There's so much wrong with even the first chapter. My, where to begin.
First she forces her to change her appearance. She literally shapes her to her view. You call that love? I don't. Either you love somebody the way they are or nothing. Love is unconditional.
Second: how did everyone get to know they're gay. Her mom caught them? Which mom would let such information spread? She'd get shunned along with her daughters. Thet's just plain illogical.
Third: They immedietely decide to commit suicide. What the heck? I was also bullied in school albeit for a different reason. It was pretty harsh. But it only fueled my flame of fury. Suicide has never even crossed my mind. However I've considered a different more violent option. You don't want to know the details.
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