Third place.

I thought this was one of those alternate reality in reflection, but it appears it is not. Still, the drawing and coloring in both sides of real and reflection is good enough to merit 3rd Place.

Chapter 18... PURE... GOLD...

Good thing I was on the toilet reading this, because I would have crapped my pajamas in bed from laughter!

Dick move?

^She’s taking her to heaven! (Which angel are you referring?)

That bag is on shelf heaven!

Third place.

First Place!

Second place!

“Jesus! What a mind job!”
— Cypher, “The Matrix” movie (Joe Pantoliano)

Ok, I’m confused over the hidden message on the credits page... what did the lady mean when she said, “Good luck. Girls”?

I don’t know who that lady is on credit page anyways.

I just noticed author’s name before reading... this will be good!

Edit: It’s cute. Artwork is a leap ahead of her earlier works. It will be fun to see how this turns out.

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I’m thinking there will be a time-Skip for next chapter... I don’t see how this story can progress further besides “Harem” or “Polyamory”.

Well, I said I’d wait on my judgement/opinion earlier so here it is:

Ok... this manga probably won’t be licensed and sold in bookstores, in my opinion. It’s funny, yet the artwork doesn’t shine like others have managed to get published through amazon.

There’s enough interest for it to be sold through electronic media.

May this manga get licensed for publication.

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First Place!

The shading for body contours edged out over second place. This one does need a little more background.

I’m gonna come back to this one...

Second place!

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@Throbelisk: Rule 34?

Get a BARN!

This has got to be some kind of trolling artwork. It’s gotta be some kind of test to see where the Moderators draw the line between “Yuri” stuff and “Beastiality”.

I think the Trolls won this round.

This one deserves a Dishonorable Mention!

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Riding off into sunset...

Can we just talk for a second about how it took her CLOSELY inspecting Kanda's crotch? I mean, I know she's sheltered and dense but did she really not recognize the difference between male and female genitalia?

It's perfectly fine and everything, really happy with how things are turning out, but I found that rather funny

Okay— I thought it was hilarious for the gynecologist stare with the flower bouquet... very imaginative to portray her viewpoint/opinion of a crotch watch in a tasteful manner. Yes, she’s sheltered, and I think she just didn’t have time, nor money to buy a mirror, to stare at her underside like a shady-tree car mechanic estimating costs for repairs. That’s my loooong “second” opinion.

And here’s another one: I never thought rice tits would be a turn on. Mochi is getting very good at stabbing tropes and cliches to death as there were numerous times this could have been cliff-hangered/milked for another chapter by an editor/publisher. Mochi deserves my respect and reward to end up on my favorite artists list.

Artwork is top notch. Put some color and shading and this will be world-class manga.

Second place!

What did the vampire say to the nun selling candles?

—NUN OF YOUR BEESWAX!

Boobs sagging over panel border is cute.

^ I know what you mean! So what’s the expectations for 2020s? Baldness?

First Place!

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