Putting the sex aside, the story was cute. I don't have any problems with nsfw materials, but, as it said, it was out of place. I mean, they could have had sex if something "more" was developed...
Well... whatever, I liked it.
Something "more"
... Just been proposed to
???
Ahahaha! Now I read it, sounded a bit... God. e _e';
I meant, the problem about the "sex sex" scene was the way the author introduced it. It was like "Ah, maybe no one will like it, let's put some sex to satisfy".
You know, they would ended up having sex anyway, but it was too harsh, abrupt. At least I didn't feel anything that could give me "chills". First you have a sweet scene and then an "I'll cum!" line. LOOOL!
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