Pitching in to agree that the story did feel quite disjointed. Like there were some parts I did like, like the cute awkwardness of the senpai (seriously, freckles are amazing) but the story did feel quite hard to follow.

Also I'm glad to see I'm not the only one lost, for once.

last edited at Jun 3, 2016 1:26PM

Huh, this was a bit of a change from the regular Robot yuri. None of the angst, all of the ridiculousness and fun! Needless to say, I liked this quite a lot.

Have people seen the new Steven Universe? I mean I know it was leaked like a week or two ago but damn that was cute.

So, is this an ongoing series or is the second chapter just a stand-alone sequel?

Well, this seems nice so far. Hopefully there won't be too much angst, but this artist has done lots of nice stuff before so I have high hopes for this.

The "looks perfect but is really a slob" trope is one of my favorites, and here it's especially cute.

I kinda like it, there's lots of hate between the two of them.

Huh, one thing I did really like about this was that it showed the older woman's perspective for once. Often times for a NSFW Age Gap yuri like this it's usually just told from the younger girl's point of view (as far as I remember, anyways), so seeing both made me like the characters more.

Now this is a pairing I didn't know I'd like, but it fits nicely. I'm looking forward to the other Ten Desires stuff coming up~

For such a simple little 2koma, this is surprisingly really cute.

I'm sure there's a phrase for this type of thing, but it escapes me at the moment.

Edit: Maybe a 2-person harem?

last edited at Jun 1, 2016 9:54PM

I love it whenever a pun translates well into english.

Every 4 days have become my favorite because that's when pictures are uploaded. especially the weirdly funny yet kinda cute ones like these.

Benben x Seija was so unexpectedly funny. This entire thing was quite nice, though.

Yaaaaay, it's baaaaack. So their relationship is kinda messed up on both ends, but it seems like they'll work it out...?

WHAT THE FUCK AM I READING

Are you referring to the doujin or the thread discussion?

I can guess - it ends with the guy reverting back to a guy, and the girl getting together with him. Bonus points if she renounces her lesbianism in the end, too.

This was...weird....The credit page was nice, though.

Remember kiddies, drugs are bad~

Kumichou continues to make the best doujins ever, thank you for scanlating and uploading?

Also to the person above me, what exactly are you talking about?

English is my first languages and I'd never heard that phrase before. Huh, you learn something new every day.

Yup.

Also it seems the text is a current meme in Japan, kinda like the "They had lots of sex afterwards" meme.

last edited at May 29, 2016 1:01AM

This is the first time the author has drawn porn? They did a pretty good job, in my opinion, for their first go.

The only thing I'm confused about is what exactly their relationship was in the flashback - where they dating, and had to separate? Was Umi confessing Kotori, only for Kotori to say she couldn't return her feelings because of her plans for college? I probably just missed it though.

I thought it was preeeeeeetty obvious they're in a long-distance relationship...

Yeah, I need to pay more attention. Like what else would that good-bye kiss on page 11 mean? Sheesh, I suck.