What a lame ending. Takemiya should stuck with shorter stories. This started strong but started declining middle way and at the end it seemed like she was just phoning it in.

Great story, I missed this Shuninta with her light hearted and funny stories.

As a side note, strictly speaking, there's nothing wrong with neither incest nor pedophilie. Nearly every fetish was normal at different points of time and there's no biological reason either. Any problem stems only from the (sometimes) strict social norms on modern society.

The art could be better but is one of the best NanoFate douijns I've read nonetheless

Regarding alll the critcism towards Ria's confession, I might be spitballing here but it seems that Ria did as a mean to push Mari into taking action.

Great story, I miss this Takemiya Jin that does fluffy stories and not drama.

heres an article that explains it in engrish. http://www.animenewsnetwork.com/news/2014-11-01/yuri-brand-st-michael-girls-school-offers-anime-if-it-gets-50000-twitter-followers/.80571

Reading the comments on that article, did the Sono Hanabira series ended or something?

They only got 2.5k

Three days later and they're sitting at 7400 followers. They might pull this off D:

For me is less that they aren't getting together and more that the resolution is incredibly sloppy. The sudden timeskip messed with the flow, we jumped from Youko as protagonist to Nana for no good reason, the third chapter feels more like a pilot for a new story and not as a follow up to the previous chapters and in general, the drama is getting old on Jin's works. At this point that the character end together on her stories would be something truly shocking.

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Nah, whatever happened they didn't do anything intimate as Mei and Matsuri talk at the train showed.

So much for Les-bears.... :(

They only got 2.5k

Doesn't twitter have a button to translate text? I am such a noob when it comes to these social media thingy majiggers.

Used to, it dissapeared a few months ago for some weird reason.

I find very hard for them to hit that mark unless people starts using alt accounts.

i am curious what she meant by "relapse" though. Am I forgetting a plot point?

Given the context and the events that happened, I'd say that she was talking about her drinking.

And c'mon guys, the only way this could be more gay is with Ran having her way with Keiko.

New chapter released and for once, it wasn't very sad despite Gokicha having really bad luck. She's such a good girl <3

Chapter 27 has just been released. Mia's mom is something else alright XD

Did anyone notice the discrepancy between how Yuzu says she met Matsuri in chapter 11 vs chapter 12?

Haha good memory. They shouldve edited better

There isn't a discrepancy though?

The first flashback only shows when Matsuri moved in with Yuzu saying hi from her home and the second is when they actually hanged out together for the first time.

I don't believe that Yuzu fully understood the situation, she's just so earnest and true to her desire to make people around her happy and so, she assumed (correctly) Mei's motivations this time.

Matsuri on the other was really fleshed out as a character and as expected, her actions were to catalyst for development between the sisters. Mei has finally starting to come out from her shell and taking the initiative instead of reacting to the situations. Without a doubt, a great chapter and I'm really happy at how Citrus is handling the drama (in stark contrast to The Feelings we have to endure for example)

That being said, it was a poor choice to resolve Mei's date offscreen. Probably was to space constraints but it hurt the narrative a little.

Eh... if youre basing your entire relationship solely on how much sex you do/don't have. then it's not a relationship.

But that wasn't what happened on the chapter, Asuma did her best to make things work looking for alternatives to her needs but the only thing I got from fue was "everything is a drag, let me alone. I wanna sleep" It was only until Meru faced her that she took the initiative and even then, her actions showed that she wasn't enterely convinced by it.

People is different and that is what it makes relationship so wonderful but both parties need to make the effort for it, with how apatetic Fue is on those chapters is a wonder that Asuma didn't break with her on the spot.

The art is utterly fantastic but I'm getting burned out of all the drama. They're college students for god's sake, just fucking TALK things out.

The chapter zero also really soured me on Fue, one thing is that you don't find sex appealing but that level of apathy is intolerable.

Lovely

FANTASTIC art but it goes SLOOOOOOW.

Aaaaaaand this has just gone off the rails.

Okay, this is the first work of Jin that I've found simply bad. The drama was already too much and the time skip was the final straw. Meh

Just a heads-up guys, there's an omake just released that really ups the Yuri (played for laughs of course but is worth seeing)

That was such a great chapter, Haruka does love Moritani after all.

Really cute chapter but it felt disjointed.

This is so perfect and fluffy, just what I needed to improve my very VERY shitty week.