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Title:
好きだ!!と伝えて!! > I'd probably change the title to something more along the lines of... "Tell me that you love me!!" "伝える" being somewhat loosely translated into "to tell", but given the context, I feel it's quite fitting.

Pg 3:
私はなんだなかなあって思ったけど - I thought it was a little... > Konomi's trying to convey that the confession scene was kind of meh, as in the scene wasn't very special or something. "なんだなかなあ" meaning "meh."

Pg 4:
K: そんなに難しいかな?
N: 意外と難しいの!

K: Is it really that complicated?
N: This is harder than I thought!

Nana's thoughts are actually trying to reply to what Konomi just said. Rather than saying, "This is harder than I thought!", she says: "It is that complicated!!!"

On the same page, the heroine in the manga says: "好きって言ってもらえなくてずっと不安だったの"
Rather than saying, "I get worried since you never say you love me", she says: "I got worried because you've never said that you loved me before." "ずっと不安だったの" being past tense.

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I don't know where the scanlator group got their raws from (if there is a physical book out), but the Pixiv release of this chapter has 3 pages + a cover page of sorts before this begins. Basically about the same thing, but I think if those pages were included, it would've been better than not including them.

Also, モテ (mote - which is slang) is the original text for what the scanlator translated as "having it", but translators are aware that "being モテ" or "モテモテ (motemote)" actually just translates to "being popular" instead of translating the full word - 持って (motte), which is the Japanese text of literally "having it". If you replaced every instance of when the scanlator inserted the words "have/having it" with being "popular", it would take nothing away from the story.

(TL;DR: Sorry, I can't really explain myself well, but while I do believe "mote" is slang for "motte", the slang translation should be "popular" rather than "having it")

Also, I feel like the title should be "Let me hear you say "I love you""

And for those who want another sequel... there is one more release on Pixiv.

last edited at Dec 23, 2017 1:06PM

Seira
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I'm in favor of the futanari tag being removed. Without seeing the tag, I took the condom panel as a joke. Kanan's position with Mari looks more like she's actually just using her fingers or grinding Mari than anything, and I'd trust that if Pito himself didn't tag it as futanari, then it probably isn't.

last edited at Dec 22, 2017 5:53PM

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shrugs Probably Haruka and Chihaya or something.

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Really cute! Hoping for a sequel..

Well, you're in luck.

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Me too. What chapter are you on, by the way?

It is been a while since I read the last chapter available. I think it was chapter 120 or above. Haven't gone back yet to read the latest chapters out. what chapter are u on?

I've been religiously following it every week (raws) for the past year :') New chapter comes out less than 10 hours from now!

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Nice avatar.

Thanks.^^ Yours too. inserts thumbs up emoji
I really liked how their friendship developed. It was nice to see her feelings got reciprocated.

Me too. What chapter are you on, by the way?

And back on topic because the newest chapter just came out within the last hour...

Chapter 9 raw spoiler:

Ahh, Akira has been vehemently denying her feelings for Pure since she kissed her back in chapter 7, but they're slowly coming to light. Meanwhile, Pure has been extra cautious since chapter 7 (her telling Akira that they should remain "just friends" with a pained expression on her face is what caused Akira to kiss her in the first place). When their hands brush each other's, Pure immediately pulls her hand away out of consideration for Akira, who takes note of this.

They end up going to a cave together, where Pure clumsily trips and they're kind of close to each other, reminding Akira of their kiss before. Pure pulls away, but ends up asking Akira this: "If I said I wanted you to kiss me right now, would you do it?", but follows up and passes it off as a joke. Akira responds seriously anyway and says if Pure wants to kiss, then it's fine with her.

Finally, Akira's inner monologue reveals that she would've been okay with holding hands or kissing Pure, as long as she stays by her side. Throughout the chapter, she insists that what she's feeling is not love. Her past is also brought up about how she became lonelier since her family essentially split apart at the end of her middle school days, hence why Akira is so on the edge about losing Pure.

Pure then tells Akira that she's a very nice girl, and that she thinks the reason why Akira kissed her to begin with was out of consideration for Pure's feelings. This turns out to be the final blow for Akira, who tells her that she's wrong... aaand cue cliffhanger!

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Eh..??!?! That was a guy? I thought he was a girl. Sigh.

Hahaha, I also thought he was a girl lol.

Nice avatar.

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I agree that Future Pure might've been aware of the consequences before traveling back in time. It seems that a really big point in this story is the history behind Akira's family. I feel like Pure traveled back in time to help heal Akira's wounds, even if it means tossing their future relationship away. Pages 9-10 in chapter 4 kind of looks like Pure is resolved to protect Akira from whatever it is that hurt her or is still hurting her.

I don't know how accurate this is (don't know where it's sourced from or who wrote it), but the synopsis on MangaUpdates for this series says that "Pure doesn't give up and tries to fulfill the wish of the 24-year-old Akira, who told her to look after Akira's high-schooler self." The words "looking after" lead me to believe that what I said above may be a viable theory.

I haven't read chapter 6 yet, but I just read 7 & 8 (raw). Looking forward to seeing what happens next.

EDIT: Oh, after looking at 8 again, I feel like as time goes on, Pure is gradually starting to lose her memories of the future since things are taking a different turn. Looks like she's questioning one of her memories at the start of chapter 8.

