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Image Comments 04 May 09:15
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"even we we" -> "even when we"

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Ofuro ni Tenshi ga Maiorita!

pg 09 has an empty speech bubble, it was fixed https://mega.nz/#F!gpdxCC4A!rt7jxQGHgwGWAgCkDmvC_w

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joined May 28, 2011

pg 09 has an empty speech bubble, it was fixed https://mega.nz/#F!gpdxCC4A!rt7jxQGHgwGWAgCkDmvC_w

EvilDevil
Image Comments 30 Apr 22:44
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joined May 28, 2011
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somtimes -> sometimes

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joined May 28, 2011

ch 3 pg 12 seems to have a blank panel, not sure if error https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/fuwafuwa_futashika_yume_mitai_ch03#12

EvilDevil
Salad Bowl discussion 26 Apr 11:01
Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

ch 1, pg 6, "Avan just doesn't can't handle" -> "Avan just can't handle"
pg 15, "to cute" -> "too cute"

last edited at Apr 26, 2019 11:08AM

EvilDevil
MokoMote discussion 23 Apr 10:21
Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

pg 5, "want wear" should be, "want to wear"
pg 18, "I'm feel like" -> "I feel like" or "I'm feeling like"

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joined May 28, 2011
EvilDevil
Re: Karen discussion 21 Apr 18:40
Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

pg 11, "those feeling" -> "those feelings"
pg 15, "these feeling" -> "these feelings" or "this feeling"
pg 22, "people hearts" -> "people's hearts"

EvilDevil
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joined May 28, 2011

All of Humanity is Yuri Except For Me

ch4.2 pg 12 empty speech bubble, it was fixed: https://mega.nz/#F!T0BmCKxa!EHLh_jcIMGyflcCU9XSXeg

last edited at Apr 20, 2019 10:12AM

Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

ch4.2 pg 12 empty speech bubble, it was fixed: https://mega.nz/#F!T0BmCKxa!EHLh_jcIMGyflcCU9XSXeg

Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

Page 1:

"Ootsuki-sempai is alwasy kind"
should be "Ootsuki-sempai is always kind"

page 7:

"come on, what were thinking?"
it should be: "come on, what were you thinking?"

Page 12:

(All other studendts)
should be: (All other students)

EvilDevil
Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

a room for two ch 56, pg 8 minor error was fixed

EvilDevil
Still Sick discussion 11 Apr 10:59
Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

ch 6, pg 13 error was fixed

EvilDevil
Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

still sick ch 6, pg 13 error was fixed

EvilDevil
Kanamemo discussion 09 Apr 10:36
Yurikosmaller2
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ch 46, pg 3, "thinkingand" -> "thinking and"

Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

pg 97, "Adachi of Monday" -> "Adachi on Monday"?
pg 118, "grocery stories" -> "grocery stores"
pg 129, "Your fingers swell wonderfully sweet" -> "smell"
pg 134, "person from the fture" -> "future"

Yurikosmaller2
joined May 28, 2011

pg 382, "mostly due the look" -> "mostly due to the look"
pg 387, "which belonged to who." -> "to whom."
pg 388, "as if lighting as hit them." -> "has hit them"

EvilDevil
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Galaxy Flight Midnight
error in pg 15 was fixed https://e-hentai.org/s/b75e6511ae/1367148-15