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joined Apr 20, 2021

I just don't have any patience left for these time-skip endings. A time-skip epilogue? Sure, but I'm so tired of these borderline form letter endings where one person leaves for X period of time and then the last chapter is their reunion.

Well it wasn;t really like that. Everything was resolved in chapter 14 without any timeskip. It was just kind of extra to show their future and Kyou changing as well.

joined Apr 20, 2021

Does this qualify for "Idiot couple"? I feel like it might.

The kid's not an idiot; she figured out what was going on, right away.

OTOH wtf is the anatomy here https://dynasty-scans.com/chapters/i_wanna_spoil_yoroizuka_san_ch08#10

True, if every series MC was so insightful there would be no drama at all.

But besides that idiot couple usually refers to when characters are in what 100% looks likea couple relationship but they themselves are not even thinking about that (like School Zone) or when it is a comedy and they act like idiots for sake of being a comedy (like Tadakoro-san for example)

joined Apr 20, 2021

If this turns into Air Master I am out.

Air Master was a great manga until the rape+pregnancy episode at the end... and I don't think anyone understands what possessed the author to do that stupid shit.

The anime is way way better, among other things because no such end.

I hate to ask, but please elaborate.

I take it you don't know the story neither from the manga nor the anime?

Well, the setting in both is that there are underground tournaments where streetfighters compete for glory and prizes. Maki, a tall, moody, tomboyish schoolgirl, is one of them. She's the main character, a streetfighter nicknamed Air Master.

Several people are romantically interested in Maki. Her friend Mina is the most noteworthy, she's a sweet, feminine, beautiful girl with big breasts. In the anime, Mina is Maki's main love interest. The best story arc in the anime is the Black Society arc, where the leader of a street gang kidnaps Mina to make her his slavebitch and Maki has to fight through literally hundreds of minions to get to the bastard; then she defeats him and rescues Mina. The things they say to each other, after the battle is over, make obvious that Maki returns her feelings.

In the manga, Maki never seems to take Mina seriously. Maki's other suitors have bigger roles. One of them, a tough guy named Sakamoto, is a total psycho. Every time he fights Maki, he tries to rape her while they fight! In their last fight, he comes very close, but Maki stops him before he succeeds (or so it seems). Then, in the last arc of the manga, Maki and other streetfighters face an otherworldly monster named Eternal. Lots of supernatural things happen during the fight, including the appearance of a mysterious girl from the future who helps them defeat the monster and then vanishes again (she returns to her timeline). In a shocking final reveal we learn that the girl from the future is the daughter of Maki and Sakamoto! It turns out that, in that last fight, Sakamoto did manage to rape her a little bit—just enough to make her pregnant. In 9 months, Maki will give birth to a girl who, sixteen years later, will time-travel to the past and help her mother beat Eternal.

This development was not well-received by many readers. In fact it's been called one of the worst endings ever.

Lol, waht did I just read. This makes all the weird endings in yuri with the plot of "MC's love interest disappears with no info on why, then 2-3 years later MC and love interest meet again by total coincidence and hook up" look as a great ending.

Was there any consequence of that whole rape thing? Or it was like well ye that happened and that was the ending of the whole thing. This is so dumb it is amazing...

joined Apr 20, 2021

It was a good read, but honestly the way how the supernatural angel part was handled was pretty meh. It was introduced and then almost completely ignored until last 3 chapters. The other 18 chapters could stay exactly the same if Mikoto wasn't an angel, but just came over to find her sister.

joined Apr 20, 2021

So one of the best reads on this site has ended. What a shame but it was a fun ride.

I had to double check if all the couples and plots got resolved and apparently they were. The girls who hooked up at the inn only showed up in Chapters 1,2 and 36 so that was hard to track.

One that wasn't is Daidou. Unless I missed something

joined Apr 20, 2021

"Having known such popularity her entire life (because she's so dazzling and competent) Suzuya Sawa enjoyed the luxury of maintaining intimate relations with any woman she chose."

