I was blown away when I found out this artist is a dude. He captures casual physical intimacy between girls so well in his work. He's a master of body language.
I figured out my quibble with this serialization so far.
The problem I have with it is it's third person narration
Both the first and second chapters of the web series are first person narration and they feel more fluid
then the omnipresent narration. It feels a bit unnecessary and forced if I'm being honest.
I agree that the narration feels largely unnecessary, but it could easily be a suggestion from an editor, in which case I'll let it slide.
Wasn't sure what this was referencing, but then I remembered that wonderful scene of them enthusiastically cheering Ristu on while she eats paper like an idiot.
Yikes, it's upload here. Yeah so pretty much what i said on Kodoma thread. A love triangle with a 3rd one already unlikable : Cheat on fiancé of MC, possibly fake a pregnancyand announce the marriage with said fiancé because of pregnancy and all that said to MC directly face to face with both the fiancé and her here.I don't know how Naoko will manage to make the 3rd one a serious love rival but it will be hard.
That sounds like a massive spoiler. Either that, or you're crazy.
^^ She didnt just LET them - it was Mom who suggested they take a bath together! and got Nikaidou to sleep over :)
I get the impression she doesn't just know but is actively getting them together in intimate situations lol - like someone above said- she is playing wingman for her daughter :)
She gave Nikaidou her daughters clothes. She is actively trying to get them to bang.
God I love this artists work so much. There's something extra funny about it being explicitly shaped like a big veiny cock, to the point where it needs to be censored, that makes this even funnier.
Another monster girl x human protag from Neji. I'm gonna need this shit injected directly into my veins pretty soon. It's just too good to absorb through traditional methods.
I fully expected this. This is a period piece with a very classic forbidden-romance vibe to it. Of course it isn't complete without an arranged marriage.