Very nice cute story for a one-shot. At least the prince was not a jerk and choose to admit his defeat.

The kiss= lifting the curse....It a good thing that they kiss as soon as possible after they hug...Because if they had panic and waited a few more seconds then it's won't be a minor scar but possibly losing chunks of her flesh/muscles...Thankfully didn't go the bittersweet tragedy route.

Kiss of true first then hug= no chance of poison scars.
Emotional hug then kiss ASAP after a few seconds= A small minor facial scar as result of their emotional reunion (Kind like a minor scar or badge of honor).

She probably doesn't mind the scar though (Surface level Thankfully and not body horror type scar).

Yellow eye childhood friend teasing her crush and calling her a perv...Takes one to know one lol XD

Though technically blue eye is just admiring her friend 'well tone muscles'...Soon though in the future her friend might be 100% correct in calling her a perv though~ The benefits of staying in shape/healthy~!

Time is on Yellow eye's side...She just got to keep building up her affection points, making blue eye more conscious of her and hopefully/eventually blue eye will develop enough feels to give dating a chance after a few more months XD

Therapy is good (Assuming you have a good well understanding therapist that want to actually help and won't judge you like one comment said above) for people to have to understand and deal with their emotions and mental issues....TOO BAD IT COSTS SO MUCH MONEY AND ALCOHOL IS CHEAPER (+SOCIAL STIGMA of appearing unstable to people who don't understand much about therapy...Plus some people don't want to go to therapy since they think they can deal with their own emotional mental issues~) XD

You referred to the comment above, and I’m assuming you meant mine, since it's the one directly above yours. I’m fully aware of the concept of therapy and how it would benefit Miyagi, especially compared to what she did to Sendai. I was simply sharing what I observed and giving my opinion it wasn’t meant to come off as rude nor to judge them in any way.

...My bad...I didn't mean you, I was just giving my worthless 2 cents on the whole therapy topic above that many posters are chatting and talking about (Started on page 10 and till this page) XD

Probably should have been more especially when I said comment above, many comment above talking about therapy. Your comment was a short amusing funny type of comment type about the latest chapter to me though, good humor lol.

I apologize too for not being specific enough, no need to apologize to me since you have nothing to apologize for lol

P.S- I was making a minor joke about Therapy costing too much money and being drunk is the cheaper optional with the all caps. My humor is dark and weird.

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Therapy is good (Assuming you have a good well understanding therapist that want to actually help and won't judge you like one comment said above) for people to have to understand and deal with their emotions and mental issues....TOO BAD IT COSTS SO MUCH MONEY AND ALCOHOL IS CHEAPER (+SOCIAL STIGMA of appearing unstable to people who don't understand much about therapy...Plus some people don't want to go to therapy since they think they can deal with their own emotional mental issues~) XD

[Newest chapter thoughts]

This is a sign/example of why power dynamics can be a bad thing in a relationship...Rude...Very very rude move by Miyagi...I understand she want to see the MC (Sendai)'s unique facial expression...but doing that just to see her get angry...You know you can find better ways to see her angry expression....Buy a game console and pwn her in games till she rage quits from your sick gamer insults/burns lol.

Sure MC(Sendai) is being paid but MC's main reasons for hanging out with Miyagi is not mainly for the money (Money is only about 10-20% of the reason) and is hanging out with Miyagi because she is interested in Miyagi in interacting and possibly becoming friends with Miyagi...And Miyagi is definitely very interested in MC (Wanting to see sides of MC that she can only witness and see herself.) Miyagi just step into the realm of trampling on another human's being's dignity...I guess some people can justify Miyagi actions by claiming that MC(Sendai) is being paid but eh Shrug...

I just hope that Miyagi apologize sincerely later...XD

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MC is a hardworking good person...Too bad her older sister is a idiot that didn't think of the idea of leaving her contact information (Or at least made the MC memorize her new phone number) before she left to run away with her lover at age 18.
I understand running away from the parents and grandfather (Grandfather seems like the annoying rich controlling parent type) but at least say a proper farewell/Goodbye if the older Sister is not planning to come back 'home' to see the MC. This shows off the older sister rash reckless behavior and personality (It also shows off her courage too but at least try to avoid causing emotional damage to your little sister....)

MC is the type of person that put hard deadlines on herself to push herself to get things done...It good to takes things at your own pace since everyone is different (Especially love and romance...Excluding special stupid cases and circumstances in love and romance progress Cough*NO SEGGS for 4 whole years in a relationship despite being adults*Cough) but there are people that challenge themselves to get their tasks done on time or before deadlines. This shows a sign of their diligence...but it is also can be an weakness as well in some cases.

MC want to understand what love is like due to her sister leaving the family behind at age 18 like the other comments said...There is no need to rush love and romance but MC wants to get to close as experience of what her Onee-chan was feeling when she ran away with her lover at age 18 XD

Hopefully MC lives a good happy life with her waifu...MC never reveal your relationship to your grandfather...Make sure you take over all his assets and properties (Successful transfer) before the reveal then laugh like a oujo-sama villainess "ohohohohoh~" at his shock face :0

Grandfather is a fking jerk...Look it good to be somewhat strict on your kids at times to teach them responsibility but your just being a overly controlling jerk (Older sister ran away and Grandfather is like 70% of the reason)...The only good side to being related to the grandfather is just becuz he is 'Rich'...

well now that shes realized she loves her then isnt the next step tongue

Don’t get your hopes up. Tongue is the most suggestive thing one can expect in an Usui Shio manga

Looks at newest chapter

Welp...that is both a yes and a nope. Technically correct but technically not the outcome you people were expecting...Tongue was definitely involved...as expected of the clueless flirting prodigy lol~ If MC's waifu helps train MC well then they can become the top 2 most sought after idols in the school XD

MC can do more tongue in the future when their so-called [temp] Relationship evolves to [REAL OFFICIAL] Relationship...

