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Wait, did this always have so little comments? I could swear it was around a thousand, maybe I imagined it lol

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joined Apr 25, 2020

Aaaa, they're super cute together!!! I also love how expressive and charming the art style is, all the different faces and expressions the characters do are great. All in all I love this manga

17hunter00
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joined Apr 25, 2020

This was great! Really cute and hilarious too. This is proof you don't need many pages or a whole series to develop a couple of characters and a dynamic so long as you keep focus on what matters (altho I want a series of this)

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Fatale Game discussion 30 Jul 12:29
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While I love Battan I feel this manga is just so over the top, I really liked the realism and real-life struggles that were portrayed in RAWMG and none of that is here. Still, I'll stick to it, for a while but I'm not feeling this rn

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joined Apr 25, 2020

yeah that feeding scene was quite lewd

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joined Apr 25, 2020

I have a feeling something's gonna happen in Ema-chan's birthday

(for god's sake PLEASE something happen I beg you)

last edited at Jul 29, 2025 5:13PM

17hunter00
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joined Apr 25, 2020

Man seta really is the goat

And karasuma

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joined Apr 25, 2020

When is this coming back ToT

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Everlong discussion 26 Jul 23:10
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artic moneky

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joined Apr 25, 2020

Wow, sensei's hot..

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TL;DR few pages of trauma dump at the end doesnt justify/explain a problem that was never hinted or shown at all, everything was normal throughout the story and then a problem is created and solved right at the end, which make it a bland attempt at adding depth to a basically SoL one shot

also its called magical realism, a writing form that has been popular for a very long time, and a very good use of one for a short story

this is NOT magical realism by any means

17hunter00
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joined Apr 25, 2020

you know i was gonna respond to your comments but then i went and re-read the whole thing and check this out: i think the stupidest thing of them all is how she rejects the miso tako soup that the girl cooks for her and then she snaps and gets this flashbacks about her family offering her the soup or something like that but get this: SHE'S THE ONE WHO MENTIONED IT IN THE FIRST PLACE. she said her family did it that way and that it was pretty good (you can go and check it out yourself, page 14) and then it turns out that's some kind of traumatic memory from her past like what??? if it was so bad why did she mention it?

you can't deny that's contradictory at least (and lazy writing)

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joined Apr 25, 2020

seeing the anime tag, to the people who reads this, do you think this deserved an adaptation? I remember reading a few chapters when it first came out and it didn't grab my eye at all, like too many stuff was happening with several characters doing nothing at all.

but maybe i'm wrong so, what do you think?

17hunter00
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joined Apr 25, 2020

"y'see my mother... is dead" sorry but that doesn't automatically make it deep

80% of the story is spent showing the two of them flirting and having honestly pretty shallow and boring interactions with each other, like they have 0% chemistry whatsoever which also makes me wonder as to why the girl is in love with the bunny girl and why the bunny girl develops feelings for her. also, you gotta somehow "hint" there is something going on in the background. for starters, when she remembers her senpai on her school days, nothing seems to be wrong with her. if she was so troubled, why nothing was happening then? if she was so in love with her "perfect" senpai, she must have at least noticed something was off, right? well, nope

and then, throughout the story in the present day nothing shows senpai has a problem with her og personality, apart from her rejecting the name Hodaka in a very light way, not like she's super traumatised about it. and then she snaps and trauma dumps and is that all supossed to make the previous stuff deep? none of what's supposed to be weighing on her seems to actually cause anything to her. appart from the bunny outfit, she seems like a perfectly functioning person, so what was even the problem?

TL;DR few pages of trauma dump at the end doesnt justify/explain a problem that was never hinted or shown at all, everything was normal throughout the story and then a problem is created and solved right at the end, which make it a bland attempt at adding depth to a basically SoL one shot

17hunter00
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joined Apr 25, 2020

how can you have 60 pages and still make such a shallow one shot?

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Anime?? I normally don't watch anime but this is great news, now I won't have to wait months just for a single chapter update

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joined Apr 25, 2020

well, didn't see that coming, didn't expect the tenant to be a real creep but whatever

also, i re-read everything because i didn't remember and look at this long ass neck lol
https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/the_flirty_tenant_and_the_pretty_landlady_ch03#3

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well, that's definitely a twist

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lol this is great

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wow, this is art..

but really when the girl showed up I was excited and shy, like my cheeks were getting red like I was meeting the one I liked for the first time. this manga was really able to replicate that feeling of love.

oh and I love her friend group by the way

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I see now, this is peak.

17hunter00
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NICE, we need sequel

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noooo... NOOOOO DON'T PUT THIS IN FEATURED SERIES, NO ONE MUST READ THIS NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

17hunter00
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Yes, my ship!!! So cute!! Even if I relatively enjoyed the Jaspis one shots this artist made in the past, this is just superior I'm sorry

I totally agree >.< Like the Jaspis ones were good but I just love these guys' dynamic so much more ^_^

Edit: Yknow thinking about it a little longer, I think I enjoy this ship more because I read the other stories before this- not because of what Lapis and Jasper did to each other, but more so what Peridot does for Lapis. Once I was told that part of being in a relationship is wanting to grow as a person alongside your partner and I find that Lapidot's dynamic in this story reflects that in a way. One example I can think of is Lapis' ability and desire to cook. In the previous stories, she heavily relied on Jasper for her meals and in her absence she still couldn't make anything from scratch and had to turn to microwaveable items. And with Peridot, she's cooking- or rather THEYRE cooking together! She also memorized how to set up and use a projector which -- and I may be pushing it here -- seems like something someone with her personality couldn't be bothered to do. She also seems to be making slow progress with her lingering attachments to Jasper, and so it's nice to see how Peridot is helping her feel better about 'em. I know the author literally spells out this concept towards the end of the book but idk I think it's really sweet. lolol

Yeah, it's how they worked in the show and it's why they work just the same here, they help each other grow and that's great, also Peridot is a dork so that's great too lol I love her character

17hunter00
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joined Apr 25, 2020

Yes, my ship!!! So cute!! Even if I relatively enjoyed the Jaspis one shots this artist made in the past, this is just superior I'm sorry