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Big girls need more love!

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Summer Fuse discussion 27 Apr 10:09
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A lot of Oneshots like these feel more like the first chapter to a full length series rather then a short self-contained story. Y'know, like a pilot episode of some sort.

From what I understand, a lot of them are that way. If they are well received then they will become serialized, if not it won't have to worry about getting axed.

There are a number of series I have seen that start with a zeroth chapter, from where they began as oneshots (Though the base concept often gets changed once serialized.)

A good example is Kase-san. In fact, that origin as a oneshot is why it has the silly chapter naming; the artist just decided to keep calling the subsequent installments "Kase-san and X" and it went from there.

Ooh I never knew this, thanks for sharing! I always thought the "Kase-san and X" stood out, I think it fits though.

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Othello discussion 26 Apr 13:46
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Cute story!

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Errors

Page 1:

Despite of being an idol, I'm currently going out with someone.

"Despite being an idol"

Page 2:

I was so bored at home so I thought you would play catch ball with me.

"I thought you would play catch with me."

Page 3:

Ah, what about I accompany you until your parents back?

"Ah, how about I accompany you until your parents get back?"

Page 4:

Why did it turn out like this?!
Now I fell awkward...

"Now I feel awkward..."

Page 6:

I didn't know you like to read about sport too.

"I didn't know you like to read about sports too."

But I never see you read those books before.

"But I've never seen you read those books before."

Page 11:

Soon or later we're gonna do it.

"Sooner or later we're gonna do it."

What's weird is that I didn't notice most of these and had to actually check back to see that they were the case. Also, cute story!

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Image Comments 24 Apr 11:24
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It's a great show, cant recommend enough! (I am really hoping for a S2)

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Image Comments 24 Apr 11:22
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Cute!

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Image Comments 24 Apr 10:11
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The top ones left hand is really digging into her own knee, still hot though.

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Yeah, when she made the comment about hating birds I was confused but the explanation about what they do was really neat.

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I see no relationship between Yozora and Sena here; it was a prank so the yuri tag should be removed in my opinion.

In what world is one girl giving another girl an orgasm somehow not lesbian?

It was a platonic orgasm.

And when she claimed to be the other girls sex slave this was also platonic.

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That was very sweet, love how its such an open ending but with them together, feels like they could take on the whole world.

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Which one is which? I could see them being either role.

I know right! I'm left puzzling over this, is the dependable and cool short haired one the OL? Or is she a trendy student? Could the shy glasses-wearing one be the OL? So many questions.

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Short, but good! Like one of the girls.

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Image Comments 22 Apr 10:13
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Ok so from the third panel where she's holding the cue in both hands I thought she was going to rub it between Tracer's legs, maybe I'm just perverted XD.

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Tamamusi is the best!

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Power-dynamics like this are always going to be unfair in a relationship, student teacher is another example. If its going to be done though, the director does seem to have the best intentions and genuinely wants her to shine, even though she might hurt the girls chances with how picky she's being I like that its in the story since its not shying away from the power dynamic.

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Image Comments 16 Apr 10:01
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The author should definitely do more of these! This picture is well done and there's not enough BDSM stuff out there.

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Agreed! More please

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Image Comments 13 Apr 09:11
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Hot

Bummer indeed.

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Image Comments 13 Apr 05:29
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Sensei ship is indeed good, they were super gay for each other.

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That was pretty good, and so long too for one chapter. That whole bit where they met at the beach was great.

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Y'all need to read Fatal Twelve.

I saw this on steam. Is it good?

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Image Comments 10 Apr 11:01
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Love this!

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Image Comments 05 Apr 13:49
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Option 3: Choose them both Cocona!

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I liked how we got a few flashes from their past, was just the right amount and really added to it for me.

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This is the best.