Just hope we don't get a (1-2) misunderstanding chapter and that MC's waifu (Nagi) shows off her loyalty and love to the MC by gently rejecting the confession...I will be really shock if Nagi actually accepts the confession (0.1% chance but it possible that we would get taking NTR-like damage if that does happen...)

Gambare MC~!! Do your best in surviving your training with your waifu...Water fall training and all that stuff..Ugh exercise is good for you but for the unmotivated it is torture (Plus no video games allowed) XD

Bonk the MC...Or don't bonk her, it's Mashiro choice here.

RIP to Ui...Doesn't know that her friend 'might' actually be Bi instead of 100% straight like her friend assumed she was. Too bad her friend, Nagisa, actually took Ui's advice seriously and choose to just 'forgot' the whole situation lol...Truly she is built different...I sometimes admire people who can just do that [No need to worry too much or be focus on regrets] lol XD

Hmmm....I wonder why Dahlia [Apparently sister of merchant girl] is working at the black knight mansion (Besides the reason for being a spy for merchant girl. Sounds kind of risky putting one of the house's potential heir so close to potential danger XD)??

Shion is very stronger and powerful...But if that was 80-90% of her true power...Then Frost using her magic armor would have 99% stomp her sadly...

Blackknight/Frost has trust issues...Reasonable for her to have trust issues tho since she has no friends/allies she can trust and any that she did have are probably gone/Dead.
Wonder who that woman was in BK's flashback? Dear friend or her mother??? Though if the guy wearing black armor was her father then...L Dad...totally lame boring father (Assuming the father was not having a mental break down from the magic armor killing him slowly and even then that is no reason to shout at your daughter. Not enough information when or where he said that though if I am giving him the benefit of a doubt?)

Frost/BK is so stubborn lol...Just let the MC bandage you up, no point in acting tough when in your pain XD
Honestly Frost/BK's reputation as being feared has so many more cons instead pros (Not even killing her rivals that been poaching her servant with better pay too so she is not even using her fear reputation properly at all~ Fear rep is only good if your chaotic neutral or evil)...Frost acting irrational and too afraid to let anyone get close to her. She need more workers/farmer/ merchants in her area to help stabilize her land that she is defending from the monsters...

MC is totally 100% based for her smooth move just now...MC trying to act tough but you can see she is embarrassed by what she just did...You know this is now their 2nd (Technically 1st) kiss now. MC should totally T pose too to assert her dominance as well later lol XD

Going to be sad and annoying when Frost finds out about MC's initial intentions for getting married (MC now cares about Frost deeply after seeing all of Frost's good sides)...Hopefully that will only last 1-2 chapters before that misunderstand is resolved...I would be really surprised if the author doesn't ever go that route though 0_0

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You know...I would have thought being a member of royalty(A princess and potential heir to the throne) would have tighter security??? Like at least couple standard knights guarding the doorway or just standing by a nearby tree [Princess open the door to check...then got grabbed from behind(Meaning person went through window after fake impersonation)].
Guess no one want to serve the former problem princess [Besides Alice] or they were very lax in security since it was random village visit...But than again I guess writing Alice finding the random guards being knock out by a sleeping spell probably would just waste more pages and time to write XD

Princess trying to act cool and calm but freaking out and blushing after she is alone thinking about the kiss lol XD
You know they I wonder if the extra 'tongue' action during the kiss helps increase the mana/MP transfer~ You know greater surface area= higher and more MP transfer???

[Chapter 6]
Hmm...Wonder why Alice despises the MC (Nana)???
Option 1-- The knight (Alice) likes and has a crush/or love with the princess like many comments suggested above. (Poly route or sad heart-broken but learn to deal with it route.)
Option 2- Alice despises MC/Nana for her timid nature (Call herself useless) or due to claiming that Alice is so elegant/fearless/sense of justice. Basically hating MC's personality, timid/meek nature.

Option 3- Just becuz of random reasons. Since sometimes people just hate or dislike others just becuz.
Option 4- Alice wanted to be "Saint" to be with the princess...Though that is kind of similar to Option 1 but could be possible she wanted to a "Saint" due to the Miasma hurting someone she cares about though??
At least Alice told the princess she was rude to the MC though...Props to her for being honest about that and willing to take a punishment...

You know the justification for why MC didn't notice anything 'weird or strange'...The bullied MC is not paying attention to her surroundings...She would see all the blood hand marks on the windows when walking to school but she is mostly just staring at the ground while walking...You can notice that MC not even looking at the girl who saved her from bullying face, her gaze always pointed down (Meek, defeated and submissive...Submissive and breed@ble mode basically). It happens to bullied kids that are low on mental energy, have no time to look around and admire their surrounds due to all the negative emotions they are dealing...Even sad and angry people will notice that their food taste worse or more dull due to their negative emotions.
Though I am surprised that the zombie(Guy walking past her) didn't try to attack her...Perhaps there is a element from like world war Z that being sick (Minor cold) or having Cancer makes you invisible to zombies?

Yes, MC's reaction and what she admit does sound crazy and will set off the alarm bells in us normal people...But eh I don't blame her...She had a lot of built up negative emotions waiting to burst out. Risa is kind of worried and scared when MC told her that since killing other zombie is not personal for her(Teleports behind zombie with bat and says "nothing personal kid"), it's just for survival. MC on the other hand...It very personally~!

Like some comments said and point out...There might be a cure or vaccine being made during the 1 to 2-weeks that MC been sick during the zombie outbreak [Shaun of the dead after outbreak style]. Serum or possible serum?

Donkey Kong comment reminds me of the [All of Us Are Dead] Korean zombie movie, like how some people if their willpower or determination is strong enough then they won't become mindless zombie due to the virus (Some examples shown in movie).