In yuri world, being a cool, beautiful, sexy, successful woman doesn't make other women crazy jelly. It doesn't make them seethe with hate and envy. It doesn't make them call you a slut and a man-eater.

No, it makes other women burn with lust and desire for you.

Yuri world is so great.

Well it is one of yuri character tropes of a girl who attracts everybody around. Most usually it would be tomboyish girl in a girls school setting, but not necessary.

joined Apr 20, 2021

Liked it, but would tag it as subtext since it might prevent people to feel as frustrated as I do right now XD

I don't think this should be tagged as subtext. Sure there wasn't/we weren't shown confession etc, but last pages show them living together. While it is a possibiility that "they were just roommates" it is never said explicitly, so I think it is more believable for them to be a couple.

P.s. This is kinda similar to the discussion if "A Room for Two" is yuri, but there it is given more context.

joined Apr 20, 2021

Well that's something. Here's to hoping it doesn't take the entire manga for feelings to happen, but quite fun regardless.

Well we know MC knows she likes girls, so that is a start.

joined Apr 20, 2021

hmm, the 1st half, story is good, pace is good... then later half just awfully bad "pulling rape drama, moving away, no explanation time skip" wow, then at end the middle schooler said "i practice kiss alone" WTF, you litelary saying got raped and abused multiple times in previous PAGE DUMBASS !! did the author forgot what she/he wrote in previous page ? just WOW

its like reading multiple different story, no consistentency at all.

Practice kiss is definitely weird, my best guess is that she is kinda cynical about it and played it as a joke.

The time skip here is fine story wise, I feel like. The explanation that the parents decided to send the child far away after learning she was raped by her cousin feels totally normal. Sure author could've shown how she came back and met the teacher again after graduating from school or however that went, but whatever. The ending is a bit rushed, could've been like 2 chapters instead of one but it is logical. Child gets taken away due to age - then returns later, while teacher, who is shown to never have relationships etc held on to her first love for couple years.

joined Apr 20, 2021

Uh okay, still a minor. So wait, what was all that about how she wouldn't date a minor and they'd wait?

I'm confused lmao

What is there to be confused? She says to wait saying she does not want to do smt against a law by having sex with a minor and also she is extremely shy even if she usually doesn't show it. So she is hiding behind being "a good adult" to hide that

joined Apr 20, 2021

@ madior she is also always running about with her tiny class mates- you think she bribed some kids and gave them instructions on what to say? or that nobody is gonna wonder at this giant girl who would totally stand out should be hanging with the elementary kids and wearing a randoseru? she would get pulled up and questioned all the time unless she really belonged there - is with her class and teachers etc.

Also no sane person who looked like that would try to pass as an elementary schooler since she looks nothing like one lol. Its not totally impossible she is lying but super unlikely - and it would be very bad writing.

She also acts like a 10 year old except when she's in cassanova mode. Just accept that she really is 10.

BTW Its rare, but some people really do physically mature a lot earlier than others-
https://outsider.com/news/trending/twitter-reacts-6-2-10-year-old-football-player-steamrolling-opponents/

and its only a manga so who cares? If you dont like the idea just give this 1 a pass- but I can almost guarantee nothing will happen sexually- its a comedy.

Actually I kinda agree. I reread it since at first I thought she acted like your usual "airhead" archetype of characters which is why i thought she might be lying (and about little girl she could be, in theory, her sister or smt. not that i'm saying hse is one), but there are hints to her being 10 yo.

joined Apr 20, 2021

I haven't read the pre serialization but could it be in theory that she is pranking MC for whatever reason? For what I know only proof of her being grade schooler is her own words and backpack unless i missed smt.

I see your desperate fanfiction is entering outright conspiracy theory territory now.

I just same as other people out here find it way too unbelievable girl at 10yo can look like that. When manga portrays 13-15 yo like supermodels I can understand it, but 10 idk...

