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ColdGoldLazarus
Cglishmini
joined Apr 12, 2018

Really love what they've done with Miko here. She's got this whole classic monster romance tortured-love dynamic going on with Hinako wherein she can't suppress an urge to feed on her, but also, in actively repressing that desire, is perhaps the most human of the cast, while Hinako, in her absence of anything resembling self-preservation, is both more human than instinct-driven beasts and unusual in that even humans often bow to that primal self-preservative desire when things get hairy, making her a subtler example of the human-inhuman paradox embodied by the other two rather than a mere 'pure' human. I also love how Miko, Hinako and Shiori are all united by the theme of a 'vow that clashes with your desire', wherein Hinako wants to join her parents in heaven (which might be an actual possibility, now that we know divine deities exist, which I hope homegirl realizes in the future), but can't opt for expedient death because of her promise to them; Miko's compelled to eat Hinako, but retains some scraps of a pride & responsibility as a guardian spirit as well as what seems to be a genuine adoration for Hinako; Shiori has none of these petty mortal moral compunctions and is majestically, regally inhuman, proud of her status as a creature far truer to herself than the rotting leftover and the lurking hypocrite, but is paradoxically vulnerable to the same vice that causes so many gods and demons to grow engulfed in complicated human affairs- her sense of taste is ironically perhaps the most rational, 'civilized' motivation that currently exists among the cast.

The main trio here is honestly among the strongest I've seen in any story I've read in recent memory, since they embody a lot of your standard triplicate idea divisions, such as the id-ego-superego or heaven-purgatory-hell, but never completely, always complex enough to have a nested contradiction that renders them more than archetypes. I could write essays on this, but one aspect in particular that fascinates me is how they're going to engage with the idea of divinity and guardian spirits, especially since they're confirmed to share some manner of biological link with the monsters. Are they different species? Are the monsters fallen angels who turned away from their purpose and became enemies of humanity? Are guardian spirits merely monsters who defected or were tamed? If a guardian spirit seems capable of degenerating into a beast, can a monster ascend to a higher status through noble deeds (this might end up being the endgame for Shiori, intentional or not, since mermaids are more often portrayed as sagacious, beautiful spirits than her Captain Cephalopod schtick, and her 'redeem Hinako's soul to the highest joys' plan seems like the kind of thing a guardian spirit would do if you removed the little subclaws at the end)? What happens if Hinako snacks on a monster? So many questions.

Also, Hinako being from a divinely-favoured family is probably one factor in her deliciousness to monsters (who I assume cropped up not recently, but were there all along and simply eradicated by pest control carried out by Miko, possibly when she was stronger or had help), and I love how Shiori and Miko's agendas regarding Hinako both clash with and support each other? Miko wants to keep Hinako alive and happy, but the process of living renders Hinako miserable, which might reduce her potential flavour by making her depressed and rotten, mitigating Miko's appetite, but also giving Shiori a massive window in which to prey on her, since her target's security is ensured at the cost of her flavour. And Shiori's whole convoluted 'be happy and love life so I can murder you at optimal flavour' is technically the best shot they have at making Hinako happy like Miko wants, since the prospect of a beautiful death seems to be her best motivator, but this also has the side-effect of both ensuring Hinako's death in the future (if Shiori isn't lying) and making her progressively more delicious, weakening Miko's already fraying restraint. Absolutely brilliant intersection of desires at work here, with each character being thwarted by precisely what they hold precious. It's like if No Exit was adapted into a lesbian romance catering to monsterfuckers, in which case I hope the endgame is polyamourous (polyamovorous)?

Seconding this analysis. All three play so well off of each other, and I can't wait to see what becomes of their dynamic with all this now out in the open.

Cglishmini
joined Apr 12, 2018

Only just reading this today, but I love it so far!
Hopefully the anime adaptation isn't just another one-season no resolution thing like Bloom Into You

ColdGoldLazarus
Cglishmini
joined Apr 12, 2018

This is gonna be a glorious trainwreck

ColdGoldLazarus
Cglishmini
joined Apr 12, 2018

"Do you not believe in them?"
"I don't"
Actually does

ColdGoldLazarus
Cglishmini
joined Apr 12, 2018

Yeah, light BDSM is fine-ish for me, but that girl's got some SERIOUS issues. Not sure if I want to stick around or not.

I'm waiting to see like, how they approach this. If they treat it like it's fine and the older lady agrees to beat her up as instructed I'd definitely be put off, but that they haven't jumped right into that gives me hope that she'll instead try to actually help this girl work through her issues and whatnot. Guess we'll have to see.