MC's new friend/best friendo (Future waifu)~! is immune or has a zombie resistance [Half zombie?]. I don't really believe the MC reaction and emotions are that crazy or wild for a person in her circumstance...if you had the chance to hurt or bash the heads of the bullies that been making fun and tormenting you for almost everyday then MC's reaction is very understandable and reasonable...'Normal people' would be disturbed and a bit scared though...

MC showing off her inherent yandere-traits to her new best friend (Possibly her first ever friend...)...MC please don't kill your friend's other friend, they might be dating!...A 3some is the best solution if they are though...though if that doesn't work then you can always 'wish or hope' for a possible unfortunate 'accident' to happen to Miya tho...Comforting your new best friend XD

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Ch 57 seems entirely canon, it's just a flash forward to some future time.

My bad, I meant 57.5, Though that seems to be canon but like people said...Time-skip canon event probably in far the chapter 170-199 range...Possibly maybe the 200+ chapter mark if the story is still going slow burn route. Could be anyone's guess.

I am used to labeling and thinking the 0.5 types of chapters are not canon most of the time since that is what most (80%) author does for their story. Though I guess that event will be definitely 100% canon in the future lol~
It just that chapter is not in the chronological order ('Significant time after ch.57').

Yup, chapter 57 is probably not canon. That person above probably is misremembering stuff [She/He is human and thus flawed] and think Evie and Elsa did it in chapter 97 and forgot to read chapter 98 where Evie and Elsa talk about their feelings and why Evie is not ready to take the so-called 'next step' yet lol...Evie is totally fine with kissing, touching and hugging...Just the so-called 'last step' becuz in her explanation (Read ch.98) lol...*Shakes hand angry shouting at Evie's so-called morals*

Also from my point of view...Evie only call/mock/tease Elsa's body to try to get back at her teasing...Yeah probably not the smoothest or best comeback to teasing to Elsa's teasing but eh no human is perfect and people make mistakes that be a bit hurtful sometimes (Evie was flustered and embarrassed but then got over it probably to get back at Elsa). Not meant to be intentional hurtful or mean and Elsa obviously got over it soon after a few hours when Evie 'kind of' apologize. It kind of a dominance psychological thing that happen in some people relationship (Friends or lover- minor roast comment or fake insults, jokes).

Now for who to take the single position...Obviously Elsa is the best choice like Evie said, very talented once in a century existence in magic. The only issue and problem is if Elsa try over push and overexerted herself which is not a problem considering high MP/Mana...But it can happen if using ton and tons of MP (10-15+ people worth).

MC finally realized she has to have a real talk to talk instead of being going SUPER SIMP servant mode for Tsundere-chan to open up her heart to MC (Understand her emotionally or try to). Time for a embarrassing shy awkward heart-to-heart talk!!!

...Got to say though MC is kind of impressive to have a red carpet ready when Tsundere-chan is walking down the stairs...Real commitment. A+ for effort but C+ for effectiveness and seduction.

I enjoy this ending, thankfully much more enjoyable compare to this author's previous work.

Asagao's parents are rich and probably give her tons of money for her allowance [Remember you people...She paid for the MC's lunch that is about 4500 yen($45) without blinking a eye...] plus all the other expenses like new clothes for their hangout/date...It not that rare or uncommon for rich parents to casually give their children allowance of about 200-500 dollar per month...Us commoner/plebeians are lucky to even get like 10-20 dollars per week as a allowance as a kid or high school student.

...You can easily see that stuff on U-tube easy...There are even parents paying for their children's rent when they move out (Meaning nope...your not surviving and living by your own power but with the help the power of your parent's money...Yeah it's sad that it hard to become a true functioning member of society without any aid.)

Asagao and MC here sure both have very neglectful parents (Though MC's parent is fking worse since MC only get a allowance of 500 yen, 5 dollars to basically to survive everyday and have to look after her half-sibling while her mother goes on date with her new BF...)

Asagao's case though...Her living needs are taken care of but her emotional needs are not, classmates that at first praise her become jealous of her/muttering and talking bad about her [No friends]. The maturity level for these two kids...People tend to forgot each human/child is different...They can either be very childish, naive and mentally immature due to being coddled or they learn to grow up faster due to the negative harsh environment that they have to endure living each day...having only their own thoughts to keep them company when they have no friends to pass the time.
Both of them going on social media to ease their loneliness and eventually discovered each other thankfully.

Every child/kid deserves a parent(s/excluding very very rare 0.0001% situation)....But not every parent deserves a kid...

Hopefully MC continue a happy life with her new 'friend(?)'

EDIT part here: The only SOD (Suspension of disbelief) moment I had with this one-shot is a streaming/media site allowing them to actually stream despite their young ages...I mean K*ck and Tw*tch allows 13+ and I guess adults film their children daily life for views sometimes which is messed up but I guess it is technically possibly if they are using their parent account or in rich girl case paid her maid to make the account?

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This is what a human feels when they discovered their beloved pet dog or cat can only live about a lifespan of 10-12 years max....Also probably what a fantasy long life elf feels when getting culture shock at how quickly humans die compared to living 1000-2000 years.

Welp either they have to learn to accept Yashiro's eventual death...Or undo the seal to unleash the [DEMON LORD]'s true power to add a few hundred or 1000s of years to their waifu's lifespan while dominating the world and humanity under their tyranny lol...I am probably a horrible person for voting for the later option but eh whatever~

Demon lord can probably kill a small city even with her weaken powers...Too bad her INT stat is her dumb stat and Yashiro has no intentions of using her powers to improve her life XD

Sweet home Alabama route let's go! (Fake cousins but the public doesn't know that)!!!!

Their house is pretty big so they ain't hurting for money but then again they might still have mortgage left to pay + The little sister hospital and medical bills [If This was America they would be living in a small apartment due to the hospital bills they be paying for the little sister lol...]

