddenly being kidnapped for payment. All too predictable.

I personally dont mind harem in yuri though, as we rarely get to see one. Variety is great. Awaiting the second one.

Nicolai is one of the bests at making NSFW yuri-filled fluff. Stories are very easy to follow and art is merely adorable.

^I find it very peculiar that you find the queen endearing cause we haven't gotten a lot of info about her yet. Not how she acts or how she looks, just her silhouette. For me, the captain was alright. I don't know why you find her abusive as I didnt come across any part where she felt offensive or insulting (although i do agree she seems just a wee bit pushy); the princess seems to be the abusive one, hitting Koizuka and stuff.

Very curious. Had to read it twice to grasp the plot more and to make the names stick better. I found it more appealing after the second reading. It doesn't feel like a love triangle.. More like a square (?) since we have koizuka, the princess, the captain and the queen.

Quite disappointing how both the princess and koizuka was waiting for each other to confront one another about the marriage to the queen, but it seems like the princess is a tsun, so, for me it feels like it was koizuka who should've done the first move.

It feels incomplete somehow. But I loved it anyway. Ahhh. >_<

And that part in pg 18 ch 3 referencing marimete had me grinning. My cheeks hurt.

^Yeah! I like Takemiya Jin's works, but nothing from their work really strikes at my heart strings like morishima's... But I think this one just did it. It's so cute.

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Such a satisfying ending. Weee.

power girls !
let's stop time !
flash our panties ~
torture the readers !

Ahaha.

II wish we get to see the story in Murakami's POV. I'm finally beginning to think that she genuinely likes Moritani, although there's something slightly fishy about her. I can't really put my finger around it.

It's either there's always one new character introduced every other chapter or so... or flashbacks from miss sunflower's past, which isn't exactly bad.. I just wish there would be more romantic development between matsuri and miss sunflower in the future chapters. sigh.

I love this, but the pacing is killing me.

^ahaha. A bit of a deal breaker. Felt like trap with bewbies.

The perfect analogy to smores. Sweet & delicious. Ah, this is bliss.

Hmm, I thought it was quite charming, the first parts at least. Going by the title, I think the author really wanted to leave an open-ended ending in which the reader decides how it ends (only how shiori disappears/perishes), only the ending felt too forced and sudden and was poorly executed. But the h scenes, wow I think someone just topped Asagi Ryuu?

I ship meilingxsakuya but I guess a little bit of sakuyaxremilia ain't so bad. This is the first sakuxremi doujin I've read too. Not bad at all.