ColdGoldLazarus
Cglishmini
joined Apr 12, 2018

Dang, that penultimate chapter was such a tease

ColdGoldLazarus
Cglishmini
joined Apr 12, 2018

Several people here have mentioned how this has got citrus vibes. I never read citrus but what things in common with citrus do you notice (i.e., the vibes the two share in common)? If it’s the sexually manipulative(?) Reiko, then I might sit out on this series. While I enjoy all kinds of yuri stories, my preference lies with wholesome romances, and this is basically as far away from that as possible.

Basically similar setup of Gyaru protagonist and dark-haired strict girl (Student Council President in Citrus) being at odds, and the strict one being really uncomfortably sexually manipulative (Moreso in Citrus than here, at least based on the first chapter) and toxic toward the protagonist. But the narrative bends over backward to make them wind up together despite by all indications making a terrible pair and several better options being available to the protagonist, because they're the ones on the cover.

Though at least in this one's defense, Morals Committe gal hasn't directly done anything on Mei's level, and the Gyaru's blackmail attempt makes her a bit more culpable than Yuzu was, so maybe this will come out feeling less one-sidedly icky. Or it could be even more icky, since both of them are sketchy and not just one. Given how much it feels like a fanfic with the names changed so far, could just wind up being the 50 Shades Of Grey to Citrus's Twilight Saga,

But I shouldn't judge just yet, I still have the second and third chapters to read.

EDIT: Second chapter has made me sympathize even more with the Gyaru. Still not sold on the dark-haired girl, but she hasn't done anything worse either. The class rep is definitely giving me Harumin vibes, so chances are I'm gonna be rooting fruitlessly for her to whisk away the Gyaru

EDIT EDIT: It feels like they're really setting up the Moral Committee gal as a mystery, but I hope they don't drag it out too long, because right now I don't have much reason to care about her whereas for all her faults the Gyaru is pretty well-developed and sympathetic. Though I will say the ending of the chapter got a chuckle out of me, so that's something.

I am kinda wondering, based on the train and parting scene, if she has some sort of crush on the gyaru but hasn't said anything since she's aware of the hostility in return, but that's more of a crack-theory at this point than serious speculation.

last edited at Nov 21, 2021 9:14AM

Cglishmini
joined Apr 12, 2018

This is off to a pretty straightforward start - exactly what it says on the tin. Really interested to see, though, where things go from here.

This reminds me of the series with the bus driver

What series is that?

This one, probably

https://dynasty-scans.com/series/about_a_college_girl_who_gets_picked_up_at_a_mixer_by_an_older_girl

Ahh, thanks!

I am full expecting Mahiru to turn out to be a sadistic top

That would be an interesting twist, heh...

ColdGoldLazarus
Cglishmini
joined Apr 12, 2018

I really love this so far! Artstyle is fantastic, characters are incredibly cute yet badass in their own ways, (YaoYao is simultaneously adorable and lowkey terrifying) and the story is really really well-presented thus far. Definitely looking forward to further chapters!

Cglishmini
joined Apr 12, 2018

This is off to a pretty straightforward start - exactly what it says on the tin. Really interested to see, though, where things go from here.

This reminds me of the series with the bus driver

What series is that?

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ColdGoldLazarus
Cglishmini
joined Apr 12, 2018

Well, that was... A weird read

ColdGoldLazarus
Cglishmini
joined Apr 12, 2018

Foxzilla vs Fish
Dawn of Yandere Monster Girl Harem

Hype for the new volume release! This is an incredibly interesting premise so far. Hoping for poly ending...

Also interested to learn what it is that makes her so attractive/tasty to monsters in the first place, if her depression "smells" like gross rotting to them.

Hold up, all this extra does is make me like Miko more. I really don't want to think that she's the enemy Shiori makes her out to be.

Seconding this

Ah sorry I was thinking of Miko, though it is also possible for the MC to die as well. I just want them all to be happy x_x

Same here! Fingers crossed for this to (somehow) be resolved peacefully and for them both to become her GFs

one goes boom, the other goes crack
one has got a temper and the other is wack
blondy trusts one who says she's fodder
would be wierd if she distrusts the other

This is gold XD

Man, I love how this story plays around with 'monster-romance' conventions. The whole Inhuman character goes 'I can change myself into whatever form you'd like', only for the protagonist to say 'I like your original form the best' is a staple scenario, but this variant is rendered hilarious by the fact that Shiori's actual natural form probably looks something out of R'lyeh, and her 'original' form in this context is just a conventionally attractive shape a predator takes to lure in their prey. Accordingly, Hinako's 'I prefer your original self' response is provoked more by a disgust of the transformation process than actual attraction to Shiori's usual form (though she definitely feels something special for her). They've essentially got a predator-prey relationship where the predator's utter lack of subtlety is balanced out by the prey's utter lack of self-preservative instinct, and so they loop around into a bizarre sort of companionship. Peak romance, can't wait for more.