Eating 2000 calories doesn't cost that much (Just 8-10 dollars or $3650 per year if you never going to visit any fast-food restaurants and eating just basic bland food...But sadly the world is not advanced enough or nice enough to solve world hunger enough yet to make sure everyone in the world can easily afford to eat everyday T_T)

Star GF OP....Plz never nerf!!!!
I predict the next plotline/ plot point would be star GF going to the MC's school as a transfer student!!! Then we might get into a plot where Star GF discover that MC's initial crush is in the same school [MC's crush is probably not in same class since there is no mention of that] then get into wacky adventures where Star GF helps MC woo her crush while slowly starting to feel depressed and sad...In which case I would get sad too..

[Chapter 3.1-- Basically 90% non-canon chapter (It broke the 4th wall) and just author giving extra information unless MC is forgetful ???]

Star GF's wishing power (Once every 2 weeks that grant MC a very small power wish/ A smart person would wish for like 5-10 grams of gold or silver if possible. Got to test the limits of the wishes.)
-Have the power of changing her clothes to possibly anything...Imagine the POSSIBILITIES XD!!!
-No need to eat as long as absorbing star light
-Basically Immortal (As long no one stab a knife into her head)
-Possible memories manipulation powers (She can grant wishes for MC but she might still possess minor wishing powers for herself)???

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US stuff about Trans...Yeah I am not going to touch that with a 10 foot pole but the people representing them as a group in the court/City council...They need better well educated people to represent them...I am starting to think those people are just hired to make the Bi, Queer, Trans etc. group look horrible and stupid. There must be more better and intelligent people part of the LGBTQ group that can do a better job...

You did, in fact, poke it with a ten foot pole.

My bad, I end up poking it with a 20 foot pole I guess...It is a very emotional charge and somewhat complicated Topic to talk and deal with...There are probably people smarter and well verse in that topic that can explain all the details regarding those issues, intricacies and topics compared to a random nobody like me XD

Police topic...Police are often good people (35-49% of the time)...But sadly Police are humans...And humans are very flawed creatures...Flaw creatures make mistakes, very bad mistakes that hurt others. Example like innocent victims not being believed (2 Netflix film made for innocent female victims and 1 for innocent male victim) involving R*pe. Lot of innocent people in jail and later revealed to be innocent sadly...Need more accountability...

Hopefully society can change for the better in the future 10-20 years so everyone can learn to accept and be able to deal with each other in a peaceful manner (Excluding anyone or crazies calling for violence though.)

Hopefully MC here in this story can also end up learning and having a taste of 'NORMAL' before eventually deciding she is happy being unique/Abnormal with her future monster GF like I wrote in my past comment....Or we go the sad tragic route of MC being killed and eaten by her Monster GF where Monster GF then began to slowly regrets her choice of wearing MC's body as her new skin...Either or option is valid.

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Hmmm, Not sure there were any incel comments (Sexist vulgar comments made by man child or dumb 10 years old) but there were definitely dumb idiots in the comment section shown. lol I had already lost faith in most of humanity when I discovered that war and world pollution + other horrible stuff exist at the age of 9...I mean there are still many good decent people in humanity but eh...Humanity is going to be doom in the next 150-200 years if no talented amazing people did something to change that.

Now if Slender-chan saw the Tw*tter and Redd*t side of humanity...She/He/It would be utterly disgusted due to the stupidity of humanity....Lots of Radical left, Radial right in the politics [I hate Politics], Lots of extremists, lots of idiots that think they are smart and arrogant but are actually dumb.

Examples: like Innocent Japanese artist getting harassed on Twitt*r online and being accused of using A.I but in the end it was revealed that it was just jealous lame no talent artists trying to promote their work [Proof of their other art work and etc. like time-frame of their drawing....Too bad some of the japanese artist nuked their account and left online. It ironically because in about 20-30 years A.I can easily fool 80% of humans and the only way to know it is A.I if using an A.I tool online to check...Which the accuser didn't even do!!]

[RANDOM STUPID WORD TEXT AND SPILLAGE about Topic about normality and possible representation...Feel free to ignore my stupid words and paragraphs.]
I believe normality of not getting in anyone way is fine and best normal. Let people be gay, Lesbian, Bi, Trans...But when you rock the boat and annoy people too much then you get hammer down....Though you still get hammer down and beaten if your ugly or act weird lol...Reality and life is sad sometimes due to jerks and horrible people.

US stuff about Trans...Yeah I am not going to touch that with a 10 foot pole but the people representing them as a group in the court/City council...They need better well educated people to represent them...I am starting to think those people are just hired to make the Bi, Queer, Trans etc. group look horrible and stupid. There must be more better and intelligent people part of the LGBTQ group that can do a better job...

Honestly Japan does a better job at creating art/Media and better representation compared to the US...Yuri, Yaoi(The good kind and not the messed up kind but eh freedom of speech and expression...), Many Decent Trans characters [Too many to even name...Though some people do make mistakes and mistakenly think a character is trans but is not actually trans though...Gezz]
Love Me for Who I Am [Intersex], Symphogear (Cagliostro/Trans), SteinGate (Ruka/Trans).
Alice in borderland/Imawa no Kuni no Alice (One of the best character that I liked and enjoy is Trans.)
I Think I Turned My Childhood Friend into a Girl/Koisuru (Otome) no Tsukurikata (No the childhood friend is not Trans...He is fits more like Gender-fluid/Non-binary...The stupid localizer is a idiot and using it for her stupid culture war...You can prove me wrong though if Hiura actually claims to be a girl or wants to be one in any of the chapters.)
[Astolfo/ Haku/Nagisa/ dozen other character= Counts Trap characters]

The only decent Art/Media representation that US gave recently to me was OWL House and Final fantasy 16 Dion...I think there were more decent character but I can't remember...
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx[End of talk about representation/ Apologies once again for annoying anyone with my thoughts]xxxxxxxx

Now Back to the recent Chapter of normality and monster.

