Once again religious bigots are destroying people's lives... who would've thought.

I'm glad it worked out in the end. I like the over the top expressions but the execution could be improved a bit.

omg I was so scared at the end. Even though everything was pointing towards them ending up together, the creepy vibe of this series made me doubt it until the very end...

Amazing read, it really warmed my heart. Why no kissing though???

Also I wonder what Amy has been doing for 8 years? And Fiona too, she was earning a living as a piano teacher, and living in the same town. I feel like one of them could have reached to the other one waaaay earlier.

well how do we know it's a marriage of convenience?

there could be a variety of other reasons.

A bit awkward at moments but overall very sweeeet :p

shit is getting crazy

nail clipping together huh....that's a nice activity :D

pretty depressing, I wish this could end on a lighter note...

Who knows any yuri incest (or pseudo-incest) fanfiction that is not elsanna (since I've probably read all of them already)? It can be any fandom I don't care too much...

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I'm not sure how bad trump will be but when you look at his vice president who is an uneducated homophobic catholic conservative piece of trash, there are good reasons to be scared...

I'm afraid the popular girl is straight, and MC will be heartbroken :'( so sad

holy shit this was really good. powerful and emotional.

I think I need more stories with runaway girl

Are they sisters or not??

They're not. Thai also uses honorifics. That was the equivalent of older girls and women being called onee-chan in Japanese manga.

Yea that's what I was thinking, but I wanted to be sure (you never know :p hehehe)

Are they sisters or not??

that was really hot, please make more angel x devil

Ok but it was a bit selfish that only the queen was being satisfied all the time?? What about taking care of your cute servant from time to time!!

say what you want but I'm enjoying this a lot... The author should just focus on the main relationship instead of the crazy ex or whatever she is.

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I don't think this site is a good choice for trolling.

Not gonna speculate on whether they were actually trolling or not but it's not too difficult to feel bad for him

I certainly don't feel bad at all.

I liked the first two chapters a lot, but it should have stopped there... This doesn't have the potential to be a series.

Or rather, I kept thinking how instead of focusing on the MC, the story should have focused on the three girls and the love triangle. It would be a pretty decent yuri story on its own tbh.

best chapter so far

the plot was a bit too absurd for me to enjoy...

...but it's incest so it's fucking awesome!

Stop criticizing the doctor, I'm sure she will take care of the girl's problems. After she takes care of her other "needs" :D

She is a human too, just because she is a doctor doesn't mean she will behave like a saint with infinite wisdom...

As believable as some parts are, the pace is terrifyingly quick (though it does seem self-aware about this, so that's nice at least).

The progression does not seem too fast for me...

I expected way worse from the tags and the comments. I hope at least they will be good moms?

This might not be cheating but it feels worse than cheating.

But I liked it because I am emotionally masochistic.