^ This one’s pretty good, I’ll come back to this one.

First Place!

last edited at May 2, 2020 6:18AM

^ Yeah, artists cheat by using high heels in their drawings to even out the heights of their subjects.

It would be hilarious for some cross-over yuri to occur somewhere.

^^ yeah, too damn dark. Letters look like gibberish graffiti to me.

I wonder where in this drawing did the artist first start? I think it started at the point of where the lips met, then the artist branched out from there in a symmetrical sort of way.

^ Thank you for pointing this out. Now if only the “next” and “previous” buttons are somehow added in...

I still believe the “Yuri”-tag doesn’t apply to this manga. Since nothing has been going on, romantically, this far into the story, this tag should be omitted.

I also believe the “Age Gap”-tag doesn’t apply here neither as the roles of elder and youngster isn’t as clear cut as other mangas out there.

Eh , what? Next chapter is last chapter?!

But I still haven't seen Haru mischievously flirting with Midori ~~~

That would have been a bit cliche to me. This mangaka’s writing is more grounded due to the stresses both have been dealing with: loss of parent, strange kid moving in, crap at school, and generally some Aaaaangst of staying/leaving. Both had to grow up fast.

The flirting hasn’t occurred yet because the time of grieving isn’t over yet... it takes at least—AT LEAST— a year. Given enough time, it could turn into a (Ken Kurogane)-type relationship culminating into a punchline of “The Aristocrats!”

I dare say that there should be more of these NSFW illustrations featuring different hand positions—it’s as informative as Sam Kinison’s advice on using the Alphabet....

last edited at May 1, 2020 7:08PM

^ Nah, they’re both young at heart! But thank you, Mr. Otaku, for clarifying that. Feel free to make the suggestion—I doubt they’ll grant it by this point in time after uploading.

I hope the letter says something like "I wish Haru was my child with you" or something silly like that

"...So that's why I'm leaving everything to you, Midori. Please take good care of our daughter."

“Because the rest of my family doesn’t give a shit about her.”

What a shame... next chapter is final one. Well, there goes any future prospects for this manga—no OVA, no publication stateside, this one’s been snuffed out too soon (cue Elton John’s) “like a candle in the wind.”

I feel sorry for the Uploader who was taking pride and pleasure in sharing this work only to have this turn into a disappointment.

The mangaka should go freelance and publish her work on her own terms with the help of a publicist or literary agent.

I doubt Seven Seas will pick this one up due to the rushed ending.

Oh, and the editor for the magazine that this manga was published in should be demoted.

By the way, what is that hand position anyways?

Ralphie May, comedian (deceased), mentioned it in his last dvd standup act. I remember he used it to close his routine.

Using lots of ink!

Plus one in the stink!

(Kudos to the artist!)

Ye shall be healed!

Hey, her lumbosis still makes her look sexy! She’s not even a grandma yet!

Holy lucky lingerie, Batman! It was a planned effort, looks better than the color coordinated Wonder Twins!

Still going strong! (Lovely work!)

UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

^^ It’s Chino’s Nosferatu fingers! I mean, this is Cthulhu stuff, right?

Well, I hope the original mangaka doesn’t get pissed over using their intellectual property, but I hear such plagiarism is welcome as a sort of free advertising for the original IP over in Japan.

I’d like to see such mature content for MC in canon; however, it would detract from the author’s intent of showing how their relationship improves over time.

When the readership makes loooong comments over a long period of time, it’s a good sign this manga will be going places.

Aya is in trouble. Sei is poison. A cute cautionary tale about what happens to isolated teens using the internet irresponsibly.

This isn’t my favorite manga but the story itself will sell Lots and lots of copies.

last edited at Apr 25, 2020 9:03PM

^ thanks for the rim shot!

^ I guess that’s why it’s “Ecchi”!

Well there goes the manga. Gotta change tags now...