Yeah no...Slender-chan you have lost any valid or moral argument about your so-called plan as soon as you tried that creepy horrible sh*t toward the Main character....It like Kira (The genius psychopath from Death Note) killing the random guy dissing and criticizing his action Which was a horrible mistake lol...That is crossing the line.

I would been fine with Slender-chan's plan if it was just replacing the very very horrible disruptive people like Delinquents that beat up and rob innocent old people or horrible bullies whom bullying border on physical and mental abuse (Physical injuries, property destroyed or freedom restricted) but if Slender-chan was planning to replace to the average nobody that isn't hurting anyone then yeah [You need a strict guideline and qualifications for the person replaced]...Slender-chan would have been just a crazy creature trying to plan god...

The main problem and issue with Slender-chan plan was...Where the fk is Slender going to find the other monsters to replace all those humans...Unless Slender-chan can split her/him/itself up into clones or asexually reproduced then that is main problem number 1 unless Slender-chan has like hundreds of monster friends willing to go to school...

2nd mistake from Slender-chan...Not letting our Main character leave and trying to convince her later dozen of times...Showing no hard feeling or grudge would have been the best option. Even trying to help MC to fit in and learn to be 'normal' (Can be subjective) might make the MC more agreeable to Slender-chan's plan later on if MC encounter any very horrible humans that she is willing to ignore for Slender-chan's plan.

The monster from [Shotgun Boy] and Slender-chan would be in agreement about humanity's art and entertainment, probably would be talking about all the different entertainment that they enjoy lol...Too bad they are extremely dangerous for humanity (Especially for the average nobody talent less person that is just minding their own business and not hurting anyone).

This is definitely a flawed protagonist but every honest 15 year old protagonist is flawed, teenagers are fucked up monster people. This is just a more honest comic than normal :P

Hmmm, I agree that people are a bit too harsh on the MC here....But compared to the other lame MCs I seen she is just average character honestly, kind of a flaw and bit selfish person but not the worst person or best main character I ever seen but yes she could have a better personality...Eh I say hopefully she will get some character growth later on probably~

Kind of mean to assume every 15 year old or younger teenager are fked up monsters tho (Minus natural born psychos/sociopaths)... 0_0....
Either my high school experience was just filled with normal to good people [There were a few obvious jerks and annoying people though] or you just well struck with bunch of rude people/jerks in school XD

I say it depends on the person background/family situation and upbringing with morals along with the friends they have while growing up that shapes how a person develops. I mean there are bunch of monsters that are already grown adults exploiting people sadly in life...Not just because they are a teenager...Though I do admit most teenagers do stupid sh*t lol

[Chapter 3.1]
This chapter...Hmmm I say this is a kind of 'canon but non-canon chapter' by the author in response to some of the comments that they received...probably comments joking or saying the star-GF looks young or like a kid. [4th wall breaking comment....No one else seen star-GF besides MC yet and MC's lil sister not awake yet and parents didn't come back home yet]

Star-GF muttering to herself about being almost immortal (Cannot die from old age but can die from serious injury like stab wound or car crash--MC didn't hear her/ no need to eat food as long as star light is provided but eating food would be nice.

MC need to make a wish to help her Star-GF make her chest size at least a few size bigger though the next few months that pass so the author can stop getting comments like that...RIP to flat or small chest women getting compared to a 7 year old by a random commentator XD

MC and Mashiro going on a road trip!!! Hopefully they can fix their minor issues and strength their relationship for the better.

Ui putting the moves on her 'best friend'/'Roommate (Well not really roommate but Ui comes over to stay a lot that sleeping in the same bed is that big of a deal)'

Ui probably thought there is no chance that Nagisa will accept her feelings (Probably would have gently reject her) so may as get a single kiss as a consolation prize.

Ui uses sneak kiss

Nagisa is confused

Nagisa listening to radio while driving and hears the song 'I kiss a girl and I like it~!'.

Nagisa slamming her head into the driving wheel horn as she groans trying to sort out her current feelings.

This is like if a Yandere level 1 was dating a Yandere level 8 lol~

Let's see, each full box/storage has about 12 lip balm which is 18 boxes for the ones we could see (assuming 12 for the cut offs for simplicity). The current one is at 6 balm. And 1 lip balm is ¥208.So if we calculate ((12x18)+6)x208. Girl, spent about ¥46,176 so almost $300. This girl needs better hobby, I swear kids these days.

Your calculations seems mostly correct except I think you got forgot to add the fact that in (page 3) the 208 yen lip balm (Yuri theme/brand) has 2 lip balm per pack [A pack of 2 for 208 yen.] This means 208 yen for about 2 sticks or 104 yen per each lip balm.

So almost $150 dollars I think? Still a lot of money but even if it was spread out over months or if she had a part time job then not that much money...Probably has a well off parent that gives allowance though XD

Merchant girl has negative feelings toward Black knight (BK) due to her grandfather dying in incident.... Yes she saw Frost kill her(Merchant think Frost is male) father and become the new Black knight(Taking the magic belt power) but that likely was due to the previous Black Knight was likely about to go berserk and probably told Frost beforehand to kill him if that happens [Which Merchant girl doesn't know about]...Sad...At least the father was not the dragon creature that attacked...I and some people are guessed and knew it would go that route [Called it].

