Fly by Yuri
joined Mar 29, 2013
That was a fine ending. Though that escalated pretty quickly to the roof's edge lol.
It did escalate quickly, but not quite as fast as it looks. Oops, I overlooked a set Japanese phrase at the end of chapter 5, so my translation was slightly off. It should have read I made my own poison apple. I want to eat it, and completely disappear. In other words, she was already becoming suicidal before being taken to the infirmary. So it was still pretty sudden, but it was triggered by the shock of Funiwara wanting to stop the pretend romance, and her thinking it meant she had been dumped. So it wasn't as sudden as it seems.
By the way, I will be uploading a corrected version of chapter 5 shortly.
Edit: Chapter 5 has been corrected. If you look at it and don't see the correction, remember to hit reload in you browser.
last edited at Feb 9, 2015 8:07PM