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Citrus + discussion 19 Oct 15:52
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Lovely chapter, and I agree, it does look like HaruMatsu is finally happening. Harumin is going to make a decent woman out of that little gremlin.

But I'm still baffled about Matsuri's bro. Far as I can remember there was no indication about her having a bro, so I was expecting Harumin to show surprise at him but her lack of reaction comes off like she knew already of him.

last edited at Oct 19, 2020 4:10PM

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The second time skip felt like it was tacked-on just to justify the series being serialized in Yuri-Hime.

Also, someone remind me, who was the tanned cutie?

last edited at Oct 19, 2020 3:48PM

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Finally! I was starting to go into a serious Koko withdrawal.

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Yuru Oyako discussion 17 Oct 16:20
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Big thanks to the Chads for helping me with this! Without them, I would've procrastinated for months before staring this. Just a note: this doujin was published back in April 2019, five months before Angel's Toy was published. Since it didn't fit with the main timeline, I decided to translate the main story first.

There is so much callback and reference to the PreCure series in this I don't even know where to start. I'll just say that Mob Sensei appears to be not just an OC, but also Negom's version of a grown up Hishikawa Rikka. Some clues include:

  • Rikka is from Doki Doki! PreCure, the series before Hugtto! Precure, and thus would be older now
  • Rikka and Mob sensei share many similarities and motifs, such as color scheme & hairstyle
  • Rikka's PreCure form was Cure Diamond. Hmm, what shape is Sensei's earrings in the "Angel's" series???

Clearly Sensei's still an OC, as she's never explicitly named, but she definitely seems inspired by Rikka.

Also, it must be noted that at this point Mob Sensei is Negom's self-insert. She has also posted pictures of her (with her face covered of course) cosplaying as her.

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Raws are out and it really is the end. No extra-long chapter either.

Just from looking at the pictures. Seems like all of us were somewhat right about how it ended.

There's a return to the status quo, kind of, and a time skip

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Citrus + discussion 15 Oct 23:55
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I can't believe that Harumi and Matsuri will have sex before Yuzu and Mei.

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I guess Chapter 4 is supposed to happen after Asuka groping Tomoko in the Study camp?

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Yuru Oyako discussion 09 Oct 14:39
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That is a strangely young-looking 35-years old man

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The slow addition of new couples at times having passing tied with the "main couple", I am starting to get get AnoKiss vibes from this series.

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Yuru Oyako discussion 07 Oct 13:11
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Oh and it gets better

https://twitter.com/tiyk66/status/1312750045570056192
https://twitter.com/tiyk66/status/1312752165908144131

These tweets are her wanting to pay an older woman to pretend to be her mom for a day before realizing that is lesbian prostitution.

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Yuru Oyako discussion 06 Oct 13:13
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I vaguely recall that, once upon a time, Sayaka was indignant at the idea that she would eventually give in to Yuuki's whims if pushed hard enough.

Oh, how the mighty have fallen.

Huh, I forgot that Sayaka was originally introduced as the "level-headed" foil for Ayako.

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Dammit Nikaidou, stop being a useless lesbian for five minutes.

last edited at Oct 3, 2020 6:18PM

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So why was this chapter uploaded again? Or did I dreamt about being uploaded here before?

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Man, they could at least do enough chapters for a second volume.

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Yuru Oyako discussion 23 Sep 09:32
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I keep looking every page of 9.2 for Sayaka's nipples and they aren't there. I feel scammed.

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Personally I think is going to be a frustrating return to the status quo, but I would be delighted to be proved wrong.

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Yuru Oyako discussion 22 Sep 18:09
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Sure, but normally children wanting to fuck their parents is where everyone draws the line. Yuuki has only gotten bolder over time while Sayaka does nothing to rein her in.

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Yuru Oyako discussion 22 Sep 17:37
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To begin with, the way Sayaka is wrapped around Yuuki's finger so easy.

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Yuru Oyako discussion 22 Sep 17:05
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It's one middle schooler's lunch, how much could it be, 10,000 yen?

Roughly $100 bucks, so yeah, is way too much money for a middle schooler lunch.

This series is pretty fun even if the premise falls apart if you think too hard about it, but well, nothing wrong with a self indulgent story every now and then. Reading 11/2 2.0 after the influx of Yuru Oyako's chapters is going to be weird.

Also, that is a fantastic twist. Shyamalayan would be proud.

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Well, this story started promising but then it just started limping around, with each new development being more contrived than the last, so I'm not surprised is ending.

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Citrus + discussion 21 Sep 18:03
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I see that does make a lot more sense. Thanks for the clarification.

That said while seeing the discussion about the chapter in other places, someone mentioned that Harumin was remembering what Matsuri told to her in the extra of the volume 3 of Citrus all those years ago.

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Citrus + discussion 21 Sep 10:20
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So is it me, or page 27 dialogue reads weird? Like it doesn't flow well. I dunno how to explain it.

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Citrus + discussion 21 Sep 02:27
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Tell me your secrets

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Citrus + discussion 21 Sep 02:24
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HaruMatsu incoming!