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This plot twist was a really sharp turn, but I like that it feels very real. There were subtle signs of cheating here and there (like how he doesn't pay too much attention to Kaoru or his ambiguous and extremely stoic text message this chapter... hell, even if he was bad with dates, I'd say him forgetting their anniversary was a hint as well), but overall, he was pretty good at hiding it. As readers, we never see the story from Reiichi's eyes, and the surprise we get from this reveal is similar to the surprise that Kaoru feels... minus the grief and all.

And I definitely think he's cheating and it's not just some misunderstanding. The panel that zooms in to her hand holding the cellphone feels like it's emphasizing the wedding ring on her finger.

But now I'm worried about Uta. She's finally become more resolute about her feelings towards Kaoru, but now she's injured (please don't give her amnesia) and her brother is a cheater (will she even find out about this?). On top of that, we don't know what kind of family issues Uta faced in the past, but I have a striking feeling it has something to do with divorce or cheating as well... which would spell bad things for Uta's mental health.

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I LOVE THIS GAME.

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I'm having trouble seeing the pair here as anything but the Yuri Mekuru girls.

You too!?

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Seems like Uta's already somewhat aware of Miyabi's feelings towards Kuro though, lol.

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I have this feeling that Kaoru will do something she might regret and hook up with Uta behind Reiichi's back. I don't know, even if that doesn't happen, I feel like Uta will inevitably have to part from Kaoru in the end.

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Forget Uta x Kuro or Kuro x Miyabi.

ALL ABOARD THE MIYABI X UTA TRAIN~

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if this doesnt get a sequel Imma riot

Stories like this usually don't get sequels irl.

This comment was too real.

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Wow, Rika kind of looks like Papika.

And I like how the spelling of Yoruha's name could also be read as Yohane.

Seira
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I don't know why it bothers me so much, but the other friend of Natsuko's is named Satsuki, not Itsuki. ;____;

Seira
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joined Mar 22, 2014

Yuzumori Kaede, huh.

Wait, I vaguely remember seeing her first name somewhere before this though... was I just imagining things?

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Seira posted:

BUT on a separate note, I do agree that he probably has some degree of awareness of Uta's feelings, even if it's very little.

I'm pretty sure here he was about to ask her about it, but changed his mind after all, probably thinking it is impossible. I think if he had wanted to ask about something else, it would be played as implying he wants to ask about it and then ask about something totally different. The fact he actually didn't ask about anything suggest more that he wanted to ask about Uta feelings for Kaoru. There is of course possibility he wanted to ask about something else and it will come up later, but I'm really doubting it.

Yes, that page is exactly why I think he is somewhat aware of Uta's feelings (since the other chapters don't portray him as a particularly sharp-minded person). Although, since he's kind of dense, I'm still rather skeptical about it. He could've been trying to ask something entirely different for all we know, haha.

Uta seems somewhat happier than before as a result of her becoming greedier and betraying her sense of discipline by getting closer to Kaoru. Reiichi must've picked up on this somewhere, but to immediately suspect that Uta might be in love with Kaoru may be kind of a stretch. Who knows~

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As much as I would love to see Uta with Kaoru, I can't deny I'd feel a little bad for the brother when he's done nothing wrong and genuinely cares for both his sister and wife. I also don't know if I'd be happy if they tried to throw in some drama where the brother did something terrible like cheating to get the main characters together, because that would feel like the cheap and "easy" way out with little satisfaction tbh. What I wouldn't mind seeing is if Kaoru actually fell in love with Uta, and fighting with her own emotions or something. Still, regardless of the route the author decides to go, I'm excited to read it to the end.

IDK, Brother's tepid feelings toward his wife (especially when imouto is near) makes me wonder if he's not well aware of her feelings ... and has been for some time. I half expect to see him dealing with his conflicted emotions toward the two of them.

I think his reluctance for showing affection towards Kaoru in front of Uta is your typical "oh god I'M GONNA DIE OF EMBARRASSMENT if I do this in front of my sibling" thing and not so much of an indicator of how aware he is of Uta's feelings. I also think his lack of enthusiasm is actually because he's just oblivious to Kaoru's needs and desires. He seems like a good guy, but a bit dense.

BUT on a separate note, I do agree that he probably has some degree of awareness of Uta's feelings, even if it's very little.

last edited at May 28, 2017 10:44PM

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Image Comments 18 May 21:47
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The "contract" in question is a reference to Arisa's agreement in the series with Kasumi (the MC), where Arisa hands over a star-shaped guitar to Kasumi under the condition that Kasumi and her friends eat lunch with her at school everyday. Saaya, in this image, is proposing something similar so Arisa will continue eating lunch with her as well.

last edited at May 18, 2017 9:47PM

Seira
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There are only two comments in this thread that don't have any mention of Mira creating a non-NSFW work.

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they both unknowingly hurting each other until the end

Me too. I was hurt until the end ;_;

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So if Yuu turned Nana into a vampire, then Yuu needs to get another person to have her fresh supply of blood, and so Nana will get another person for her own supply of blood.

I see. This is how harems are formed - like pyramid schemes.

Ahh, the plot twist is that Rin's more of a businessman than a vampire.