Seconding all of this as well

last edited at Nov 16, 2021 6:38PM

ColdGoldLazarus
Cglishmini
joined Apr 12, 2018

Huh
That was certainly a turn, but I guess I should have seen it coming. I was expecting a history of prostitution, but not this. Interested to see how it goes from here, though...

ColdGoldLazarus
Cglishmini
joined Apr 12, 2018

Jeez, Liskarm, have some chill
Love the contrast between her blaming herself for not protecting Franka one moment and then ruthlessly tazing her kouhai the next.

ColdGoldLazarus
Cglishmini
joined Apr 12, 2018

Finally caught up with this
Glad it got localized, and am happy to support the artist (once I have a steady income again)
But wishing it didn't have to happen right in the middle of THIS T_T
I see links to the announcement post, but does anyone have a link to where it's actually hosted?

ColdGoldLazarus posted:

I'm really glad you liked the credits <3

This is horrendously belated, but may I ask what the credits page on Chapter 13 is from?

There's from Virgins' Empire, specifically Chapter 200.

Ahh, thanks!

ColdGoldLazarus
Cglishmini
joined Apr 12, 2018

Ikenai Otona?

That's the one! Thank you!

ColdGoldLazarus
Cglishmini
joined Apr 12, 2018

I remember reading one a while back about a woman going to a gas station/convenience store late at night and striking up a friendship with the night clerk, who was like, almost out of highschool. I think it had a couple chapters to it, but I don't remember for sure, might have just been a oneshot.

ColdGoldLazarus
Cglishmini
joined Apr 12, 2018

this is how I feel after a long and arduous day of trying to enjoy mainstream media and its excessive heteronormativity.
thanks dynasty scans dot com for always being a reliable refuel point

Oh, I feel this in my bones

ColdGoldLazarus
Cglishmini
joined Apr 12, 2018

I'm really glad you liked the credits <3

This is horrendously belated, but may I ask what the credits page on Chapter 13 is from?

ColdGoldLazarus
Cglishmini
joined Apr 12, 2018

Should this have like, a dubious consent tag or something like that? Since the short-haired woman didn't exactly seem all that into what was happening.

Cglishmini
joined Apr 12, 2018

The more highly advanced the robot is, the greater the concern that it's sentient. So the more similar a sex robot (i.e. a robot whose purpose is to provide sex, and is not allowed to refuse) is to a human, the more similar it is to a sex slave as well, in practical terms. Nadeshiko is very easy to mistake for a bio-human, even if it's unclear if she's actually sentient.

This could be a reason for a legal ban of realistic sex robots, and a the reason why Tsuda may feel bad about leaving Nadeshiko in "sleep mode" longer than necessary. Powering off Nadeshiko any time she doesn't "need" her (e.g. for sex, or companionship) might feel like denying any semblance of individuality or agency from her, perceived or real.

An interesting interpretation that'd explain a lot. I'd like it to be explored more in the story, but I fear that this manga is much more interested in wacky hijinx than in questions of sentience and humans' relations with the AI...

Yeah, it'll be interesting to see how this handles things going forward. These first few chapters feel like setup for the overall premise, so now that that's out of the way, we'll have to see whether it gets into meatier topics like that or sticks to the current tone, and to what degree in either case. Personally, I feel like the shenanigans and serious explorations don't necessarily have to be mutually exclusive, so I hope it aims for both, but only time will tell.

Cglishmini
joined Apr 12, 2018

Mad Max Yuri Road

I want to live in the universe where this is a thing

Best of wishes, Linterdiction!

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ColdGoldLazarus
Cglishmini
joined Apr 12, 2018

"Still a better love story than twilight"
Scanlator pages are the gift that keeps on giving

I don't know the source material, but this is still pretty interesting even without context ^^
Also I think the first time I've seen Vampires able to feed on each other...

ColdGoldLazarus
Cglishmini
joined Apr 12, 2018

Finally caught up with this!

A really great series, and I love that it's not afraid to move on from its initial premise and really just let the characters grow and stuff.

ColdGoldLazarus
Cglishmini
joined Apr 12, 2018

That was lovely, but I absolutely don't believe in the mom acting like that. That said, I haven't really dealt with such people.

That sort of manipulative "Oh I'm sorry for overdoing things, here I'll make you a deal out of the generosity of my heart, you stay in my control and I'll do a good thing for you or you strike off on your own and I'll leave you out in the cold" bullshit is exactly how my parents act ALL THE TIME, so IMO it was pretty realistic. The capitulating to a classmate thing maybe less so, but I'm willing to buy it because of the whole public disturbance angle of the scene

last edited at Oct 30, 2021 6:53AM