I think there's been meaning in every chapter so far and some of the slowness is felt due to the medium itself, as a novel takes time to read and can afford to spend a lot of words on describing actions and feelings.
Dude, I'm an actual writer lol
Maybe I wasn't fair, there have been developments. It's just that, after 1500 pages, Shimamura still has no clue about Adachi's feelings. At this mark Frodo was probably halfway to Mordor, and Tolkien was famous for his slow pacing. The entire His Dark Materials trilogy is shorter than this, as is the Hitchhiker's Guide "five book trilogy". Voldemort had come back to life. You get the idea.
I think we can all agree that Hiruma-sensei's writing style is exceptionally slow paced even for novels. That's not necessarily a bad thing, of course. You can see from this forum just how many people love this story, and that's just within Dynasty's internet bubble.
It's just that for me, personally, the pacing is a big deal, even if I like the setting and the characters.
(Edit: and yes, I know novels are measured by word count rather than pages, there are probably discrepancies in what I said before. But I'm not gonna estimate the word count on these novels for the sake of an internet argument, so just roll with it)
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