I understand it is for comedy effect, so it is hyperbolized but still. It just makes you think if there is smt going on

joined Apr 20, 2021

I just... I like this manga, but it's just... The difference between Tae and Mai's heights and pectoral muscles are making me curious, really curious. Could it be that Mai start school late or she had a growth spurt early? I know I shouldn't try to think so hard about it but I just can't help it when Mai looks like a teenager or maybe a young adult in grade school.

As already pointed out 'bout five posts back she specifically says she's 10.

Just sayin' but if y'all need to start overriding the explicit text of the story with speculative fanfictions to be comfortable you should probably just not be reading the series in the first place...

I haven't read the pre serialization but could it be in theory that she is pranking MC for whatever reason? For what I know only proof of her being grade schooler is her own words and backpack unless i missed smt.

joined Apr 20, 2021

How did it come to "I need to move out"?

Cause she thinks that whole stalker situation will put Akebi in danger/will force her to interact with men. And since she cares for her (per her words she wants Akebi to be happy), she wants to move out, smt like that.

madior
Butterfly69 discussion 05 Sep 19:16
joined Apr 20, 2021

Beautiful book

madior
joined Apr 20, 2021

Lol... Only two pages, for real??!! Whyyyyy, at least give a good epilogue or something

16.5 was the epilogue showing us their happy life together. These are just funny extras

joined Apr 20, 2021

Idk why but while I was reading it I felt for a moment that I was reading a straight hentai

This author draws a lot of futa based on their other work here and pixiv. So maybe it comes from that

madior
joined Apr 20, 2021

Alright, this has reached a point that is not laughable or funny, got into the territory of blunt weirdness, and extremely poor executed. The characters are completely awful, dumb to a point. And I mean, we are still ignoring the fact that MC does not even belong to this timeline, and whatever she pulls here might have an consequence on her own timeline, are we? Okay, bring on the ecchi then ... if that's the best author could do ...

Well honestly I don't think that if she do something it might have an consequnce in her own timeline, why? Because i think author don't really pay attention to this time travel stuff, or maybe don't know about it that much.

The easiest way to go out of this paradox is to say that this is an alternative reality which is X years behind our reality. This is the easiest way to prevent time paradoxes.

joined Apr 20, 2021

gotta admit that's a weird way to announce you got a boyfriend

I think that is cause it is a lie. Wakana starting saying that she loves her, and if Sara for whatever reason didn't want to hear it at that moment, she made it up. Which is why it sounds so out of place.

joined Apr 20, 2021

While usually I dislike love triangles and cheating in general, I still going to put this on read since I'm curious what will happen to the sport girl, if she just dating her girlfriend for the sake of idk just coz she can then I want to see her suffer as her girlfriend is taken away

We know that Nanase confessed so I think it will be just a case of "oh I am extremely scared of anyone finding out and I will almost make it look as if we are not even friends in school".

madior
joined Apr 20, 2021

Only read the first chapter and it's cute but I'm not getting their...dynamic? Like, why did she get elbowed in the stomach?

I think that it was about Yuu joking too much about "switch" (loudly saying click) and breaking the mood for Miyu? That makes the most sense cuz in general it is shown that they are not shy at all about intimate contact.

joined Apr 20, 2021

Lol.

If they could revive the human race from just 2 people they have dna/gene manipulation to a degree where they could do the same without anyone just from dna printing and vat growing babies..

But thats besides the point I guess lol.

I remember reading a hentai manga (I Want To Leave Behind a Miraculous Love by Nagashiro Rouge) here about 2 girls surviving apocalypse and then finding alien spaceship that allowed them to make science babies.

What if that was actually not an UFO, but the ship from this story just crashed unfortunately. And it had those machines for 2 girls to make babies together, just girls in this story didn't know it was on there, since they were just thrown in there at the last second.

I know I am crazy, but...

joined Apr 20, 2021

It seems like it was axed, no?

madior
Earth Girls discussion 11 May 19:11
joined Apr 20, 2021

Kidaha and Io storyline and its development is definitely the best.

P.s. I am half surprised this did not develop into science babies tag.