The way this progresses from 4koma fluff to high-level dirty talk is so potent. I don't think I've read anything else structured quite like this.

I'm kind of boggling at the idea of these two being a crack pairing when I've read a fair amount of fanfic with them. Songwriter-composer is a pretty natural combination and there's lots of ways you could justify them making a connection.

Actually didn't know that Umi was a songwriter, almost all of what I know about LL comes from dynasty scans dot com. The pair definitely makes sense in that context, though, it just comes off as crack when depersonalized like this.

I like the way the artist not only chose a crack pairing but also one they don't seem to care about at all. This is peak yuri-as-commodity.