This might end up being one of my favorite chapters. Getting a small glimpse of our mains characters from the mothers who had a hand in raising them was super interesting. And who can say they saw the "test of wills" coming?

Aha. Moma pretending to cry into the "sleeves" of her sleeveless top.

Did we really need that creep at the pool though? -_-

last edited at Jun 2, 2019 6:38PM

Rough in places but eh . . .alright. Had some really good moments too.

Good story. May help me get over my abhorrent vampire racism.

Did she say meow in English to a cat saying it in Japanese?

Seriously. We need werewolf the yuri of this quality.

last edited at May 30, 2019 9:37AM

Ch9 opens the first page with debugging so all I'm thinking about the entire chapter is this.

Ahahaha! Thanks for enlightening me about this.

This was yet another good chapter.

That was pretty neat.

Being fawned over by someone you're trying to move on from or someone you have moved on from is really frustrating. Especially if they said they want to be friends but then they try to put the moves on you. It's completely disrespectful and if it were a guy doing that to a girl we would all agree and call him a creep. It doesn't matter that Amane still loves her. She obviously doesn't love her enough to respect her boundaries and her feelings. Regardless on the break up.

I do feel for Amane though, having lingering feelings for someone. But trying to force yourself onto them just hurts both parties and that's how you LOSE someone forever.

Pretty much what I was about to say.

Why people so focus on Nene and Amane getting together again.
Poor Kou, people sure like to drop her like hot potatoes just see exes getting back together, sure they look good but things change no matter how well they interact with each other.

Some people liked the exes from the start.

I find it really surprising that so many people like Amane. I think she's incredibly annoying. She's short-sighted, narrow-minded, and embodies an anime archetype I despise. The short, pig-tailed, cutesy girl with lots of energy and an inferiority complex. I've seen her a thousand times and I never like her any more than I did the last time. She's stuck in the past and I don't want her getting back with Nene. She needs to learn to face reality and respect the feelings of others. But she's so loud and selfish that she only sees what she wants to. I can't stand her. Chapter 5 is easily the worst so far.

THANK YOU

Yeah. I can see that. Easily.I don't quite hate her just yet. Maybe she will have a nice coming around arc. At least she kinda showed up partially to help out her friends at work

Edit:but yeah. She is rather unlikable. I guess I just feel like . . .the author is going to do SOMETHING with her other than mope about an ended relationship.

last edited at May 28, 2019 10:27PM

Very lovely. Nicely done.

I don't care who ends up with who. As long as it's a good story. Which this still is so far.

Interesting.
Really love this story. Glad to see more of it.

To think I almost missed this. Really cool art

Oh. That was an interesting use of a third wheel.

Oh. It went that way . . . Hmm. Guess ill give it a another chapter or so. I've no fondness for yanderes or stalkers.

Did people seriously thinking Yashiro as a threat? I mean she just a little kid and Shimamura only see her as little sister. IMO Yashiro is there so we can see Adachi's cute jealousy act.

Personally, cute is the last thing I called displays of jealousy. Best I can do is a knowledge it as a character trait. Some guy on the radio said he liked making his girlfriend jealous. -_- don't wanna say what that made me feel like doing to him. idk. I seem to be at odds with the comment sections here half the time anyway.

last edited at May 19, 2019 7:25PM

You know I haven't been able to stop thinking about the last development with the main pair. Can't wait for the follow up. Such an uncharacteristic display of aggression! :3

Had to re-read chapter 3. God this stories particular brand of chaos is so good! The main pair is great. Especially Nekozaki. Think I got her name right.

Awesome. This one is being updated again. Yay!

This seems like it could be real fun. Such a random start.

last edited at May 18, 2019 11:00PM

Back to the quality of story direction that made me enjoy this so much to begin with. Woo!

cough well then. Here is my free cent and a half(still a ripoff by the way) I hate vampires but I respect the amount of creativity that went into creating them. I just don't like the common elements/traits that go into the average vampire. Blood sucking? Gross. Living corpse? Gross.

I do have exceptions like the awesome. kain from legacy of kain.

Always thought the sunlight destroys them was a bad idea. Seems too limiting and awkward from a writing perspective. Just my take.

Living forever does sound miserable. Maybe a few more decades sure but forever? Just my take. Not like we can test it out.

This story is still really good.

last edited at May 17, 2019 4:15PM

That was an interesting chapter. I'm not especially impatient but even i wonder where this going and about what time that Yuri train is going to roll in.

Love delinquents. One day i'd like to write one paired with a sweet, airheaded gyaru. Sigh. Someday ....

last edited at May 16, 2019 2:10AM

My favorite pair. So much fun.

I don't know what wrong with Love Triangle xD I know there are like ALOT drama. But, I have always liked drama like that, jealous and ex girlfriend stuff. And I do kinda want to know what they different characters going to be with together in the end. :)

Well a couple of reasons why love triangles are generally just sighed at:
-They are overused (though what isnt these days)
-Someone by definition always loses. Which hurts.
-It makes people argue about who is better between the two and creates flame wars. It's never fun when a good character gets shat on just because the other might be a better fit for the MC.
-Just like with a harem, love triangle MCs are almost always useless pieces of undecisive trash. At least if the story is longer than a one-shot.
-Triangles are edgy hearts.

Like always, execution makes the difference, but I know why they are not the reader's favorite, but a very popular tool for writers.

A lot of what you said is my reasons. Especially the flame wars. I don't even ship or care most of the time. Watching the "die for my ship" brigade though. I don't actually see it that much on this site though.

I'm trying to be less harsh towards love trianglesIf . If i pull it off I hope I'm considered for the best anime character arch of 2019 award. _______

I don't even have a problem with this one. The others broke up. Seems fine to me. Clear lines. Backed up by law. I think.

last edited at May 12, 2019 7:25PM