Yohane makes me love that pairing. So adorable. <3
DizBomber
Dec 20, 2015 1:05PM
So damn cute!
EvilDevil
Dec 20, 2015 10:59PM
should be "focus more" not "more focus".
Shynaku
Dec 21, 2015 1:38AM
EvilDevil, I always do appreciate the corrections, but this is a case where I'll disagree. Her language is to sound a bit stiff and awkward, and "more focus" accomplishes that. Grammar is weird, but it's not gibberish and sounds (to me) like it's stressing the 'focussing' rather than the 'housework'.
starsaber123
Dec 23, 2015 1:40PM
No shynaku...evildevil is right. It should be focus more. Maybe the word "put" was left out of the translation between "to" and "more?"
Anyway......I love Yohane's work!
neversung
Dec 27, 2015 7:12PM
No starsaber, Shynaku is right. "to more focus on housework" is a grammatically older phrasing that has fallen out of fashion, yet it perfectly conveys what Shynaku says the intention was. It's stiffer, older fashioned, and "awkward sounding" from a modern language perspective, but it is grammatically sound.
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sporkfeedme
Jan 1, 2016 5:24PM
Aw, how adorable. Wonder how Alice would feel if she saw this. XD
Nezchan
Jan 1, 2016 5:27PM
If you take the doujin where they got together as authoritative, she probably couldn't. Shanghai explains that when Alice is nearby, she falls under her influence and thus is only fully autonomous when they're separated. Although it would be interesting to see how she reacts to learning about her "daughter" having a relationship with her best friend.
Nezchan
Jan 1, 2016 5:28PM
Also, the idea of Marisa focusing on housework is pretty hilarious.
![[yohane]%2002](/system/images_images/000/004/268/full/[Yohane]%2002.webp)
Chantelune Dec 20, 2015 6:32AM
Yohane makes me love that pairing. So adorable. <3
DizBomber Dec 20, 2015 1:05PM
So damn cute!
EvilDevil Dec 20, 2015 10:59PM
should be "focus more" not "more focus".
Shynaku Dec 21, 2015 1:38AM
EvilDevil, I always do appreciate the corrections, but this is a case where I'll disagree. Her language is to sound a bit stiff and awkward, and "more focus" accomplishes that. Grammar is weird, but it's not gibberish and sounds (to me) like it's stressing the 'focussing' rather than the 'housework'.
starsaber123 Dec 23, 2015 1:40PM
No shynaku...evildevil is right. It should be focus more. Maybe the word "put" was left out of the translation between "to" and "more?"
Anyway......I love Yohane's work!
neversung Dec 27, 2015 7:12PM
No starsaber, Shynaku is right. "to more focus on housework" is a grammatically older phrasing that has fallen out of fashion, yet it perfectly conveys what Shynaku says the intention was. It's stiffer, older fashioned, and "awkward sounding" from a modern language perspective, but it is grammatically sound.
last edited at Dec 27, 2015 7:12PM
sporkfeedme Jan 1, 2016 5:24PM
Aw, how adorable. Wonder how Alice would feel if she saw this. XD
Nezchan Jan 1, 2016 5:27PM
If you take the doujin where they got together as authoritative, she probably couldn't. Shanghai explains that when Alice is nearby, she falls under her influence and thus is only fully autonomous when they're separated. Although it would be interesting to see how she reacts to learning about her "daughter" having a relationship with her best friend.
Nezchan Jan 1, 2016 5:28PM
Also, the idea of Marisa focusing on housework is pretty hilarious.