Yay for the science babies, BOO for the cliffhanger. I wasn't expecting this until much later...but they wouldn't kill her off THAT quickly, would they?

last edited at Jun 15, 2021 1:55PM

RED ALERT! RED ALERT! This chick is yandere!

I didn't know I needed this in my life. Eula...put a ring on that archer's damn finger already!!

Uhhhh, latest chapter, page 3. Does she...not have underwear on???

Also, I don't mean to be that guy but uh...has there ever been any art, wholesome or horny, of these two outside of the series? I feel like fanart of Hayate and Honey - or any of them really - is nonexistent.

Oh. My damn. Ohhh my damn. THEY FINALLY DID IT!!!

But the part about not defeating X...does Hayate really think she can just turn X over to their side? That seems like a stretch...I mean, maybe not impossible, but...

NGL, I adore this series to the moon and back...but the lazy chick can be a little irritating at times. I dunno, I guess I'm just still waiting for the day one of them asks the other out on a real date.

Please tell me there's a follow up where she throws away the pillow and kisses the ever loving daylights out of her!

THAT'S HOW YOU FRACKIN' DO BABY! Don't spend too long building up the misunderstanding and leave the door open for a continuation! I absolutely love writing like this!

It's not perfect, but for this story it doesn't need to be!

Try as I may, I'm having a very difficult time pushing my way through this...I love Mira's art style, and her writing is excellent. But for the life of me I've never been able to understand BDSM and the appeal behind it. I can't even get past the first chapter...

Does this series at least touch on other things besides BDSM? Or is that the sole focus?

Hell what??? I mean...is this a normal occurrence for this artist? The art and NSFW were amazing but the story sort of...threw me off a cliff.

I'm gonna guess her potion is actually an aphrodisiac that also temporarily lowers inhibitions.

The irony then is that all these girls have nursed secret crushes on her all along. She was popular, she just didn't know it.

I wonder what would happen if she drank the potion herself.

We kinda saw that already, when she was made to do all of that cosplay.

I am...quite surprised. What if this love potion is just a potion that amplifies already existing emotion?

Is it just me, or is this a little hard to follow?

If those legs feel so light, Kase, then you better haul ass like there's no tomorrow! SPEED IS KEY!!!

Are the pages out of order or is the story just terribly confusing

"Terribly confusing" is an understatement. I love the art style, and the story and characters have an excellent premise, especially for something NSFW. But the writing is sloppy to the point of illegibility.

There could be any number of reasons why it's this bad, but it may get better later.

What even is happening? First Neko is all over Mikoto, now she wants to pretend the confession never happened??

Useless Princesses did this much better. This is...beyond ridiculous. I'm sticking with the story until the end but I really hope these misunderstandings clear up.

That was absolutely the wrong judgment call to make. Kurokawa's definitely going to need some recovery time from all of this. Whether or not Miki and the others choose to help her through it is probably what will make or break the rest of the series. Insofar as they see it now, Kurokawa's got problems, but it doesn't seem like any of them have recognized her inferiority complex.

This is so painfully realistic that it's hard to read, but...I can't stop reading it. I sincerely hope both Kurokawa and Fujishiro get the help they need - this is an incredibly tender topic, and not one to be taken lightly. The author may dig themselves into a hole if they aren't careful.

last edited at May 19, 2021 4:46PM

^I always thought splitting up for college was silly. Most universities will have most courses unless you want something quite esoteric- surely its not that hard to find a good uni that has good courses for BOTH parties subject? Then you can both just go to that 1 and nobody has to compromise.

As someone who's enrolled at a private university, this is much harder than you might think. In the early years, yes it is possible to pick out general courses that help to pad out your schedule while letting you stay together, but unless you're REALLY clueless about your future plans, you eventually have to start picking courses that more align with your interests and future plans - and that means spending less time with your partner whether you intend to or not. It's especially difficult if you're at a 4 year university - those courses in later years become more difficult as they become more specialized, so short of being a genius with a natural talent for studying, you can kiss much free time goodbye. T_T

I will say, though, the idea of Nanoha being a florist sounds an awful lot like someone else I know...someone who is currently dating a swift runner.

I'm barely into Chapter 2 but I feel like I'm having a difficult time following along. It feels like the author is trying to cram too much into the speech bubbles...

Does it get more refined as it goes along? I'm liking the story so far but the things these two say (or rather babble) makes it kind of hard.

I'm just gonna say right now, Relaire is THE cutest slime I have ever seen. Imagine if she grew to human size and took the combined appearance of Claire and Rei...that would be amazing.

Yeah, after reading Favor the Villainess, Citrus, Kase-san and other yuri series, this one just...doesn't feel right. I've only done the first two chapters but the bullying feels intentional - and the only real feedback gets crushed as soon as Momo loses her temper. It feels like its just not going anywhere.

God damn, I LOVE how innocent this chick is. Her innocence could cure cancer...

It's such a bizarre series, even for a yuri. I'm certainly enjoying it so far, but I can't help but wonder what the direction is for the two MC's relationship. The "Witch" is so quiet, simple with her answers, often monotone and rarely ever smiles. Yet she portrays just enough....personality in her responses that it leaves room for interpretation by the reader, which helps keep them engaged. The "Knight" clearly likes to tease and play with the "Witch" but rather than being put off or offended, she simply allows the "Knight" to do as she pleases and only brushes off her antics when they are visibly discomforting. She doesn't make much of an attempt to reply to the "Knight", but when she does it's short, simple and meaningful.

It's such a strange take on a yuri romance...and I'm definitely hoping to read more.

Just got caught up, and I'm...a bit torn with the story. The early chapters in Volume 1 and early Volume 2 kept a smile on my face almost the entire time. Now, the drama is trickling in and...it's beginning to clash with the art style and pacing a little. It doesn't feel forced, per se, but...something about it still gives off a bad vibe. I can't explain what it is, though.