This looks like a fun ride, can't wait to see how it goes. Time to escape the friend zone!

I'd definitely be interested in seeing more of this. Too many unanswered questions to just stop here!

I honestly feel bad for her. It would be one thing if she showed any signs of reciprocating, but as it stands, she seems genuinely miserable with the unicorn girl constantly sexually harassing her, and tbh I can't blame her. Interested in the side-couple though. I think I'll subscribe for now and see where this goes, but if it's still giving off uncomfortable vibes in a few chapters I may just drop it.

I want a sequel or five to this.

I love that they had both a normal and Scottish version, hope this continues with any other SwSh doujins. And I hope we get plenty more of those as well! (A sequel to this where Gloria has to deal with an overprotective older brother would be great, lol. "You've won the championship and fought the local god-cryptid, but are you really worthy of my sister?" XD )

I want more catgirl stuff like this

I'm going to assume that a few years pass, then they get together in a big poly puddle of wholesome warmth and fluffiness

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This is really fun; I think I'm going to like this one. ^_^

This is really interesting so far, but there's this undercurrent to it that I can't quite place, but makes me worried.

I honestly find this relationship interesting, would love to see more of these two; the lewds are optional.

As someone who really liked Kamen Rider OOO, I am fully on board with this twist!
Also, does this mean Honey was a human before?

To Incestfinity and beyond!

It may be because I just started reading this recently, so Chapter 13++++a.png/more, part eighty didn't really bother me that much, was more amusing than anything. Interested to see what sort of role Miyuki may play going forward, but if not, we at least now know how she helped our girl realize her feelings in the first place. Glad her sister's alive just because dead characters make me sad, but it also kinda puts everything else in a new context and raises some questions. I kinda wonder if she was in a coma or something for a long while, thus the trying to settle for other girls on Miyuki's part. I'm really curious about what the sister's stance on the whole situation is.

Can we get a sequel?

I honestly feel bad for the older sister here, don't think this was the 'good end' outcome, but this was still a really interesting and imaginative scenario.

I really like the dynamic in this most recent chapter. Can anyone recommend any similar works?

I'm nervous that the mom is going to take the completely wrong lesson from this... Still, I also feel like this could be a definite opportunity for good things.

In the long term, Neeko and Uri moving in together would be fantastic

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I was putting off finishing this up since I didn't want it to be over
But I've finally read the last few chapters
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My heart

Also I wanna see this elusive "Haru"

I feel bad for Igarashi. She's made some bad decisions, and her trying to justify her actions to herself shows that she still has a long way to go, but at the same time all of her poor decisions and actions come from a fundamentally human place, not just the sort of generically evil rival I would have expected. I also really like that she respectfully bowed out when Nanoha stepped up to the plate, instead of trying to stick around and put her own feelings ahead of their relationship. Honestly, that she still has so far to go, makes me really want a future appearance or a spinoff or something, her journey would be a really compelling one to see.

Second sister's storyline is my favorite, but they're all so cute! Glad I caught up with this ^_^

Wat

I actually really like the tights to be honest

My head canon: her dad just bought a bunch of stuff at random because he's a gritty merc whose knowledge of fashion only extends to shoulder pads and fade haircuts, and then his awkward fully grown child who doesn't know anything that isn't about stabbing people had to make an outfit out of that somehow. People at the monastery think it looks ridiculous, but don't say anything because they assume she's making some kind of conscious fashion statement. And she of course has no idea, because she's Byleth.

Though this makes way too much sense

This is really disturbing; I hope we get more, with some sort of happy ending for Yukino. As things currently stand, the future looks dark for her.

You can pry this slow burn from my dead body. The slow pace of them learning to be intimate with each other makes us appreciate each act of physical affection. Also really enjoy the little things Nanoha and Chidori do to each other that make them swoon, and as a result, fail to function normally (eg. Chidori watching the basketball game, and Nanoha not eating in the most recent chapter) .

Amen! Loving the deliberate pacing here, it's consistently sweet and never feels like a tease. I hope this follows them through their whole lives, honestly.

I felt bad for her, honestly. It was obvious she's barking up the wrong tree, and her pushiness, while bad, read to me as subconscious desperation. Hopefully she can find a girl who will actually return her affections without her even needing to get all clingy.

I don't even know what this is from
But dang was it sweet