D'aawww, that was nice.

Hah, I love these sort of imgs showing different situations.

@Ch8 Inception-ish chapter. xD

That went to a... rather odd place. Is this normal in Touhou stuff? xD

@TheHaku: Wtf someone else here knows Sekirei! I watched that when ecchi/harem was my life back when I didn't know any better...yet I think it was this one that got me into yuri, I have a soft spot for Sekirei because of that...for some reason I felt really curious about the yuri couple now I know why XD...and no they treated that couple with respect as far as I remember I think one of them died and the was a lot of angst afterwards you're probably thinking of one of the other girls.

^ I read about it... is it Uzume and Chiho? Hospitalized girl or something... I tend to read about series before I go into em (if I go into em). Had read from this one long ago.

Might cheer ya up, found this in wikipedia:
"...snip...It is unknown if Uzume is dead or just deactivated like many other Sekirei, but in episode 10 of Pure Engagement, it is briefly shown on Matsu's computer that she is damage level 4, meaning seriously injured, but not dead which is level 5."

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Need to get that strawberry out, thats the only way!

That sugar bucket joke... perfect.

I think it flows better (making it easier to understand) if ch 1.5 and 2 were together, just as one.

I really thought the Wishful thinking tag would help people get the idea. Meanwhile folks on IRC asked me to change chapter 2 to 1.5. I will wait for more opinions, but in the end, there is no clear solution in sight.

Mmm, I see.

Heh, would've been better if the artist used one of the usual go-to's indicators of imagination vs reality, a small box saying "reality", or something of the sort.

I played with the chapter numbering and will also move page 13 to chapter 1.5.

Ch2 Wishful thinking?

Edit: Nvm, just saw ch3 xD

So 2 was the way she hoped it would go?

"I’ve been seeing confusion about what happened from a lot of people. 13, 14 was what Sun Jing thought in her head would happen as she was running towards Qiu Tong. 15, 16, 17, 18 was what actually happened when she caught up to Qiu Tong and introduced herself." Via yaoi-blcd

15-18 is our chapter 2, or reference' sake.

Isn't this NOT being released in chapters?

Thought it was just bundles of imgs released, with no clear separation for the most part...

You are correct!

I think it flows better (making it easier to understand) if ch 1.5 and 2 were together, just as one.

Ch2 Wishful thinking?

Edit: Nvm, just saw ch3 xD

So 2 was the way she hoped it would go?

Wow, the author really doesn't make that clear. It almost seems like the two chapters should be reversed.

Isn't this NOT being released in chapters?

Thought it was just bundles of imgs released, with no clear separation for the most part...

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Ch2 Wishful thinking?

Edit: Nvm, just saw ch3 xD

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^ Does that happen in the anime?
I don't feel like going through the manga... 355 Chapters is a lil too much for me.

Why does everyone hate toys? they are great.

Zealous yuri purists!... Well some ppl are simply not into it and find em to be a turn-off.

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Maji de Watashi ni Koi Shinasai - harem has a yuri sidecouple, pretty explicit, you see em kiss and naked in bed (probably after doing it). They don't get much screentime tho (just about 2 yuri scenes... they appear half way through the anime). I don't know anything about the harem or plot, I just skimmed through it to watch yuri scenes... Worth it! xD

Negima - heram has subtext yuri going on (tho they do kiss in the anime, seen screencaps...), in the manga's ending it says both of them get married making it PRETTY OBVIOUS that it was with each other (cuz subtext...). Never seen the series, I just took a look at that last manga chapter.

Anyways, characters like Kuroko here were the first I yuri characters I saw in anime, well... calling them that feels wrong, they are just joke characters. Probably why it took me a while to get into the genre, I thought it was gonna be nonsense similar to those, was a pretty bad first impression.

That was adorable.

Something I really like of Yohane is how all of her characters have a truly distinctive body type and face. Shame that she leans towards the skinny body type though.

http://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/touhou_aojou_wakugai_choco_no_hi#4

I feel... unsatisfied by this. >.>

Ecchi is just weak porn. Rarely ever satisfies in cases like this.

Dammit Ooshima, draw full-on porn like previous stuff!

Comedy is very subjective, what some people find hilarious, others don't (that's why I think is the hardest genre to write).

Yea, comedy in this case is not doing it for me, not a single giggle so far... Well, I did smile at that last bit where they thought father was dead.

That whole "treatment' scene was great, especially with "father" not understanding what was happening to her. Good, goofy stuff. And then the next day the inspectors or whatever remind me of the overarching premise I was sort of hoping the author had forgotten about.

But that is what the manga is rooted onto, that is the plot, and it will probably be around all throughout... I also feel like it detracts from it quite badly.

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HNNNG!

Funny story, I actually thought this would get rejected and earn me a stern lecture on the proper use of the Paintbrush tool.

Don't see that much around here, tho some ppl get REALLY serious about it for some unknown reason.

Comedy is very subjective, what some people find hilarious, others don't (that's why I think is the hardest genre to write).

Yea, comedy in this case is not doing it for me, not a single giggle so far... Well, I did smile at that last bit where they thought father was dead.

Not a big fan of toys, but I liked this.

These feel more like erotic art displays now... They are pretty good.

That's exactly what I did, actually.

Nothing too serious tho, I am just messing with ya.

Good thing you are not a perfectionist who would go back to re-edit it! :p

/poke /poke

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So we don't keep derailing this thread, I posted my answers on the Citrus thread.

I only made statements, not interested in discussing, would be pointless.

When I give it a close look, I really did muck that background up...

Its fine, its fine. Its not like you deformed the flower patterns :p

Ch54... Armpits?

You're being way too harsh. They're high school girls and having dramas about everything is just like they are.

And hell, Keiko wasn't that different to Mei on High school.

It's not about who the characters are, its the writing itself... it is terrible specially when looking at the sources of drama and how everything develops, character's actions and behaviors are nonsensical and feed into the terrible drama. It is a bad soap opera.

Comparing Citrus and Stretch, even if not exactly of the same genre, it is pretty obvious that Stretch is far superior in writing quality.