What a beautiful one-shot. It managed to give way to a happy ending after all the AAAANGST

what's the best is these two are true-to-life :3

HNNNG So cute

Holy molly. This was great. O/////O

That was nice.

Oh my gosh, this was freaking adorable and they were so in-character I wouldn't wonder if this would eventually happen in the anime (lol; just dreamin'). >.<

Heh, this is getting compared with citrus so I was curious.It turned out fine, and at this point I honestly think this has waaaaay better writing than the latter.

It isn't a "complete" work in the sense that it has little to no pay-off story-wise, so I understand if others wouldn't like this. (I'd love to see more of these two, dammit!) But in terms of execution, art style, and panelling, this is one of the best one-shots out there. Would love to discuss about it in detail sometime in my blog. :3

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This was extremely cute.

Domestic violence discarded like that for a happy ending? It's kinda cheap.

It's pretty good, but not too much aaaaaaaangst if you ask me

I'll never think of Lucky Star the way I did before....

Didn't know Taamo wrote a yuri like this!

So.. does Ogata like Niimura? It doesn't look that way to me.
But if that's the case, then it's a looping triangle, indeed.

That last line is a downer, but I guess that's really how it is sometimes. :/

Just noticed the word play in their names. Hah. This was cute~

Another idiot girl that cant confess.

She's afraid she'd probably lose Hitomi if she confesses. And Hitomi is clearly straight.

I don't know how I feel about this. I'm not liking the possessiveness and the trust issues, and I don't find the ending to be a resolution to this problem either. Unhealthy relationship in my opinion
I agree.

This is the third Love Live! doujin I read and I haven't yet seen the anime. Hmmm. This was alright, I guess?