I just hope BK (Black knight) still has a few years left before ending up dying from the curse [Magic transforming belt]...Worst case scenario BK only has a 1-2 years left before becoming critical from the curse...Best case scenario is she has about 3-5 years left before dying...This is assuming each time the owner use the belt they speed up the proceed of the curse and BK(Frost) was 18 years old when forced to kill her father.
Meaning if the previous owner was using the belt sparingly then that is a lifespan of about 10-12 years before dying from the curse...possibly maybe 8-10 years if using it almost everyday...That is a fked up magic item...Great and powerful abilities but at the cost of slowly killing the user...Wonder how they will deal with the curse and cure it...
Probably the power of love and yuri XD????

The king and kingdom is really just using BK whole bloodline as a fking meat shield from monsters...

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The girl who lied logic is: "...S-She might not be totally '100%' into me...She might actually be happy/supportive about the fake BF that I lied to her about...Got to test the water more to make sure before confessing my feelings and my fake Boyfriend is a total lie"

Dam tho...RIP to the friend(Nina) taking mental damage imaging the girl she love is going to crush the 'boyfriend'.

If this was a series instead of a one-shot then Nina might be taking lot of mental damage when her love/crush tries to test the water about her feelings...

Test feeling out by practicing testing various stuff
Girl with fake BF: "THAT WAS AWESOME, SHE'S TOTALLY INTO ME...I think?...Hmm probably be best to just test the water some more to gauge her reaction to make 100% sure"

Girl's friend: "Oh for the love of...Just tell her your feelings...You will regret it if she finds out what your doing..."

Girl: "It's be fine~!"

Next chapter:
"Hey can you go on a practice date with me, I want to pick a cute swimsuit for BF while on our date to the beach!"
Nina(Taking 10 mental damage): "...S-Sure..." --(Dying inside from seeing her love/crush in a swimsuit but also taking damage from the imagery seeing as well)

"Hey can you practice cuddling with me...My BF doesn't seem to take the initiate in cuddling when I am trying to give the signal, I want to practice to giving him subtle signal by touching his thigh and to avoid making any weird movement or noise first before cuddling with him~! Your the only one I can trust!"
Nina(Taking 20 mental damage): "...I-I that is fine I guess..." --(Dying inside from being able to hug and cuddle her crush/love but also taking damage from knowing she will do with her 'boyfriend')

Repeat about 5-6 times more with different scenario that cause Nina mental damage and joy like tasting homemade bento, practice flirting and etc.

Girl: "Hmm...I feel like Nina is enjoying everything I do to her during our so-called practice...B-But I am still not 100% sure!!"

Girl's fake BF who is fed up with her sh*t: "For the love of god...Just confess already before I slap the fking stupid out of you..."

Girl: "I know I know, j-just one more final test to make sure!!!"

A blushing Nina flees and run screaming out of the girl's room and apartment after she suggested practicing intense Monopoly/Wrestling/Hardcore handholding

Girl: "W-Wait come back!!!..."

Girl wakes up next day to find a letter address to her from Nina telling her and confessing about how Nina has feeling for her but doesn't want to help ruin the girl's relationship with her 'boyfriend(Fake)' and knows that she will never accept Nina's feeling so she is now moving to America. The last part of the letter: "By the time your reading this letter I am already on the plane to America. Thank you for the many years of friendship, I am sorry for deceiving you and hope you can forgive me one day about my feelings."

Girl who lied about fake BF panics about Nina and ask for her friend help.

Girl' friend palm facing at what is happening: "...I hate to say I-...Actually nope I don't hate it...I told you so and this is the result of your stupid actions"

girl and her friend tries to go to the airport to chase after Nina but when Nina's plane to America is already gone and a random terrorist set a bomb to the airport causing all the planes there and other airports to be delay for months to avoid any danger to the public (Luckily no one was seriously hurt or died from the bomb)

Girl and friend finally managed to come to America and find Nina after 6-7 months since Nina run away to discover the scene of Nina walking in the park holding hands with a beautiful blond girl and laughing with a smile. Nina eyes widen in shock at seeing the girl with her friend (Friend who was playing the part of the fake boyfriend probably) had came to America.

DUN DUN DUUUN!!!!

Who is this mysterious girl holding hands with Nina? Will Nina's love or perhaps Nina's former love finally reveal the truth about her feeling to Nina that she been hiding!? Is the current situation all a simple misunderstanding perhaps?! Will pigs fly, will inflation continue to rise?! Find out next time on dragon balls--...I mean Chapter 13 of "How I Was Kissed by the Girl I Like for Practice"!!!

I should probably be feel bad about my horrible lame fanfic continuation about this one-shot...but eh...fk it I already type it out...

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Like everything in life to much of something is never a good thing. It good to read between the line to go deeper into the story, explores it meaning to find what missing between all the subtexts. But go over than that it may lead to projecting.

Wise words and good mindset to have XD

People don’t understand the guy was written as villain by the original game
Like the game literally made him evil and unlikable and that he does horrible things
What we got is actually against the game written characterization of him so expecting him to be the good dad who is your typical accepting father who will say “Yes Queen let’s go lesbians” show people don’t understand the setting
Even his looks was designed to be evil fatty but because of all the different scenarios he is getting to be good guy acknowledging he needs to change with the world now his character playing different role the author wanted to show his original character that is still in there his evil looking grin and his noble biases and having children of nobility

[Sorry for possible long comment and text vomit about already rehashed details from storyline]

Umm...Look I know the guy is not perfect and he has bad flaws but I don't think he was 'designed' to be a cartoonish evil villain in the original game...Unless Evie whole existence changed the whole story line...

I believe if Evie did not reincarnated into the Otome game world (Age 8-11 I think?) then Evie might be your standard horrible Otome villain and the father would go everything possible to protect his beloved daughter...Even if he knew that daughter of his did everything wrong and everything was her own fault...If Evie did not reincarnated as Evie then is might be possible Otome game Evie might end up being a spoiled brat that got everything she wanted (+ jealous spoiled affected by mother's death). Evidence is ch.63- spoiling father and death of her mother.

