Oh my! We've got some real talented artists here!

@kyonne That's some impressive shading and colour blend!

I will try......no promises though.

That's good enough. Thank you.

I loathed chapter 13. I know Citrus wasn't very good in terms of the story, but this was just terrible! Terrible I say ;_;

Okay, so first, the chapter didn't feel christmas-y at all! What's up with that?

2) The setting is all over the place! I thought their mum, yuzu and mei would spend their xmas together at home. I understood why Mei couldnt but why didn't Yuzu and her mum celebrate together? Yuzu even rejected Harumin saying it was only for family just the previous chapter but then again she INVITES 0 Matsuri to celebrate xmas together at home which would make her mum and mei happy (?) with more ppl. Wat da fuk.

3) everyone was so OOC.

• insert comment here about dropping citrus * then coming back to read again when the next chapter is up.

I'd like to sign up! I've written some fanfictions in ff.net and my own one-shots! If you want to read it, I could send it to you. I've also some experience with script-writing, as my friends and I have made a 12-minute film about drug abuse (for a SOCS project, I'm currently a form 4 student (or a sophomore in the US).

Apart from the character designs, I really get the vibe from Citrus in this manga.

The similarities I found were:

1. Miss Sunflower's stern attitude and Matsuri's frank (i.e. Telling MS how much she loves her) and irrational behaviour. Much like Mei and Yuzu.

2. Miss Sunflower gives the vibes that she's into Matsuri but never really does anything about it. She just goes with the flow, although she knows Matsuri's into her.

3. Miss Sunflower is following the past Miss Sunflower's foot steps; Mei follows her dad's foot steps. Both has something they want to do.

Ahaha. I know a lot of Citrus haters in dynasty, so please try not to heavily bash me when you read this comment! I was just stating some of the things I found similar between the two.

Although I prefer Miss Sunflower tenfolds than Citrus, I still think the latter is of at least a mediocre quality in regards of the story.

Holy fuck, reading back, maybe she's not getting any because that hood makes her look like a giant dick:
http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/le_petit_chaperon_rouge#5

(the second panel)

Now that you mentioned it... Good eye! Hahaha

Haha everyone feels despair when they hear words like:

"Start of the new school year," and "No internet."

The title's misleading; it's more like an explosion on Kaga san's part than a hypothermia. Otp! Woooo

These two are so precious. They should just make babies already

Try an itch-relief ointment? I personally use Mopiko.

Yass! I too use mopiko! The red one though. The green one is not super effective. Hahaha

I sense yandere and holy sh*t! I never thought Kujou could do something so... So >0<

I'm not liking this one by Takemiya-sensei.. I feel like it's the typical hetero love-triangle kind of thing.

And with the sister hitting! Rude and unneeded.

A very well-structured plot. Really liking how everything was easy to follow. Also, the premise that The Kaga san now is actually a clone is a very good possibility... Because why else would Akagi fight recklessly and give up?

Looking forward to the next chapter! :D

Lil rr hood is not getting any cuz they can already see her secret garden

The chapter end feels too abrupt. It's like, it's not meant to stop there, but the author did anyway;forced cliff-hangers!

Chapter 3 ougt to be some sexy times! If not then

Delinquent girls in manga are great. This one's no exception, but I feel like Shinjou gives off too much of a "childish" vibe. I understand it's part of her character, but how she acts (like gnawing her finger and her matching accent) just bugs me a bit.

It's great that it's risa who confessed though. Usually it's always Shinjou's type who confesses. So that was a really step up from the usual.

Art reminds me of Nishi Uko's style.

I know right!

It's the typical "I-don't-wanna-love-anymore-because-I-don't-wanna-get-hurt," but with a happy twist at the end. Very well-done! :)

Very tiresome to read. Too slow, long and dull. And the main characters are too one-dimensional.

It's bad in terms of, nothing was explained and everything happened all too fast w/o a background info. As to why was Youko's egg chosen, what was the purpose of taking her egg and stuff, and why was the way to retrieve the egg was to have intercourse. I think the logic of the story was flawed. But hey, it's sci-fi. And although I think it's bad, I still like it anyway (very oxymoronic).

But, well to each his own.

Thanks NHFH scans!

I think an SoL tag would be much needed and maybe a time skip tag, too?

Anyway, that was a very satisfying read. :)

That wasn't really a bad end was it? Kinda sad but not necessarily bad. I mean, the girl's from the future. We can't expect her to stay. And she came specifically for the egg.

The yuri was just on the side. It felt like this wasn't the whole story. Just a little sneak peek to Youko's life. I wish there'd be a continuation.

There shouldn't have been a "maybe". Of course in this universe where Keine doesn't exist, there's only one wife for Mokou — Mystia.

I've always wanted to say this... The plot thickens!! dun dun dun

Wow, I can't say I like it, but I definitely don't hate it... It's like 75% dark chocolate.

Anyway, I agree with everyone who was saying this wasn't "Cheating". They weren't really together. I mean they did share a kiss(es) but that's normal for friends like them who are basically joined at the hip.

Well, I don't really like senpai though. She reeks of an evil aura.

Awhhhhh. ❤️