Why is Mel reluctant to let Lynn lead at first? Is it a control thing?

Wording suggestion: Might not need to be so direct. A lot is already implied.
"You're touchin..." might sound hotter as "Your touch..."
"H... your little fingers are so..." -> "H...your fingers are so..." , or substitute the word little for "small, slender" or "delicate"?

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