Will he be willing to sacrifice 1000-10,000+ people to save his sick wife...The answer would be 100% yes I believe it would be completely in character for him...He would feel a little bad and he would hide it if he could be we know he would not hesitate if the deaths of thousands meant keeping his wife and daughter safe.

It possible the links or evidence of the family crime was due to the father trying to find ways to save his wife from dying?

Ch.62- Shows he is a doting father and complain about Evie calling him Lord father/Father-sama in japanese like terms instead of Daddy or Papa.

ch.63- Evie mother died and passed alway in the original game story line....but according to Evie she got better after Evie grow up...This meant the time-loop might have already happen or Evie whole existence just changed everything??? This meant currently we are timeline #3 or Redo attempt #2...Honestly I am still quite curious about how Future Elsa(Timeline 1 bad ending) and how Evie's mother end up surviving during the 1st original timeline (Evie current so-called 1st timeline run even though she didn't do anything except exist, meaning possible time-line or time travel shenanigans happen already.)

Father-kun here call the [THE 2nd PRINCE] a brat and complain about why he is always coming to visit...Despite being Evie' Fiance (Handpicked by king to be Evie future spouse.) Jealous doting father behavior.

ch.63- Original story line after Evie's mother' death in the game. Yes he would have tried to conquer and dominate the whole kingdom...But that was only after the Villainess(Original game Evie was consumed by the power of darkness)...But like Evie said since she was never mislead/misled by that he never become that kind of person and is just a fool who spoils his daughter.

In the early part of the chapters when Evie wrote to him and let it slip that she was acting like a commoner (Going out to the market and buying stuff personally instead of hiring someone to get stuff for her...He end up writing pages of apologizes for her current 'Misfortune' even though Evie didn't see it as a bother or hassle. Evie is still living a decent life after her family got exiled and title got stripped in the very early chapters...nothing compared to rich nobles but more like a rich wealthy merchant status.) Evie now has to be a bit more careful about how she writes about her everyday life after that lol XD

The father is not a corrupt noble in this current timeline (His wife not dead and his daughter not corrupted) and his follower/servants 'CHOOSE' to follow him after the exile that tells he has charismatic aura and talent instead of abandoning his butt, this shows he did not abuse his worker/servant and instead got their loyalty at least...Though after his wife death his character might have changed for the worse (Become a corrupted but talented noble) but he would still have been a talented person with high ambition. There are rich stupid people (Born rich but never put on hard work or common sense) and smart rich people (Born rich but talented and work hard)...The father is the latter tho.

ch.70 to 76-- The reason and possible evidence for Evie's family exile (Besides the annoying evil Villainess system causing the exile ending). Possible link to Leopold incident when Evie went back in time, the 2nd prince was helping out but the other noble fractions probably saw this as a good chance to kick down one of their rivals for their so-called evil deed (Links to bad illegal practices, we know Evie family is innocent but any written letters or possible 'evidence' could have helped the Villainess System kick start the Exile Ending. A.K.A- Fuel for the Exile ending).

TL:DR VERSION- (If his wife not dead + Evie his daughter did not become distorted and become evil spoiled villainess) = He has no reason to become corrupted and hungry for more power like in the 'original otome game'. Like my theory the game version of him did so to protect his only family member left, his daughter Evie even if he knew it was wrong and since his wife is dead...FK THE WORLD is probably his mentality and justification at the time!!!

This is just my thoughts and analysis on Father-kun's character now and compared to the so-called 'Original otome game timeline' based on the chapters I can remember and seen.

I am really enjoying this manga, it's pure awesome. Look at 8-9 pages of comment...Eh I will read everyone comments and thoughts later, it will be interesting to see everyone thoughts about this nice isekai otome series XD

My thoughts from ch.1-10 (Sorry for possible long comment post/Rant)

Heroine of the otome game:
Loves nobility's good high quality food (She can't go back to eating her bland commoner bread and soup anymore lol).
Friends with the MC (Gal) and Villainess...Knows Tsundere Villainess has feeling for MC (Gal) but isn't going to tell the MC since Otome Heroine wants to still live and don't want to risk agrooing the Villainess if telling MC trigger her...She already getting enough Agro from MC fangirling over her and Villainess getting Jelly.
Otome MC here wants to help MC(Gal) and villainess to get along when noticing their minor emotional conflict which shows off her good nature...but ironically the conflict is helping her not get a strict iron claw of jealous to the face lol XD

Villainess brother(Jill):
Basically misunderstood her sister due to how talented his sister is and how his sister (Almeria) acts all proper noble like...Basically tense, upright and not showing weakness (+Being very strict) along not being able to see her smile out of of kindness or happiness till seeing her smile at MC....RIP to big bro here for getting trauma again when lil sis got very jelly...Let just hope they can still fix their relationship and the big bro can give his blessing when Almeria marries the MC (He is going to have to learn not to touch MC tho or else he will get a punch to the face again...) XD

[Leonaldia (Leo for short)- The prince]:
His personality and relationship with Almeria (His finacee and the villainess of the otome game) is mostly due to likely what I suspect is a inferiority complex...You know how in family a parent will fawn or praise one kid over the over, praising and speaking praises constantly to 1 kid while the other kid is neglected.
Prince also misunderstood Almeria (Villainess) reason of killing the cockatrice was to protect the knights and people from it's surprise attack...Basically having only 1-2 mins or few seconds at worst to act to protect people. Basically a inferiority complex due to being compared to his talented beautiful fiancee who took down a powerful magic beast at age 12-13 which he would be unlikely be able to do despite his stronger magic power (MP).
If Almeria had explain her reasoning about why she took down the monster then relationship might not be as bad or shaky but that is not very like Almeria's personality (Honestly the prince should just remember the servants and people talking trash about him/comparing him to Almeria and make sure to send them to isolated places in the future as punishment instead of having unfair resentment toward Almeria but sadly he is immature and not wise enough)...The prince(Leo) would love to be with someone breedable and submissive lol...Prince is used to being praised by his teachers/people around him and not used to be being bad talk/compared to someone much more talented/superior than him. It sadly doesn't help that Almeria's proper upright/uptight personality (Due to how she was raised) clashes with the prince.

