The dialogue was... strange! But the girls are lovely and they look realistic, which is a big plus!
I love how the younger one tries to dress more maturely, lolz! It's very cute.
Seems like it used to be longer, but got cut down? idk
It is very very cute... a lot of questions popped up as I read it but got answered shortly.
Very nice! I liked it a lot!
(twins born 'one day apart' isn't a problem btw, lolz!)
page #9 Since -before birth-, actually... (where's the Bold tag?)
It's true... cute animal ears will hook me every time,
Well, for those predicting 'creepy vibes' (I agreed back then too!) ...here they are!!
And for those who thought this was a 'hack job' of stereotypes? Nope! Guess again! Lolz! Layers of personality on all the main girls...
The twisting plot is delightful, the MC isn't an idiot nor is she super-powered... she's just kind of... innocent and normal.
Wasn't convinced with the first two chapters, but 3&4 sold me!
Comment 666! Do I win a prize!
I was leery about this when it started, but it is turning out quite well, I think. It isn't 'ordinary' and neither should it be, these are highly unusual people in very unusual situations.
One of the best parts is how... normal their lives are outside of their relationships. That's good writing and servers to show how the outside world has no idea what's going on...
Nice!
This is really top quality! The art is fantastic, the writing is crisp and believable, everything is just terrific.
And cute, it's just as cute as can be!
Nanoha reminded me a lot of a character from Kaworu Watashiya's (Kodomo no Jikan) story... it had lots of Yuri but was dropped by the translator because it wasn't all that good.
Oh. it was on here: https://dynasty-scans.com/series/joou_sama_no_eshi
Anyhow, this is a real keeper! there's 16+ more chapters and I really look forward to them!
TYVM!
This needs a second chapter... oh look, there it is!
This was pure gold, I don't know if even the mangaka knows how wonderful this was... I just am smitten :-)
One of my all-time favorite shows! It's far from perfect but parts of it are just glorious!
Very nice how it stays true to the characters and yet puts them in such lewd situations. And they worked the mascot into it too.
Sequel demanded! Not just for this but the show too. (plenty of opportunity for 2-3 lewd doujins based on various pairings, eh?)
This was really nice! Much more 'believable' than many stories. The characters are complex but in a natural way.
It's clear to anyone with eyes that Mutsuki is smitten with Oshimi, and now the other way too.
Good clean yuri fun!!
So I don't want to be that person that has to always find a Yuri ship.....but is it just me or is there something between the MC and Chizuru?
That was the only reason I read it, lolz! The tall shy girl and the cute tomgirl =happy times! There's still hope I think, and possible yaoi for her brother...
This was delightful, their backstory is obviously really interesting. What parents would split up twins? Especially identical ones? Horrible!!
It ends far too soon, it's a shame to waste such an unusual plot in such a short format. Further chapters are required!
(With lots of sex)
HEY! Who said that! Naughty...
