'And a special acknowledgment to the author of Niven's Law: "There is a technical, literary term for those who mistake the opinions and beliefs of characters in a novel for those of the author. The term is 'idiot'."'
- S.M. Stirling, quoted on Wikipedia

You're my new favorite person on this forum.

Ratri's little sister, surely?

My thought too, though she's currently triggering my retarded human sensor. Hopefully this arc ends soon so I can start fan-boying over her.

Its like flat Yukari. It bothers me but its still so good.

I saw this on Danbooru a while back. I was interested, so I looked at the artist's other works and... have regretted it ever since.

Similar story except it was on ex-hentai...

Razov posted:

It's really badly drawn.

I think it looks great

Look closer? The hands? The feets? The butts? The proportions are all out of whack.

That profile made me shudder.

I've seen worse, of course, like everyone, but it reminds me of that manga about fencing, where the artist is hardly trying.

don't be mean
apparently it is the first work of the author (at least the first one I see here lol)

So stating your opinion on the art is a no no unless its praise? Even when you actually point out specific issues?

Please people, critique is not inherently bad and should not be treated as such without good reason.

Edit: Now that I've read it I can say that I personally enjoy the art style though if I look for cringe moments they are there. I cannot bend my wrist like that. I tried. It hurt.

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I cannot tell if this author wants a dark story or a happy story.

Did somebody update this tag? I swear there was only like 3 things under this tag last year.

I saw the title and just started chuckling.

Even the description sounds gay. Favorited.

i know some smart boi who thinks he's clever is going to say it, so i will say it first

Yuri on Ice but actually yuri

Your pic makes that work.

shlick showed up again. Is this a new english word?

That's one of the most useless censorship I've ever seen in my life.

I seriously did not notice the attempt at censoring until I read your comment and went back to look for it.

So good ;_;

"Would you step on me while wearing those loose socks later?"

Me too please.

reads the third to last story page... Fucking knew it! I knew she was a vamp the whole damn time! Hahahah!
Still sweet though.

Should probably tag that as spoilers. Maybe. Just my opinion.

I am 99.99% sure I just witnessed a Kamehameha.

I see

I approve. I need this sugary stuff to offset all the angst and drama I read on the site.

I've been on this site for years and I just found this.

I really do need to watch this.

Good story, and the plot device seemed to take things well.

I feel like that's an understatement. The plot device was handled so well it was like leaving work at a sewage treatment plant and smelling fresh air for the first time in 10 hours.

This was so mindbogglingly refreshing that I'm considering staying away from the drama tag for awhile.

P.402

That's what you call smitten.

"if youd drawn nasty stories about me, mybe Iwould be"

hmm, so kurumi doesn't like kinky stuff huh?
that's too bad.. too bad.. lol

I'm of the opinion that she was referring to something more like "dirty old man" and such. But eh, it is subjective.

She Just had an orgasm, didn't she?

I 100% believe this.

reupload ?

Yup