The reason why (Leo) fire off his OP fire magic at the cockatrice was due to The danger from the situation + negative feelings/inferiority complex from years ago (3-years ago when they were 12-13 when they first met.). The danger level of the situation was only like a 10-20% chance of death with all the knights around...dangerous but not hopeless and the death chance is only due to if they were being careless with the monster (Tail bite, possible poison?).

You know...It funny and dark to assume if MC(Gal) was not there then Almeria would be possibly dead or at best case scenario if she survive the OP fire blast from the prince...Heavily scarred with burns with possible 1-2 arm or leg missing...Almeria could have avoid or block the OP fire magic if she was paying attention but her attention was on MC(Serina) due to worrying about MC possibly getting involved and hurt...Though without the MC there would be no butterfly effect which let them encounter the Cockatrice but then Almeria would be facing the bad end of the otome game without MC there to help...

[Ch.10 part for Leo/prince]
Now here is the funny part...The prince saw how he had almost killed his finacee (Almeria) and how MC(Serina) block his OP fire blast just barely...though it was more like block then deflect it upwards and Leo, Almeria and all the knights there saw MC's missing her hand....it was fking gory and full of blood (Filtered)...Prince is just dumb and letting his emotions control himself...falsely accusing MC of faking her losing a hand from his 'ACTIONS OF ALMOST KILLING HIS FINACEE'...Prince leo...dude...stop being immature and dumb to learn how to use your brain and logic...If MC want to make you owe you a favor then she would not heal her hand and even purposely destroy her hand to get you into debt...MC(Gal) only healed her hand due to not wanting to let Villainess and prince feel guilty...it a good thing Serina just need to be aware about the genes/DNA in his body instead of knowing complex information about each cell in body and how DNA divides/make more molecules/cells...Good old OP Magic XD

So unless illusion magic exists then Prince leo needs some serious growing up to do...A prince and future king of a country need to learn to control his emotions and learn to think/rationalize people's possible actions instead of letting their immature, emotions and any feeling of inferiority control them...I really hope Prince learn from this experience...That Almeria does not even fking like him and enjoy being engaged to his stupid immature butt and only did so due to her so-called noble responsibility to her family and how she was raised. He waited a whole '10 DAYS' for them to come to him instead of visiting the infirmary to see how MC is doing...This just shows how spoiled and immature he is...

I just hope Leo grows up and learn to be a better person in the future after this experience instead of any possible resentment or negative feeling from the punch. That punch shows how much Almeria cares about Serina, so hopefully a idiot like him gets the message.

The fact and feat of healing a missing/cut off hand is amazing feat of magic (Likely the most that magic could heal was perhaps a large stab wound and that would be mostly closing the wound + Accelerating the healing rate...). MC just show off the most OP legendary heal in history in that world lol~

I am so glad Almeria fking punch her finace or ex-finace [A kick to the face would be even better~] and finally managed to apologize/reveal her weak side/emotions to the MC...One step closer to Serina and Almeria end game relationship , I can't wait till end of Feb arrives for new chapter XD

[Almeria/Almelia/Villainess]:
The so-called Villainess of the otome game.
Extra Personality traits: Minor tsundere and minor yandere aspect alongside of Villainess nobility personality
Born talented, beautiful and with strong magic but work hard at everything she does so not just relying on her talent/strong magic alone.
Was raise in one of the big 4 noble family, grow up with likely high expectation from her parents/family and in turn affect her personality to be strict/upright/compose (Not show weakness/ refusing to apologize when feeling she is in the right or her actions are in the right like killing the magic creature about to sneak attack the knights...Knights need better fking training in stealth~). But despite her strict and spartan personality Almeria/Almelia is a kind and caring girl deep down inside...Just her words/strictness often make her be misunderstood by people.
MC (Serina) is her future waifu and pretty much the only person who shown the most kindness to her and know Almeria the best(Which is cute but kind of sad), Serina been raising Almeria's affection points non-stop with her clumsy clueless Gal flirty lol XD
Chapter.8 shows off how Almeria was forcing herself and just hearing MC(Serina) wish for her happiness and for her marriage to the prince finally broke her weak minor facade of trying to stay with her noble upbringing and duty when otome heroine MC confront her about Serina...Hearing it in reality just hurt different and the idea that MC(Serina) won't be there with her forever when marrying the prince hurts.

I just hope Almeria parents won't be too much of a pain to deal with after she broke her engagement with the prince (The only reason Almeria is even going along with the engagement)...Honestly Almeria could have put some kind of spin about how she is justified in breaking her engagement due to possibly almost dying...and if that route doesn't work then she just need to gather enough wedding funds to run away with the MC(Gal/Serina) or secretly gather power (Both money and social power) to overthrow the royal family if they try to force her to still marry the prince in the future...

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The so-called Villainess is 70% ojou-sama archetype (Just missing the ohohohohoho laugh)

Nope, she's a 100%, the laugh is the first thing she says, right there one the first page. And there. And a tiny one there. And there. And over there. And even there.

She's a 300% in my book, minimum, given how she's singlehandedly compensating for the first volume of the anthology.

I stand corrected it seems, my bad lol~

I guess I missed all those Ohohoho laughs from focusing on the other stuff like her cute tsundere like stuff combined with his confident Ojou-sama attitude and spirit. It much easier to notice the signature laugh when watching anime compare to reading manga/comics XD